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Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE ART OF BREAKING
This explains so much about his relationship with Hughie and Jesse. They have a very long history together. I can see why he took Hughie with him. They can’t really be separated. Hughie is his friend through everything. -
Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
Found. Even knowing how far the disease has taken Mickey before, will he be ready for what he finds? Jesse is amazing. Grandma is relentless…what 11yr old wants to talk about their sexual development? -
Marc is being patient, and keeping up the running.
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Wow, Ryan was spiraling into depression, Blake was not helping… Jasper was MIA and just shows up and wants a call boy?
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I think this will let him help Shiloh. Like others have said, it is anonymous Shiloh had no idea that it was Noah’s foundation. Is Chase temporary or is it longer term? Noah is comparing them, but really didn’t have a lot of time with Shiloh before crazy things started happening.
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Wow. That was just, wow. Mark is done, Jillian is done, it’s all broken. Tragic.
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This looks like just the opportunity they needed. Callum while obviously attracted to them, seem genuinely interested in helping and he’s in a financial bind himself.
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Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Who killed Robert Hayes?
Jilian is innocent. Interesting that Roberts phone is still missing.. anyone try finding it? That’s probably a big clue to who murdered him. This family has been a circus from the beginning, it just gets worse with the funeral. This twist with the Will is very interesting, nice cliffhanger. -
Frosted Hearts: The End Part Two
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The End Part Two
A dramatic ending to this book. Both of the main characters are injured and recovering. They will be better together. Hopefully Percy works on his PT and gets all of his motion back. If not, finds something else he is passionate about. -
That was a huge disappointment, going to all that work for a meal to get a txt that the person you’re going to all the effort for has no idea about. I don’t think Austin is going to be able to leave.
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Very fun short story. They both had a similar wanting to get out of the small town they grew up in. Orville having experienced the world sharing that with Jim.
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I do wonder what Noah’s reaction to finding out Colt has basically told all their friends they are dating will be? He is very controlling.
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Arrogance leads a charge to find a larger opposing force.
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Part 13: Nothing Held Back
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 13: Nothing Held Back
I’m wondering what happens after the wedding? Will they want to stay together? Or is this just for the wedding? Does Nathan know they are gay? Did he set them up? -
Barnaby is amazingly resilient at the changes to his travel plans, the boys should be grateful for his arrival.
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He is taking his surfing experience of failing and succeeding into this experience. Fueling the improvement.
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Over the River and Through the Fields
VBlew commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Over the River and Through the Fields
Interesting that Sakis finds a picture of a former summoner in this house of his current summoner’s grandfather’s. -
Chapter 3: THE ART OF INTERSTELLAR SHOPPING
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: THE ART OF INTERSTELLAR SHOPPING
This chapter reminded me of a slapstick comedy of errors. They get away, but with no supplies or parts. Is the transporter fixed? No real mention of what was repaired… I keep hoping Hughie will get them reconnected with Isiah and Dimitri, and Gremlin too. -
Beautiful ending. Nice that they had their honeymoon at the cabins. I can see them being great parents too. Looking forward to the sequel.
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The parents are absolutely horrific. No way Ryan should leave. Especially after that conversation at the studio, clearing up a lot of baggage.
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So well written, death and dying are hard things, and bridging new relationships at the same time. Wow. Maybe in the grief Levi will open up.
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Frosted Hearts: The End Part One
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The End Part One
Ira and John are in for a world of trouble. Percy will not be merciful with intruders intent on hurting Five. I knew Ethan had been hiding in the house. But using Percy’s code should have been a tip-off for it opening areas that Percy was not physically at. Hopefully the concussion is not too bad. -
The journal could provide more clues to who would have wanted to kill Lukas. Interesting that most of the king’s court are gay…
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Part 11: Not Just a Rebound
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 11: Not Just a Rebound
Theo doesn’t want to mess up this relationship. They are both wanting it. Troy spoke first, and got a positive response. They were not going to ignore that kiss. -
What a journey. They will be there for the twins whatever they need. Will be interesting if they finish school in South Africa or move to Australia and finish there. At least they don’t have real estate to deal with no mention from the lawyer about the size of the estate left and if there are funds to provide for the twins future. Hopefully there is insurance to cover things.
