Seraph28
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That was gut wrenching!...He is just a small child but I guess during that time period, or the time period adjacent of book, nothing was off limits during power struggles.. That being said...am glad Azula's heart is the on the way to getting thawed.. I like that the boy will survive
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I nearly screamed because of that bloody cliff hanger😂 That being said ..I like how slowly with each chapter we get to see a different facet of the boys...like each boy seems to have a unique gift that just seems to be waiting to be unveiled...I was pleasantly surprised with Franz having might.
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Cian is a deity....those are beyond mortal emotions and expressions😂😂 I agree...he must be giggling or whatever it is deities do when their plans come to fruition
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Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
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Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Tragedy hits the Hayes household
Our Elusive esteemed author makes an appearance after 'eons', drops a bomb on us and I wager will disappear again..hihi That being said ...whatever Robert found out from the previous chapter must have been so profound for it to affect him the way he is ... -
Is it possible to be equal parts sad and overjoyed?..Because this is what happened to me when was reading this chapter.. Everything fit well ..what I find most satisfactory is the way you end it...We readers are given agency to imagine that eventually Arcum will be alright. That everything will revert to how it was before...That makes this more profound...You give the characters hope and in turn we readers are left hopeful that in time the light will always shine.. Thank you...can't express that sufficiently enough though..🫡
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In your defence...it's alright...You are writing a story that is medieval society adjacent...and if memory serves me right sex between males was going on albeit discreetly..It was just a no go between members of different sexes...because you know the church was ape crazy about morals and all😂.. I guess am saying in this story...you have leeway..you get some bit of slack.
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If I had to name this chapter...I would aptly call it Ataraxia...With this chapter Aiden, young as he is, achieves what folks older than him struggle to achieve...Emotional tranquility ..At least for me I see as if he has gained a bit of it .. That being said ..this was really beautiful...these two lads have such an understanding of each other it's almost embarrassing and scary. Thank you!
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I don't think it exists in Arcum....I mean Ember is 13 and he and Trillion go at it without any worries..haha
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I had a feeling today's chapter was like preparing for goodbye..
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You just don't like Severin @drpaladin😂😂....He was saying goodbye ..he is a 15year old lad who is emotionally over-strung in that particular moment..
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My tear ducts were super itchy today ..that closing part of this chapter was feels all around . Garran, I think, is the reason why people dread meeting their prospective in-laws.
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Am bereft of words!!..Like that whole scene in the cairn went over my head 🤭.. This chapter is profound...so much spoken without words... Thank you!
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Perfect in its imperfection....to seem so zen😂😂
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Perfect balance of anxiety and excitement on my part... Thank you!...That was well executed like @chris191070 and @drpaladin mentioned in their comments.. I also must say you are on a roll....and I for one am so glad for it...hihi
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You know...something definitely stinks nasty in Veridien😂
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So happy to have flustered Elion and his Holden back with us....that was a real coup...I so like .. That being said...this chapter has to rank among the best for me so far in this book.....the description of the bond architecture was top notch.. and introducing Bren in the mix makes it even more interesting ...Thank you!
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Good to have the Ksingis back in action .. As for Renn...that evil lad really has a lot of luck.. eh
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Those Bresnahans really do know how to keep a grudge .eh...'eons' have passed and they just cannot let go.. Thank you
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If you do,prepare to be 'sued' for emotional destabisation .haha
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Sev was not dumb ..he actually earned Trillion that it was a bad plan ..he only accented because he was outnumbered...on Trillion's dumb fuckery....couldn't agree more .hihi
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That was one intense reunion..I could almost feel the anger and tension when reading that
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That threat from Cormac was the most subtle threat have ever read ..eh.. That being said I like how you have depicted Rowan.. He is so 'American' ..like he really takes things slowly...No offence
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Why do I have this feeling ..Recklessness is going to bite these lads in the ass....Like when I was reading it felt ..so easy. If something feels so easy in the @mastershakeme universe then you know something 'bad' is imminent .. That being said...only you could throw in a romp in a midst of danger😂😂 Thank you!
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I reiterate...it's so good to have you back!
