CincyKris
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This is a must read for sci-fi fans. It is a very well-written adventure with engaging characters who grow and accomplish amazing things. Attunga has basis in Australia, but the fantastical world it inhabits reaches across our solar system.
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What a wonderful story! I was fortunate to find it over the holidays and had lots of time to just snuggle up and read. This was so well thought out and constructed, it made for a great adventure.
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WOW! I couldn't go to sleep until I finished this chapter, now I can comment this morning. I remember commenting after an early chapter that I was worried Thom would feel left behind by the accomplishments of Calen and Wirren. He certainly pulled through and, with their help, the trio saved the habitat.
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It appears the struggle for survival for Tasmanian Devils has improved, but they are still endangered. Quambi according to Google means: quamby [ˈkwɒmbi] VERB AUSTRALIAN DATED lie down, especially in order to sleep: "the combatants quambied near the battlefield that night" Very appropriate!
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I felt like they should have been whispering when they were moving through the chasm! The guys (and dolphin) live such exciting lives.
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Great tension! The rogue is smart, but Wirren is smarter! Perhaps kidnapping a habitat is enough of a trigger for the good guys to go on the offense, rather than continually playing defense.
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I like the beginning!
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Great chapter! We had a pastoral beginning and an explosive ending.
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For a while now, Wirren has seemed to not be fully aware of just how special and important he really is. He is now being forced to accept this new reality. I think he will handle it well due to his strong support system.
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We didn't think Marina and Val would have a problem with Noah, but now it's confirmed. I think Noah will strike up his courage when his parents begin speaking about his older brother. I think Brian and Gordon are doing a great job raising a 14 year old modern gay kid!
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I certainly wish that I could go back to my 25-30 year old body! But with my good old brain.
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It’s scary to imagine how K74 would use enhancements. I suspect they would use them to enslave populations to perform certain tasks. Rather than to uplift and empower, as is happening with the dolphins.
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That was an action packed chapter! I wonder at the fallout from Earth, but I'm mainly happy that they are safe and on their way back home.
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Well my hope that Wirrin and Akama would get to explore was realized, rudely interrupted. The bad guys are stepping up their tech, distressingly so!
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I'm still loving the story, but I think it's a little sad that our trio had never seen a sky or felt a real breeze. Such an alien thought to an earthling. I hope that Akama and Wirren get to experience some of their heritage.
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I do the same with business' planters and landscaping!
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Colin was a bit "fish out of water", but endearingly so. I like that Owain is not just patient, but seems to enjoy exposing Colin to new things. Now if only Colin would expose himself at the club!
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I had the same thought about Thom. The other two are experiencing extraordinary accomplishments, but Thom is not, yet. Hopefully.
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You have raised the bar with this chapter! I have a feeling Akama is going to be important! I was wondering why this story was being told from Wirren's viewpoint, rather than Calen's. Now I know!
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I'm greatly enjoying the complex world that has been created here. There is a convergence of humans, dolphins, and AI that is engaging and fun. I'm so happy to have found this over 10 years since it was posted!
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A 2am sleepy trip to the bathroom could become an otherworldly adventure!
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I knew a mystery was awaiting us! I look forward to seeing how Charlie and friends solve Nicklus’ problems.
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Chapter 21 One Step at a Time
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 21 One Step at a Time
I loved the homecoming! I know we are a ways from our guys joining the way we want, but this was a great start. A few of the other readers mentioned the lessening of tension as the chapter progressed, it was good to see. I hope the cause of the tension will come up in future conversations. They don't just need to open their eyes, they need listen, too. I have no doubt the wildings will return, they are too intrinsic to this tale!- 67 comments
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Thank you for bringing back this wonderful story. Tomas has experienced a whole life transformation over the last few months. It's refreshing to read a well-written story about regular adults, I look forward to more of Tomas and Fletcher.
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Thank you for the Christmas gift! This was a lovely glimpse of the guys’ very comfortable, very British conversation on the way to London.
