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Levi is doing the questioning that Matt recommended and it seems to be working. It seems a good choice to go into Thompsonville for lunch and tour around before going to the house. It is an amazing tranquil place. The house and access to the beach will be a new experience as well.
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Owen on this app seems to be slowly getting into it. Cole seems like a nice guy. But his life is so different from our deeply closeted main character. And he’s not a biker guy. Just someone safe to converse with?
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Boom, there it is. Now Alvarez has to make up his mind and quit dancing around Devon. Does he really want a relationship? Or just the idea of a relationship? It haven’t been mentioned what their sleeping arrangements have been since getting the saloon.
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Love the Clap clinic nickname. Did Neil think gonorrha was the main STD to be concerned about? That conversation is always something to be careful with.
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Darn, Wylan did not recognize his friend. Hopefully Darian wakes up, or some other of the vanguard sees Eric fighting? Dieter is hilarious. Are they keeping him?
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Jasper, got Damian to close the interview with the reporter. They’re going to get a big lawsuit. Who new Ryan had this Dom role play in him? The next chapter should be interesting.
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The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
Vince was quite tormented, surviving the Lava, and now seeming to have a good spirit guide, he does not trust, but who could blame him with all of the schemes the evil forest had going on? Jack finds the lord of the underworld. Is he with the wolves who want to go underground? Jack seems to have a way of being found by beings wanting to help him…. Theo is in trouble, fighting evil branches by himself. -
XI. Match made in Hell
VBlew commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in XI. Match made in Hell
Finally. That revelation and subsequent kiss seems to have them on the same page now. Logan wanted Nico possibly as much as Nico wanted Logan. Looking forward to the next chapter. Which door do they choose? -
Manly woke up for a little bit and got a little water via ice chips in. Hopefully after all of Jake’s talking he wakes up again, feeling a little better. At least he knows he’s in a safe place.
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We finally learn how he lost his magic. Wonder why his uncle had wanted him hurt or killed. Who was the mystery savior?
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Nice bet. Marc had absolutely no intention of loosing. The next scene should be really hot. Marc has to show his best off. Hope Frank is ready.
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Nice ending to this book. I am so looking forward to more of these guy’s stories. They are in love. I hope you don’t leave us hanging here.
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Total filler chapter. Little B is so mature… Chase is a very comfortable big spoon.
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Margot is fantastic. Putting her boy out there for the world, within 100 miles, to find.
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He was selected, but for what? Isaac is missing, hopefully still alive.
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So bits of Ishan’s memory poking through to Erik. Maybe more will come? The disguise is good. But will that make him unrecognized by Darian… hopefully not of the others will recognize him.
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Typical Bavarian Breakfast
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Typical Bavarian Breakfast
Wow, nice breakfast! Such a hot scene. They really want each other and seem very physically matched. -
IX. And you can’t hide from your feelings
VBlew commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in IX. And you can’t hide from your feelings
Nico, why don’t you just admit to Logan you’re attracted to him.? -
It seems I’m going to be a dissenting voice about chapter length. One of the things I have loved about your writing, is that you just write until the chapter is done, no matter the length. Granted some chapters are longer than other authors entire stories. The quality of your writing is amazing and I’ll read whatever is written. This story is starting off like so many people’s lives, others planning their life, expecting the child to continue on in the family business, never asking if they are even interested in it. And he knows he is different, so that adds even more pressure. Looking forward to college for him to be away from this toxic environment.
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Devon doesn’t have to worry about his 3 brothers in this town. They are incompetent at robbery, have no weapons and seem not to know about money. He is so much better than them. I think they will come into town and be very surprised by what their brother has done for himself. Love Genevieve, that was a great bet. Hopefully Devon will follow through. The town is getting used to them.
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Aled stood up to his brother and Harry stayed. Noah is a whirlwind, and very caring.
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Ryan did great standing up to the parents and kicking them out.
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It took Josh’s prompting, but it looks like Frank really saw what he was like, being a jerk to everyone, especially Marc. And if he was going to have the opportunity for a good relationship. Needed to fix it quickly. Will see if it sticks.
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Charlie specifically selected him because he was gay. That has to say something about his openness. This Karen is a frantic mess.
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Was Shayna responsible for little man’s attack, just to try and get close to Jake, or just taking advantage of the bad situation? Hopefully he wakes up soon.
