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Interesting fight. Rafe found out that his opponent was stronger than he looked, and Andre was not hurt like he could have been.
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This story has started off really well. Looks like it will be a fun journey.
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Maybe Andre can get to Rafe before he gets into too much trouble. Sounds like meeting Lindsay is a very good thing.
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2. Step by step (I'll get to know you)
VBlew commented on gor mu's story chapter in 2. Step by step (I'll get to know you)
Great chapter, it’s nice to see how supportive and encouraging Lauti is. The backstory of his love of motorcycles was nice too. -
1. (Facing the Sea, waiting for you)
VBlew commented on gor mu's story chapter in 1. (Facing the Sea, waiting for you)
With this posted I went and read Southward, before reading this like you suggested. Looking forward to where you take the boys now. -
So glad that Robbie was not seriously harmed by the OD. What a strong character to show so much forgiveness and compassion as well. Loving this story. The world would be a much better place with families like this.
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Donovan is in big trouble, attempted murder….poisoning someone just to give your son a way up, when they’re not qualified. That’s going to devastate the son too. Hopefully the medics have what they need to counteract the allergic reaction.
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Great chapter, out exploring the campus, finding some interesting characters, and a party. Wonder what kind of party it will be?
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Great chapter, looking forward to the wedding.
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What an amazing story of two people looking for love, and finding it in a very remote place. Loved the two spirit part. It’s such a shame that the old was were so repressed by the new religion. I traveled to Alaska a few years ago and learning that the children had been taken from their homes to be educated with no sense of their ancestors histories was very disturbing. They now have projects to recapture some of that, but a lot of damage was done.
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Some good development. The boys are getting along, but maybe not progressing as fast as one wants. Opening up is sometimes difficult.
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I like the way your continuing on with brothers raising brothers. That Brandon and Rhett relationship is different from the prior version too. Looking forward to where you take this. The whole family is so loving and support each other, that makes this so good, even with the challenges they encounter.
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That was an extremely emotional chapter. That kind of abuse to deal with while raising children and protecting them from it must have been very hard. Glad they are back together and things move along better in their lives.
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Interesting chapter. I wonder if Jacob is not really imaginary. And something is going on with Annie. Overall a good weekend with the kids so far.
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It’s crazy how much abuse this family has endured. They continue to love and support each other in such a loving way.
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So angry at Abner, who at hind of deranged person does something like that. The phone call must have gone through… glad the caught him before anything else happened. Here is to a better future.
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Yes!!! Finally. It seems like Jason came to terms with his fears. And Devyn is enraptured with the Love he feels from his mate. Sweet dreams boys.
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So I’m wondering if this aberration with the kids powers are drugs or someone psychically attacking them. This is a mystery that needs to be solved quickly. Glad John is much more positive in this chapter.
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I agree with weinerdog there has to be another way to access that power. Blue lasers, wonder if they would freeze things?
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Alec needs to start communicating with Finn or he’s goin to loose out again. Finn is still is into him. I really hope they can make some progress.
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Very interesting that the school promotes fighting as sport, and they let that happen in areas outside the normal sparring venues… or was that just for show to get Rafe more interested in the school? Andre does need to learn some skills it seems, even if just to defend himself.
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There was a great progress in this chapter, they really do seem to be communicating at the end. Curious to see what this restart will be
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Now Is Always The Perfect Time
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Now Is Always The Perfect Time
That last bit about Jonathan’s family being all about appearances says a lot about where his thinking has been. He still needs to see the light about Maddox really wanting to be in an out and proud relationship with him. Hopefully that happens soon. And to realize that they are both up to being versatile rather than strictly top and bottom…- 29 comments
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Glad everyone is healing and out of the hospital. Sounds like it should be a relaxing time away. Hopefully we’re sone with Janet. But there will probably be some more drama in the future.
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The title made me think that the hope was for a relationship with Finn…. And there still may be. They need to talk. But the getting his Mother out of his head first seem a better approach. Now to see where things go from here.
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