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The zip lines sound like a lot of fun.
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Brant still trying to be cautious, even after getting hard kissing Sky. They need that testing to be completed soon…
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The bond is getting stronger. Sev is outed to Trillion. Still the denial that Zareth is his father. Ember and Trillion need to discuss the frequency modulation of their bond to throw off the effect of the bond breakers. Hopefully that person shows up soon.
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Petre is very angry with Fenn for hurting his friend Ain. If the punch earlier was not enough, he is going to torment him now with the idea Ain is dead… just to test his truthfulness. Hopefully they don’t make it too long. A depressed Fenn will not be able to help them very much.
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The place could be like Lourdes, without the Virgin Mary. But would it heal without someone like Cianán to activate the water? What was in the vial did heal Aiden. Wonder what the analysis is going to reveal. And then there is the existing mythology around the place already.
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Prince Trillion acting like the prince he wants Ember to admire.
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Chapter 27: After All These Years
VBlew commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 27: After All These Years
Great ending to this story. Seems Alex got what he deserved for being a c—-. Love that Oliver bumped into Cody on the day of his job interview. -
A Two Man Job, Part Three of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in A Two Man Job, Part Three of Three
Amazing story, an part three really capped it off. The coming out was a non-event. The parents were amazing. The rift about the apartment was resolved when Rami finally thought through, Dan was disappointed, but did not force the issue, seems like talking about it more before signing the lease would have been less costly, but sometimes you need expensive lessons. They are in it for the long haul now. Possibly gentrifying their neighborhood… -
This is sounding a lot like Trillion’s parents trials, lost their supplies, but kept going. So they will catch up to Trillion and Sev and have some very strong conversations…. They are still missing the 5th person in the song, who will be the bond disrupting force.
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I’m with @drpaladin I think they left by another door. Typical drug dealer, free sample then the victim is hooked and will do anything for a fix…
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Chapter 5 - Challenges
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Challenges
That was a big surprise, boom you’re taking over the project…. And staying until it’s done. That may be good for their relationship for now. More communication. Occasional visits, and Evan is still in school, so he needs to focus on that too. -
So, Ricky was the person behind the door at Joyner’s store. And he had convinced Alexander to be the one to come back to the site after hours to get the artifacts to sell. Bridget was an accidental shooting. Still did Ricky have others involved who would have killed the professor. We do now know it was two different killers.
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Success, failure & a challenge
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Success, failure & a challenge
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So glad Petre changed their mind. Also maybe they can make an antidote for the green potion. And once he’s off the influence, remove his control collar and bracelet. Maybe they could get that green potion to the queen and control her?
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Ben has an interest in Riley beyond what he had for Kier. Hopefully this trip will teach Riley he is valuable, and possibly cared for. Much beyond being beaten or molested as a 10 yr old. The stepfather’s in for some real pain, and possibly death, if Ben’s past actions are any indication. But that would not be good for Riley to witness…
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Why is Brant asking for testing? Seems like he wants more than simulated sex…. And wanting to have sex with a man is definitely not straight….
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This thing trapped Jack once before the veil, and he escaped, maybe he can get them out of this again. This all seems like an illusion to trick Theo into doing something that will really kill his pack, it’s like they are trapped somewhere just out oh reach, and whatever this trickster is is trying to manipulate them into taking some action, that would not be in their best interest.
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Kent is not surviving very well. Dumbass seems to really apply. Marines are supposed to be smarter than that. He needs professional help with his trauma.
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That was scary for everyone, seems like the portal’s malfunction did not transport Trillion and Sev to where the Helmsfirth people went. The corruption put them in a limbo space. And Trillion is continuing to notice that Sev knows things no ordinary boy would have known. Ember was brave and kept going even through the disruption in the bond.
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So, Mr. Hartley speaks Latin too. That is something he has in common with his grandfather. Sabrina is done. Slightly sad that Taine and Charlie are not becoming boyfriends, but then again Tyler doesn’t like sharing, just gave them space to figure it out.
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Kent has an amazing friend in Marvin, who seems to know exactly what he needs. And is definitely interested in his body.
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The Mole That Burrows Deep
VBlew commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Mole That Burrows Deep
So it seems Karsa had finally a vision of his mother’s murder. -
Chapter 5 Boy Meets Her Again
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 5 Boy Meets Her Again
Maybe he’s bi, but leaning gay… but at that age just the idea of sex at all will get one hard. He didn’t use a condom… bad boy. -
Lynix was awesome at finding out the info on Sabrina. Getting the contract. Now they can turn it all back on her. Wonder if her father knows about this? Matt is going to be hilarious in this new job. Selling mystery meet to demons.
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This well may save Declan’s leg but it will come at a price of the knowledge being revealed. Michael apologized. He is still a friend.
