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  1. Seraph28

    Chapter 20

    Damn..!....you disappear for a while and you come back to drop such a bomb on us🤣🤣...This is class I emotional torture... That being said ...it's good to have you back!
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    Chapter 35

    This chapter was crazy stuff!..Sometimes ,when am quiet after reading a chapter, I wonder what the real life Orange man-child would do if he got a chance of reading this story..😀...The way you have aptly captured him in writing in this series is just so on point...The bluster , the ineptitude ...everything so well captured. Thank you!
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    Chapter 2

    This chapter is all about growing pains .eh
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    Chapter 34

    Good morning to you Sir.. Sorry about the car alarm being a nuisance.
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    Clever Seer

    Finally....this is getting pretty interesting. ..Jack charmed a goddess ..oh your little minx🤣. That being said..I have a feeling things are going to become a lot more perilous for them.
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    Chapter 30

    His delusion of grandeur is something else
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    Chapter 30

    I had not considered that angle...Since the US is the only country that has ex-presidents being called by addressed with the title...
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    Chapter 30

    Oh no...the Orange clown actually okayed it....you go back and reread the Mar-al-lago sequence of the previous chapter...I could be wrong .... The little diabolical miller whispered into Trump's ear
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    Chapter 30

    It's the small matters that always end up being important... That French Lieutenant could just have placed the Carters in peril... And that young American corporal could just have upended their mission. That being said...I like to believe being a soldier has to rank up there with the most 'problematic' professions....Where you have to follow orders/make decisions that are against one's morals. Thank you!
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    Chapter 28

    Blimey!....I wish tomorrow could get here sooner.....the feeling of realising that your 'invisibility' is just an illusion must be a terrifying one..
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    Chapter 28

    I reckon the Orange man-child is going to have one mega apoplectic fit!.....I would give anything to witness Miller's realisation that his dastardly plan has been thwarted .hihi
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    Chapter 28

    Good morning Sir..
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    Chapter 27

    Good to have the Geek-in-Chief finally on board the campaign trail.... This Miller version is even more despicable than the real life one.
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    Chapter 25

    Good morning Sir
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    Say It Out Loud

    This chapter for me is when Lyn finally comes out into the light.. When he finally understands that love requires one to be bold enough to let go and be vulnerable.. It's been a wonderful journey for me to see him come from an emotionally 'closed off' young man to the man we meet in this chapter. Very well written @Laura S. Fox.... Thank you!
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    Chapter 24

    We are well rid of that pesky pest that was Tom Graves..
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    Chapter 23

    Squash Graves Already. . let him choke on his ambition .... When I saw Stephen Miller ...had the sudden urge to be dipped in acid..just to wash off the revulsion I felt
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    Chapter 23

    Good morning Sir
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    Chapter 22

    God!...Graves is a pesky rat that doesn't go away..haha
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    Chapter 21

    Oh God...it's early days yet but I think am liking Peter Mitchell...A whole lot...You sir are outdoing yourself these days🫡.....he is good...not scratch that ...in another world Peter/Andrew/Enrico/Will would be a formidable team...Scary as hell ...then add Jared/Lisa/Caleb/Brody...and our resident geek-in Chief Yani to the mix and you have such a crazy unbeatable team ..they are all crazy smart/intelligent and outstanding in their respective fields.. Thank you!
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    Chapter 21

    You have aptly captured it ..I think I saw a speech by the Leader of Greens in the UK..Zach Polanski..he mentioned something similar...though in simple brutal terms ....the biggest obstacle to social progress in the world is the billionaires and their enablers, the politicians.
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    Chapter 21

    I pity the phone that is going to face the wrath of the petulant man-child..That touch screen is going to be in a world of pain🤣🤣
  23. This chapter for me just enriched the previous Present day one....it's clearly illustrates the depth of affection that Alexander had for Lyn.. I feel like this chapter demonstrates that despite everything going on with these men in the past, in that particular moment when the photo was taken ,their friendship was profound...They were 'hiding' from each other sure, but when it mattered(in the small moments) they showed up for each other.
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