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Chapter 5: Domestic Warmth
VBlew commented on anatta707's story chapter in Chapter 5: Domestic Warmth
They finally get a heart to heart. Even if Adam can’t admit to being a fanboy… and now even more attraction. Wonder what Royr would do with an AI of Adam? -
David was very open about the tragic death of his son. While it was discussed when they were making Lying Low, this hit harder. Wonder if Hector is going to be sobbing as he calls Sky?
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Oliver is learning French by reading Julian’s novel.. he needs to practice speaking with someone willing to be patient with him for good pronunciation. This is something he is doing to get closer to Julian. Hopefully this settles the situation with his dead client for Julian, it’s torture to have to relive this pain all over again.
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Sable has a natural ability to heal, but did it in his sleep. Boars are dangerous and they got unlucky having 2 in the same area. Unfortunately the spores made them have to run away from the area before they could do anti useful with the dead animals. Like cooked meat and possibly made shoes from the hide…
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Great chapter. They are finally talking about their lives outside hockey. Still baby steps.
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Wow, something was definitely not right with Mark. Even with the proper shots, one can catch something that will put you off. We know he lived, but living through it can be scary.
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I keep wondering about the named house that Evan owns but doesn’t live in, if it’s closer to where Cian lives, will they ever move into it?
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Loved the sci-FI short. They got away from the corporate thugs. Now to find a home and continue their work.
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Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
Hopefully Melvin gets to Tweek quickly, so much suspense in this cliffhanger, -
Chapter 5: The Net Closes
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Net Closes
This depression is really debilitating for Jonas. Hopefully being out of the city will help. They escaped with their savings. Maybe the estate has gardens and woods with things harvest and to hunt. So they won’t starve. -
Great story about coming out in a bigoted family, Marshall was a great example of positive change.
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Great beginning. Love the banter between everyone. Seems like isolated data was a bad idea, or possibly deliberately done because of the financial impact of the resources on the planet.
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Luke is definitely being flirty, but what does he really want?
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Crazy family dynamics, keeping secrets just to keep up appearances. Glad he sorted it out with his aunt.
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Very nice short story about coming out.
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This seems like Xavier thinks this is the only friend he has ever had, and wants his friend’s life to be good. He is also afraid that if they ever met in person he might get rejected, and can’t handle that.
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Wow, the Sherrif got a very nice reward for his service.
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Miles finally going to get some closure on his trauma by trying to find his sister is a great thing, and Troy is very supportive. Christmas on the ranch will be a great time.
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Great visit to see the children in the hospital. They finally accepted the best friends moniker… now to more…
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Chapter 20 A Year in the World
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 20 A Year in the World
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Chapter 27: The Search for Tweek pt. 2
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 27: The Search for Tweek pt. 2
The great escape. Now to get to the location of the original Zodiac. -
They can see and hear each other tonight and Jack is chosen even after the devil’s speech.
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The morning was delightful. The business meeting in the afternoon was interesting. Cian is working towards what he wants in buying into the business. They worked well together on that.
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Chapter 36 ~ Kindred Hearts at the Ranch ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 36 ~ Kindred Hearts at the Ranch ~
Excellent chapter covering a very difficult topic. CC related her journey to get to the ranch, letting Bass know that he and Kidd have more support for their relationship and overcoming Kidd’s trauma. We learn more about the amazing people on this ranch every chapter. Mannly’s interest in some of the aspects of “the life” and his naïveté were interesting. -
Edward held himself from indulging Lord Wrexham. And subtly lets him know he knows he’s a cheater. Jonas had a very bad night, and met Will. Edward is not going anywhere, he has something he is aiming for.
