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Chapter 5 Island Boy Games
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 5 Island Boy Games
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I’m thinking Ain is hallucinating there at the end. It’s not Fenn who is helping him. It seems like his body was fighting off whatever the intention of the blood clotting process was.
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Interesting start to the story, and quite the delima for Karl.
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Seems like Brant had a crush on Sky and really wanted to make this movie with him, even for a straight boy…
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Nice cliffhanger after a day of fruitless interviews.
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I wonder if Sev’s father is Zereth? This would be his 2nd child trying to destroy Arcum? I really like Caelo. He is direct and trained in old Fae knowledge. He is probably going to be very useful in the research part. Glad Trillion reached out to Ember and thanked him for saving him. He is slowly seeing what his attitude about the bond has done to Ember, and Ember is still there for him.
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I love Pip, he is so comfortable about himself, and just honest about his dealing with others and their issues, specially with Charlie and Taine. It’s funny he dated the daemon….for 300 years. Hopefully he can help Charlie. Matt is amazing, he wants this poly relationship so bad, truly a free spirit. No jealousy there at all.
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Ray definitely has something going on mentally which caused him to treat Charlie badly at work. Nathan and Martin’s attraction to each other is amazing. The 2nd dinner date was good as they really got to know each other before doing anything sexual. Nathan is taking it slow, and Martin while disappointed agrees. The restaurant is going to be fine and the way they handled it will probably be for the best with no legal issues.
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So the mysterious man who knocked Scott out and searched Gabriel’s apartment goes to the hotel and finds Gabriel’s hidden stash and puts it all on his bed with the cross from the safe. Who is this guy. Is he Yakuza too, but on a different mission? He kills the Yakuza that attacks him, too. Lonnie’s friend calls in a panic of what happened after the facial recognition triggers a system alert… what is Lonnie going to tell Sean now? Gabriel/Robert, is Frederick’s target, he was the guy in the garage trying to shoot him, is he the only one with a contract from Mahmet to kill the senator and Robert?
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How does Alonso keep finding them. Is Rhys somehow connected to this?
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Although Ember was in deep, he figured it out and got himself free then went in search of Trillion. He was the only one of them who got trapped, and got himself free without help. He is not weak. Trillion is beginning to realize this. Sev is part Fae? Who is his father? Will they make it out before the wards reset? Whatever this corruption is, it’s in everything magical they have encountered so far, and that’s really scary. They need to find a way to reverse this.
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Ain seems unusually weak. Is it because he’s not been in the sun?
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Beautiful ending to a very emotional story, lots of depth to the characters, their tenacity for life and the need to be better through it all. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Caelo sees something in Sev. Not sure if it’s good or not…
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Chapter 2 - How It's Going
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 2 - How It's Going
Communication is so key to a relationship, even if it feels a bit transactional for a bit. Loving this story. -
Chapter 21: Are some relationships too broken to fix?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 21: Are some relationships too broken to fix?
Damn, one ploy twist after another. Dean and Julian are together. Nathan grows a pair, an the mystery that Sebastian brings to the cliffhanger. -
Scott wakes up. It seems whoever the attacker was didn’t really wasn’t him dead, just access to the apartment that he got. Scott’s more terrified that Gabriel will want him dead…. I think not, but he will be angry. Tomorrow will be an interesting day.
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Ember is more powerful than they knew. That battle with the wolves was fierce. Trillion is feeling the bond more, the the discovery of the weapon cooled that.
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“The Room You Were Built For”
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “The Room You Were Built For”
Max is very good for Daniel, he is real, he is accessible and he loves him and they have known each other for a long time. He is not Malik, never will be. Malik was the catalyst that opened Daniel to who he truly is. Alec and Nora are good for each other. Will be interesting to see where it goes. -
Chapter 3 Boy Meets Dreams
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 3 Boy Meets Dreams
If it’s real, where has the missing boy been? He seems like a player, but could have let his roommate know something. Those dreams were pretty vivid. And the professor. Does he have the same issue? Or just realize he has a group of horny teenagers that are in his class? -
A Family Reunion In Italy pt. 1
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A Family Reunion In Italy pt. 1
After a loving morning, the boys find out they may have an inheritance coming… hopefully that’s true. -
This gets more interesting, John can’t remember anything of his life before gettin through the mist. It seems like Sneth did something to him before the first battle, and the Elves did something to him sending him back. I think he needs to get the amulet back before proceeding back to the fight…
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Is Charlie going to confess about finding the butcher shop and what happened? That would be an important clue as to what they are fighting.
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The Dark Inside Your Heart
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Dark Inside Your Heart
Theo is getting memories back of how he was tricked before. The noose around his neck matches the card Jack absorbed. Vince is keeping them on track. Hopefully they reconnect soon, and figure out the mystery.- 17 comments
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Glad Kitt made the decision to go home. The send off for Mateo was good. Maybe thy will have a joint family Thanksgiving.
