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Some misdeeds are not quite simply unpardonable...

Whoa...then I guess my reading list for the rest of the year and more is set😂 Thank you!

Chris did after all warn him...Noah deserved better than having a half of him..

It was indeed enlightening . ...now I want you to take a long earned sabbatical ..for a mind cleanse😂😂.....This is pretty dark stuff ...especially the beginning of this chapter .

Oh God!...can we start a guessing game now ..?...am dying to know who was in the toilet getting his salami licked😂....Me tinks it's our resident homophobe...Timmy Baker....just guessing😂😂

Will start with : 6...I almost considered Chris too...but then I thought that would be like Matteo-Jace all over again..I feel like it's too close to home ..Jace and Chris are best friends...it would be also sorts of weird.. 5...Maybe folks change..I do not know why but I feel like Jace is redeemable....plus if the last scene is anything like I imagine ...and Matteo really goes Alex Forrest on them...well..you know how Fatal Attraction ends😂 3...My money is on Jace's Mum...That woman is going to loathe the day she carried Jace to full term😂😂...Boys do after all mostly become their fathers.. 4....There is no happily ever after for those two...I agree with that ...Jace is selfish..but he does have some scruples...Matteo on the other hand ..eh

Wait...say what?...we have ourselves a sequel..you Sir just made my bleak Tuesday..a little more lighter now 😂

Our in-house Sleuth strikes..😂😂

Very much so ..he did warn us that Noah would alternate between the stages after all .

Well Noah did call him selfish, manipulative and weak......there is always a thin line between love and hate...I think we are about to be introduced to the dark of deluded Matteo.. @Cane23...there is also that part where Jace has not exactly been honest like he claimed to Noah ..You know the part about his past with Matteo....that is a ticking bomb...that is inevitably going to explode at some point...When I read that part was Jace is really a coward like Chris called him..He is such a wuss!...At least Noah gets to call him cheap 😂😂

Oh dear..explains a lot now😂😂....That boyo sure is going to drown in his self-delusion. so mark my words

Eh..he was not being serious when he was reading the Manual..if he had applied himself more..then he could have understood it more clearly😂😂😂....plus am sure there are movie libraries in his locality...he should have just gone and borrowed some movies like Obsessed, Fatal Attraction..Unfaithful...that way he could have understood that being a mistress is detrimental to one's health and life😂😂😂

Now everything makes sense..I wondered why your characters seemed complex..You write with a scholar's flair. When was reading Sinjin 's dialogue with Hugo, I noticed it had a vibe I get when am watching C-dramas..I mean Chinese dramas. The Wise Sage imparting knowledge to his way-ward and hot headed disciple in a calm and scolding manner...that is the image that popped up in my head of those scenes between Sinjin and Hugo...so when I see that you lectured at Jinan University...am like damn you must have picked up some tricks of Oriental disciplining😂😂

Maybe he lacked comprehension...and he could use some more clarification😂😂

I did warn him😂

With this chapter you morphed into a philosopher😂😂😂...Careful though, I might start thinking you going to 'abandon' us for academia😂😂... I liked how you incorporated the Philosophy of choice into this chapter. .a nice touch, sorr.

I believe it to be more nuanced than that...You watched the Matrix movie?...I think this chapter was the iteration of the Red and Blue Pill scene from that movie..Like the ever Sage Sinjin Said...it's a matter of faith and choice.... Mr.Lydon you are something else...but then again you already know that 😂😂😂😂

Oh you bad one😂😂😂....Did you have to go there?..You are not afraid of being offed in some alley for your honesty😂😂... Now that you mention it the Matteo situation is similar to the Queen who shall not be named ..They both were first loves who had to leave their man because of circumstances....only Matteo is just cray cray and obsessed now.😂😂

At least shit has boundaries..😂😂...Chris is utterly without any.

Oh my God!..what did I just read?..I have read stories over the years but this one takes the price for having the best case study of Co-dependency. When I started reading this story,I just wanted to see these young men get healing ,get someone to fight for them and to see Bruno Greene to account for his deeds. This is one dark tale and ironically the people who got hurt the most(Peter and Lucian) are the ones who get a happy ending .I know you said there would be a resolution to this but eh.This is...wretched😏 You validated what my old High School English teacher taught me..Stories are meant to entertain and educate us.. This story was full of lessons indeed. It is a story about the lies we tell to ourselves to hide from the truth(Daniel)..It is a story about abuse(Emotional and physical) and it's cost on parties involved. It is also a story of how sons do eventually turn into their fathers(Daniel).. It is going to take me time to wholly dissociate from this...eh 🥹.. To think this really happens in some places and to some people makes me start to appreciate my Dad a little bit..Even though I do not have a good relationship with him.. Thank you...now do us a favour and rest..😂😂😂

Oh you poor poor deluded child ...you could not just leave it alone...Mistresses never run off into the sunset with their man..they are meant to stay hidden, a secret..How could Matteo not follow that cardinal unwritten rule😂😂😂. I like to believe this is the chapter that Matteo completely morphs into Alex Forrest from the Fatal Attraction movie...in the last chapter I felt sorry for Noah...now am scared for Jace, Noah and Rain. Deluded Matteo just gone full blown obsessed and loco...It never ends well...

I like to believe every gay/queer person has life long PTSD from religious fervour.. Some of us cannot seem to escape it .... As for Killian...you are creator...tell us😂

My God!...my Mum is right...I overthink sometimes...😂😂

Am Matt..a little sensitive with that aspect of life to be honest.. Personally I thought he is implying that having Matt want more than just sex is good ..I took to mean his past relationship(s) were more carnal minded. Like some folks get into relationships because of the sexual exclusivity and so the relationship revolves mostly around that...We have seen that Matt likes to engage more with Gray...and that seems a novelty to Gray. I could be wrong .Maybe @Robert Hugill could enlighten us..

Occupational hazard ...would not negate your formidable sleuthing😂