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Kai is emotionally messy. River is not helping, and Fly is off in his own world right now.
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Everyone in this is very up front in their conversations. There is no hiding anything which is really refreshing.
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We definitely need this now.
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Love the competitive nature of these guys. They probably don’t realize they are making each other better.
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Beautiful chapter, Niran was fully accepted into the family, and not much happening outside for now…
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This chapter was great even if it felt like we were moving at a very fast pace in time. Levi still undecided in his sexuality but more comfortable with it now.
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Chapter 18: The Wrath of Karen pt 2
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 18: The Wrath of Karen pt 2
The rescue mission went well. They need to cloak and get out of there. -
Sky has no problem doing this kind of physical labor on the farm. Wyatt is still conflicted but did kind of turned on with the muscle worship.
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The suspense is amazing. Cat and mouse. Ending in the cliffhanger of Will being captured. But the fact that the mercenaries are speaking English means they could have been infiltrated by the Italians….
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Loved the ending. Looking forward to their next adventure together. Finding more guardians.
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Chapter 19 Grouse, Chickens, and a Pry Bar
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 19 Grouse, Chickens, and a Pry Bar
They just keep uncovering more things that are better than they ever expected. Seems like this second house and barn is like what August had imagined he was going to get, and maybe even better than that. These guys are building a family, and it shows in their honest communication.- 40 comments
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Justin, I really feel for you. All of your stories are amazing, and the writing is incredible. Please continue to be good to yourself. I really love this story and will read everything you post here. I’ve been missing these guys, and this amazing universe you’ve created. So when you’re ready, I’m sure I’m not the only one who will appreciate it.
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Right so for future reference, no lunch times with sexy men telling you about their sex scenes before you have to film one yourself.
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AI can be wrong? I’ve heard that it hallucinates, that would be wrong depending on the topic.
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Lemaire was an absolute gentleman throughout the entire thing… coach is right they are all on the same team now.
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What a delightful afternoon for these two lovers.
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Seemed he found someone he wants to really connect with, who may be dying.
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It was bound to happen sooner or later. Tyler does need to talk with his teammate and get some perspective. Peter is not putting up with being in the closet…. Tyler needs to decide what he really wants.
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Chapter 33 ~ Welcome Home, Moon Child ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 33 ~ Welcome Home, Moon Child ~
Mannly, fully awake recounts what happened to him. And something he didn’t remember before was the man with the cane. It did seem like the eagle was warning Mannly, but maybe also attacked Cleatus, which saved him. Kidd saved Jo from being hurt. Seems like this was a time for the younger ones to protect themselves. The foresight to hide arms around the property came in handy. Kidd is overwhelmed with his gift of the boots from the owners, and he and Bass have decided this is their home. -
Martin finds he really likes Tyler after getting over his past, an acceptance of the apology. It was mostly in his head, and they had a good time at the concert then out dancing. Not sure what the trip to Chicago did other than terminate the relationship with Filipe which was not working out anyhow. looking forward to the next part.
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Is Karl married to Maria? Or are they just living together because that just what happened and was maybe expected? Tom seems like a nice guy.
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There is an ease to this chapter, coming down into a valley, with a small town. Oliver watching Julien be with his friend in French, and seeing a side of the man he wants to know more of. The distinction between Julien in his native language and in the 2nd language of English that Oliver gets most of the time.
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Seems like this was a great family day. After they got through the stress of the social post…
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There are some really good conversations in this chapter, and Hector is coming to terms with his sexuality and how he feels for Brant and Sky.
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The hazing seems really unsettling. Paul did give some warning, but not much.
