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Still Standing in a Field
VBlew commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in Still Standing in a Field
These men are slowly letting each other into their lives, and it’s a beautiful thing. -
Lovely anniversary party. Seems like Juanita and Hector have been talking. She pointedly got Hector to say what he was feeling about their relationship.
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The photographer got them talking to each other.. baby steps.
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Kent is home and recognized how his perception has changed. I am surprised the neither he nor Randy have reached out yet.
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They’ve both been interested in each other. It was just that Tyler situation to deal with. Hopefully this isn’t just a rebound and they can make more of this relationship.
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Chapter 20: The Subspace Relay Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 20: The Subspace Relay Episode
Guy and flip got the info to show command who this Karen really is. Probably more damning than their prior info alone. Moving Cole to the first officer role is a good choice. -
Chapter 21: The Distress Call Episode.
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 21: The Distress Call Episode.
Seems teens no matter the species want to have fun. And maybe misbehave a little. -
Kai was picking up clues about the game, but still hasn’t connected the dots. They are already good friends just don’t know it in person yet. The animosity seems to have died down.
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Very interesting. Elliot is not yet facing his attraction to Danny after the spanking session, and then the licking… hopefully the promotion comes through.
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Damn, what a chapter. Kaleo is perfectly nicknamed little boss. He analyzed the situation and took advantage of the situation gathering intel that later proved very useful. Gordon was an arrogant fool. Niran got closure on his father’s killer. They make an amazing couple. Now that they have experienced the worst, hopefully can build an amazing life together.
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The building of the initial relationship was quick. They followed the protocol of the time… Don’t ask don’t tell was a terrible policy. But a huge step forward from prior policy. It seemed the possibility of killing young civilians was a breaking point. Benjamin still carried the love. I almost wondered if Caleb was Alexander’s grandchild…
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The conversation with Robbie was telling, she knew he was beating himself up. Troy meets Marco Polo. Dinner was awesome. Troy obviously has feelings and kissed Miles. Now what is Troy going to tell Owen? I don’t think Owen will be surprised. I still think he is off with someone else, but when will he tell Troy?
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Beautiful ending to this story. Be well.
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The accolades for the song drop were amazing. Don’t get why he was so nervous. And why he drank so much… but it ended up Ok. Damon is a thorn in their side that won’t go away… but at least it’s not a secret.
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Chapter 11: The Queen of Queens
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Queen of Queens
Andrew is keeping the pain at bay in this exceedingly flamboyant display. Amazing way to infiltrate a highly homophobic command environment. Targets locked in a missiles on their way. It’s going to destroy the compound. We know the get out but it’s going to be tense. -
Karl is going through a metamorphosis with Tom. He is fortunate to have found such a gentle person.
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Chapter 19: The Wrath of Karen pt 3
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19: The Wrath of Karen pt 3
Hopefully Karen doesn’t destroy her ship in the nebula with all those crew members innocently standing by. She is definitely having a mental break. Zodiac now has new crew members. Let’s see how they put them to use. -
I loved the brief Noah and Ash section. Kai is being really honest with River about his feelings. Now he needs to do is Letts slip that he likes playing the game that he and River are playing online not knowing that they are competing in each other. River does seem to be loosening up a little bit.
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This ending of this chapter after so much good in the day was devastating. Jullian is surrounded by people who care about him and will be with him through the grief. There was something up about Sam not being there by Christmas….
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These guys… kiss and make up already.
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Chapter 10: The King of Kings
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: The King of Kings
Will took his diplomatic training to making the video. And the Italians found where the convoy ended up. So now Andrew is pivoting to the distressed extremely flamboyant spouse of the Envoy to potentially create a distraction. Looking forward to this. -
Chapter 13: Caught in the Undertow
VBlew commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 13: Caught in the Undertow
They are getting really deep into this relationship. That was a very hot scene. Is Ash so beat down by his father that he lacks confidence? Noah seems to be enjoying their time together, I have a feeling he really doesn’t need help studying, it’s just an excuse to be with Ash. -
Chapter 32 - Some Resolution
VBlew commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Some Resolution
Jonathan’s rescue was interesting. But odd that he didn’t want a copy of the video, and didn’t want people to know he had been at the beach. The police seem to have done their jobs well in two cases. -
What a beautiful ending. They are so in love, and now planning a family.
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That was quite a surprise. It does seem like they worked through their emotions. Martin got quite the role reversal from his fantasy thoughts… seems like the oust sex conversation cleared the air. Hopefully they can continue their relationship. Sounded like whoever Tyler’s ex was he looked like Martin…
