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"The Cookout (Part 2)"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout (Part 2)"
This chapter brought out every emotion known to man for me - laughter, tears of joy and heartache, sadness, disbelief, anger - you name it I felt it. You're such a gifted writer @CasualWanderer82. I'm flabbergasted by Daisy's knowledge of Cash's unrequited love for Jackson - I just didn't see that coming and that alone shows your gift. I now see Cash falling for Weston (hopefully he makes it?) and am cautiously optimistic everyone gets their happily ever after. I have no idea how many chapters are left but for me this has to be one of my most favorite stories I've ever read and I'm a voracious reader. Thank you again. -
What a morning on the pitch! This story gets better and better with every chapter!
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"A Boy Made Of Quiet"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "A Boy Made Of Quiet"
What a shitty life Blake endured growing up. It's pathetic kids are treated that way. I agree with @austinbiguy - you definitely outdid yourself on this one -his mysterious demeanor reveals his guarded upbringing and the will to survive. He is worthy of love and has a good heart. He's just got to realize that Jackson is worth the risk and Lord have mercy on him if he hurts Daisy's pride & joy! -
"The Cookout" (Part 1)"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout" (Part 1)"
My eyes sure were watering during that scene between Daisy & Blake. Daisy loves her Jackson with ferocity and knew he'd been struggling with who he is and even though she had to be disappointed she did what a fiercely protective mom should do - give Blake a good ol' talking-to! I hope Blake takes her advice!- 16 comments
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Entertaining story - unique!
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YES!!!! Glad our boys finally got their magical first kiss! Jack's parents infuriate me! Great chapter @LittleBuddhaTW!
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"Driving Miss Daisy"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Driving Miss Daisy"
I just can't get enough of this story. Love me some Daisy Bell!!! Cash is a great friend to Jackson. Good lord that barbecue is gonna be lit! -
Yay, another great chapter from my @Krista! And thanks for the early release of the last one! At least Joel impressed Colt and I kinda figured Trace would instantly know Joel didn't hit a rock. Joel has to know his 2 worlds will collide more as there really isn't that big of a distance between his old town and new one. I'm curious as to why his baseball coach hasn't visited his old house. Can't wait for more!
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"Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
I'll keep it G rated.... goodness gracious what a 🔥🔥🔥chapter that was!!! I've eagerly awaited the union of those hot Southern boys and did you ever deliver!!! Thank you @CasualWanderer82 for a scintillating story! -
I feel for Nick and glad he sought help. As if the teen years aren't hard enough to navigate, he's had significant emotional trauma that he's not dealt with - which again as an angsty teen is weird since your emotional development is happening and you don't realize certain feelings are having an impact on your overall health.
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Glad that Simon arranged the cafe meeting to clear the air. I too thought that Eli was referring to Rowan as the "he" who died. Interesting to see if that's who it was or if that's too obvious?
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Nick has an amazing group of friends!!! That assembly felt uncomfortable for me and I'm just an innocent reader. Love this story!
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Elijah's a great guy - Simon's lucky to have him in his corner. Powerful chapter!
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First of all, you could never let me down. I enjoy your talent too much. I agree the nuanced interactions helped guide it along. Regardless of how the pace may seem, you're doing a great job of letting the story breathe.
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I love this story more with each new chapter! I think Noah is just horny and has had experience and wants to have that bond with Nick but at the same time he's too controlling and everyone sees through his facade. Nick needs to talk to Mr. G in confidence about the abuse Jack endures although he probably knows about some or all of it, or to his mother. Looking forward to what happens next!
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Fantastic chapter! I feel like something significant is going to happen at the falls and I can't wait to see what it is!
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Great chapter! I cried during the coming out scene - probably because I've been struggling with accepting my sexuality for way too long and am deciding when to come out to my family. But anyway, thoroughly enjoying the story!
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Great chapter! My heart aches for Joel. Love Trace & Celia - whatever the future holds for Joel, I could see them being a source of guidance and support for him. Interesting to see how the dynamic with Gavin/Davin/Colt fleshes out and where Joel decides to attend school.
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Love it! Sky's internal monologues are the best! The similes and metaphors are superb! Falling in love with this story more and more with each chapter!
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My Closet Had Better Lighting Than My Future
Modified Cub commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in My Closet Had Better Lighting Than My Future
This story is fresh and just... precious!!! Love Skylar's witty sarcasm, Lex's boldness, and the mom reminds me of Sheldon's mother! Stories like this would make fantastic TV series! -
I'm totally invested in Joel's story and can't wait for more! I adore your stories @Krista!!!
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Outstanding story! Loved all of it! Great job!!!
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Between Shadows and Light
Modified Cub commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Between Shadows and Light
Fantastic chapter! Each one is better than the previous! Loving it! -
Awe, nice chapter! Good to see Keith thawing out more and the proposal scene with Jim & Jon was real and honest and so sweet!
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"Hands In The Dark"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Hands In The Dark"
This story is so... everything. I can't even properly express how much I love it! Daisy is a gem and I love all the southern dialect and the descriptions are chef's kiss. Thanks for another great chapter!
