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  1. Seraph28

    Chapter 6

    Now this is turning into a comedy of errors..these lads are just too hot headed ..eh
  2. Sophia...is seriously demented....now Artie...has really gone and lost it...that old geezer is such a hot mess at the moment
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    Chapter 5

    Good...finally we can have some sort of communication going on...Some much can be achieved if only people really talk to each other ..
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    Chapter 4

    What is that expression...oh yeah. confession is the balm of the soul. ..Now if only he could say it aloud
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    A-Noir

    We should come up with a name for the sleuthing duo of Lawrence and Ali..hehe..
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    Chapter 23

    Whoa...my favourite mismatched couple ...it's been a while since we met Danae and Darren
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    Chapter 23

    Finally...my favourite dwarf Plink is free..she can go wreck her brand of mayhem in Dimalos .. Franz can be a twat sometimes ..and no where is it more evident than in this chapter Now the arcs seem to be headed to convergence .All parties ,at least the ones that matter, now know seem to be on the same trajectory .
  8. Suburbia ,anywhere, is full of trauma How Christian has survived the jungle that is High school upto this point in the story without friends ought to be studied ..eh.
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    Chapter 3

    Being a teenager is hard enough..Being a teenager wrestling with your sexuality makes it even harder .. Humans are inherently social so we make all efforts to ensure we 'fit' in ,sometimes to our own detriment. The Mark situation validates that.. He subconsciously knows he is different but the price of acknowledging so is something he fears .
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    Chapter 2

    I believe that is a default setting for every youth who suddenly realizes they are queer. The journey is always the same ,it's the speed at which the realization comes that differs. That being said ...Mark is in a really dark place at this point in the story .
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    Chapter 1

    Oh my!..here we go
  12. Only you can drop such a bomb at the tail end of a chapter @Laura S. Fox..hehe That being said .. that mini-revelation cooked
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    Chapter 22

    And so marks the beginning of the downfall of a one Elyssa Monteilon. This woman has the terrible combo .Ambition and Lust/desire making her lose her wits . Why does Tac all of a sudden seem worse than the other villains ?..At least thee others don't pretend to be something they are not. Tac Temogam is a whole different beast . A kindly facade hides a ruthless and ambitious power hungry 'tyrant' This series reminds of Game of Thrones ...folks quibbling over a throne yet there was an apocalyptic threat looming over them ...It's the same here ..all these folks fighting for power, territories yet there is a supernatural threat headed towards them.. Makes me feel some bit of empathy for Isendar Vargan at this point .. at least he knows they are gnats in the general scheme of play unfolding in their universe Thank you!
  14. What a triple whammy on Nos's hands...Mate angst .Toxic parents. orion and his acolytes..That's too much for anyone to handle
  15. Vampires invented familial dysfunction in Fiction..haha
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    Chapter 21

    Oh dear ..Poor Ade..there seems no way to escape Lurk's clutches .. Am I the only one who has noticed the characters are dropping off one by one😉
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    Chapter 3: Josiah

    Teenage foibles I guess
  18. Thank you for offering us a seat on this ride @mastershakeme..it was splendid !
  19. I have never wanted to see a character brought down to earth so badly like have wished for Sophia since her introduction .. That woman has a warped mind...her delusion of grandeur ought to be studied..eh
  20. Now that is how you channel Elsa and literally Let it go.. This chapter I was expecting like crazy. .and it lived up to it. That coming out scene is just so.. beautifully cathartic!...Am still thinking about it even when I write this.. You outdid yourself with this one @mastershakeme
  21. Jesus...it seems you are hell bent on having us @mastershakeme Uber frustrated....you and Owen . In a way I personally empathise with Owen ..it's not easy shaking of shackles that have held you for long..He is just 18..and an only child at that.....the burden of responsibility and expectation is literally a millstone around his neck . Thank you!
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    Chapter 20

    I like how each chapter lately ups the tension...Each chapter dials up the degree of danger for the protagonists...in the previous chapter it was Josel and Bartos ...in this one we get a foreboding ...for all mankind in this universe .You really are on a roll lately 😜
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    FINAL CHAPTER

    Yes..now bring on the next series😜🤭
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    Resonance

    If you have read any mystery titles,it's always those 'nobody' characters that end up being quite significant in the plot...it's because nobody pays them attention..I like to believe Abelard fulfills that..
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    FINAL CHAPTER

    This chapter validates the 'good things happen to those who wait'...it was not just a book for me...these characters I lived with..hihi.. The chapter leaves me bereft of words....thank you!
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