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I had a feeling this would happen.Must admit it hits harder now that it has happened. Dottie Umbridge must get something back for what she has done to these lads. It's been a good ride Mr Lydon

This is beautiful chaotic poetry.... @CasualWanderer82, only you can manage to beautifully enspell us in one scene only to throw a curve ball in the next one.. I have burnt through half of a box of tissues 😂

That is the Imperial court for you!.It's a dog eat dog world..

It sure is not...but we have read countless stories to know folks like Baker ...something feeds that hate .it comes from somewhere ...He is definitely gay and I like to believe he must have been sexually assaulted himself ...

Now that leaves us with a quandary on our hands...on what you Saint name is .😂..Saint Jeff does not sound scary😂

And here I thought you are saintly !..Good to know you are just mere mortal after all..😂😂😂

Is the ruler wooden or metallic?😂

Couldn't have said it better...😂

Wait...but rise like a Phoenix is a common phrase @Jack Poignet. Is there limitation on phrases that can be used here?I am clueless

It is scary when you two titans gang up on little me😂😂

Well you hinted at rising like a Phoenix in my last chapter comments....someone is definitely messing with me😂😂

Eh..that is some intense fore play😂😂

I clocked it ....my internalised homophobia angle was spot on...Am guessing there might even be some trauma in Timmy Baker's life..Internalised homophobia does not just crop up in someone ...there is always an underlying cause for it....Not that I make excuse for the git anyway😂

The famous 'Let it go' moment or the thawing moment when she thaws the snow?😂..Either is acceptable

So says the master of evasiveness😂

Reading this chapter reminded me of the Battle of the five armies from the Hobbit movies...Carnage and death. you did give it an apt title indeed...the sky did indeed fall.. Thank you !

Thus ends the sad tale of Family Greene. Thank you for this offering ..I have been greatly enlightened about abuse after reading it. That being said I feel like the roles were reversed at the end ...we begin the story with Bruno and Daniel being free, while Peter and Lucian are prisoners of their traumatic past. The story ends with Peter and Lucian free of the shackles of their past. Both elder brothers are healing and hopeful for the future...Daniel and Bruno on the other hand are shackled by their present. Beholden to each other through a corrupted bond .They are prisoners of their Co-dependency . In the end Peter, Lucian undergo a holistic transformation while Daniel and Bruno remain stagnant.. Oh..if I ever need a tarot reading ..at least I know who to contact😂 Thank you for sharing this tale...Hopefully more are coming😉

You gave that lad life long trauma 😂....Am sure you must have left a mark

Oh dear....that seems rather daunting ..😂

Were you thinking in Snape's voice too when you wrote this😂

You just had that that great idea now?😂😂...I have been hoping that you would do that even for this one...but I remember you mentioned it's a bit tight.😂...Honestly we could really use two doses of this ..Mondays and Fridays 😂..

Franz is the POV character in the next chapter. Damn...that is a nice way to start my Thursday.. Having our budding adventurer back makes it even more exciting...I yearn for the day when that gang is together ..Franz,Josel, Darren,Bartos,Danae and Zdain...I don't know if everyone is as excited as me😂 Thank you!

Well..that is the whole point of living dangerously😂😉...Chaos is an aphrodisiac after all...at least for some😉

God!....faceless really is relentless....if I did not know better would say they are having a boner for Zal😄😄😄.. Hopefully awaiting next week's update...all these side characters(villains) are good distractions...but they pale in comparison to what our heroes' scenes Thank you @Lupus

Good morning , It has a certain pending farewell vibe to it indeed .....we are all the more grateful to you Sorr,😉