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Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
Hopefully Melvin gets to Tweek quickly, so much suspense in this cliffhanger, -
Chapter 5: The Net Closes
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Net Closes
This depression is really debilitating for Jonas. Hopefully being out of the city will help. They escaped with their savings. Maybe the estate has gardens and woods with things harvest and to hunt. So they won’t starve. -
Great story about coming out in a bigoted family, Marshall was a great example of positive change.
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Great beginning. Love the banter between everyone. Seems like isolated data was a bad idea, or possibly deliberately done because of the financial impact of the resources on the planet.
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Luke is definitely being flirty, but what does he really want?
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Crazy family dynamics, keeping secrets just to keep up appearances. Glad he sorted it out with his aunt.
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Very nice short story about coming out.
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This seems like Xavier thinks this is the only friend he has ever had, and wants his friend’s life to be good. He is also afraid that if they ever met in person he might get rejected, and can’t handle that.
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Wow, the Sherrif got a very nice reward for his service.
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Miles finally going to get some closure on his trauma by trying to find his sister is a great thing, and Troy is very supportive. Christmas on the ranch will be a great time.
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Great visit to see the children in the hospital. They finally accepted the best friends moniker… now to more…
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Chapter 20 A Year in the World
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 20 A Year in the World
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Chapter 27: The Search for Tweek pt. 2
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 27: The Search for Tweek pt. 2
The great escape. Now to get to the location of the original Zodiac. -
They can see and hear each other tonight and Jack is chosen even after the devil’s speech.
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The morning was delightful. The business meeting in the afternoon was interesting. Cian is working towards what he wants in buying into the business. They worked well together on that.
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Chapter 36 ~ Kindred Hearts at the Ranch ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 36 ~ Kindred Hearts at the Ranch ~
Excellent chapter covering a very difficult topic. CC related her journey to get to the ranch, letting Bass know that he and Kidd have more support for their relationship and overcoming Kidd’s trauma. We learn more about the amazing people on this ranch every chapter. Mannly’s interest in some of the aspects of “the life” and his naïveté were interesting. -
Edward held himself from indulging Lord Wrexham. And subtly lets him know he knows he’s a cheater. Jonas had a very bad night, and met Will. Edward is not going anywhere, he has something he is aiming for.
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Amazing. Kent makes the first move to go to see Randy. Then got to see him in his element with family. Then Kent asked him to stay the night with him. So beautiful.
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@Wayne Gray this beginning is very interesting. Embedded AI assisting humans. Looking forward to where you take this and who form bonds.
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Cade and Sable have indoor shoes, and their feet are not used to walking so much, so blisters.. the drive has info on Sable’s ability to decontaminate water and make green things grow. They experience this with the stream, collect some water, then are drinking it later. Jared and Cade talk about the Order and Dominion, and that they may want to capture Sable. They are attracted to each other.
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Seems like Royr lost someone on another mission and could not save them. Fortunately for Adam, Royr knew CPR and got him back. even though it was not a kiss, it was lips on lips and Adam has feelings. Royr may too…. This encrypted file is hard to break into, and Adam is not giving up.
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Hector’s response was very mature. H has been in a relationship with Juanita long enough that it was serious. From the conversations she has had with Sky about this she is fully aware of where they at. So Hector and Juanita have some discussion ahead. At least they have all been upfront about this possibility all along.
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What a tragedy that Julian faced with his client dying on his watch, even though they did everything right. Oliver will be there when he gets back from Paris. Julian must have been a wreck internally when Oliver hurt his ankle.
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Slowly they are moving closer. Noah doesn’t refuse assistance with the tire, Jackson is upset and retaliated when Noah is injured. It’s fun observing everyone around them being subtle about their non-relationship…
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This is a very moving chapter, starting with the pleasant dream, then the description of the traditions of honoring the deceased, what a lovely way to honor someone and let the living grieve too, Jilian is loaning and is surrounded by very loving people, especially Daniel.
