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So much trauma from the abusive parents still lingering. This is a step in the right direction.
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A Family Beyond Comprehension
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in A Family Beyond Comprehension
Action packed, wow. Just added to how dysfunctional the happy family really was. Seems like with what Colin was saying Alan being like Jake, the photos are of Alan with another man. -
Chapter 18: The Specials Summit, Part I
VBlew commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 18: The Specials Summit, Part I
A very interesting display of their abilities. Not liking Deadnus at all, pure malice intent on getting rid of Dani it would seem. I think he will surprise them all. -
Another great chapter. Arric and Kieran’s relationship develops more with some rules of engagement. Interesting possible lead with another previous associate of Eike being guilty and needing rehabilitation. Hopefully there is a clue to track him down.
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Confronting the Lies, Hammering Home My Destiny
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confronting the Lies, Hammering Home My Destiny
What a huge twist at the end there. Very glad Cody is going to get back with Luke, that was a raw deal, especially now that we know Ethan’s death was faked. -
Seth has a lot of emotional baggage, but it seem Noah has had some too, and is farther along the healing, coping path. Great chapter. Looking forward to more to come.
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Another amazingly well written chapter. I felt like I was right there with them, and wanting to tell Mitch to open his eyes to the love of his life standing there to be by his side no matter what. If time is short, it’s best to enjoy it and leave no regrets.
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This switch into their own bodies in the other world is very interesting. Lookin forward to where this goes
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That was an emotional roller coaster ride. Still not knowing how Nathan is feeling for Jason other than as a best friend…
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So some progress on the mate part. The missing notebook is troubling, Jason will have to redo that research.
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Great chapter with a lot more out in the open, and some emotional healing happening. StrikeLight, perhaps a taser?
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Rotten food? Or poisoned food?
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Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
Another great chapter. Seems like Mitch is much healthier in this environment with something to look forward to. It’s amazing how healing good friends and something to look forward to can be. Most of my homes have had a sage ceremony, that is good to clear out anything that you would not want around too. -
Chapter 15: The Five Specials
VBlew commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Five Specials
I think the awaking boy is Dani. Cliffhanger with the screaming Demetrius next door… still a lot of mystery surrounding the dreams. -
Cliffhanger!, sounds like the need to get to the cavern and join together to heal.
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Thanks for the adventure.
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Jakun really persisted through all of the challenges and is rewarded.
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Some very fun times in NYC, and a confirmation for Shaun about JJ’s past. Looking forward to day 2 in NY
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Something is seriously going on with Nathan that he needs to tell Jason about. Glad that Aiden is reaching out and apologized about his earlier bad behavior.
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Another amazing chapter. Excellent work. Now that they are really communicating, and the abuse piece of the puzzle is out in the open. I’m looking forward to seeing where this relationship goes.
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I was thinking that it would be Ethan. Wondering if he really did have serious injury that may have left him immobile or in a coma for a long time, so it was better for everyone to think he was dead. Looking forward to the next chapter
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Chapter 14: There Is No Rebirth
VBlew commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 14: There Is No Rebirth
Seems like someone doesn’t want Dani to learn more about his abilities… -
Very sad ending with Ethan’s death, tragically so young. But there is the possibility now of Jake and Cody deepening their relationship in the future.
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Oooh the L word. Big surprise. And we know that Jake really means it.
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Looks like the boys were busy with damage control. It’s amazing how many people were out to get them for just being who they were doing good in the world.
