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Chapter 10 - End of an Era
VBlew commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 10 - End of an Era
Good for Jake. He needed to break up with Meg, it was not working. -
That beginning with the outlandish public punishment was hard to take, but it seems to have created a bond an led to communication between the boys
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There is some drama coming up. They both need to get their feelings for each other worked out and figure out what they truly want their relationship to be.
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Great chapter, they finally meet and Dante healed the wound he created on Tani, and apologized. He still has no clue about their relationship, hopefully that will change soon.
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Awesome stories. And I agree with the others, you just teased us with these three morsels of this vast new universe. More please.
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Maddox is a maniacal menace in this story.
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Thanks for the journey, this was an awesome story. Very sad, but extremely well done.
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Great intro to the race car.
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Even knowing this was coming, it’s so sad.
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I like this new way of introducing the characters. Is this going to be an entire rewrite of the story? The original was very emotional, with lots of plot twists.
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Glad the boys are back together and are already working on ways to save the planet.
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I’m confused about Richard, does he not have the same sense of smell that Devyn has? Or is he not as attuned to the smells? He should be able to smell they are mates right?
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They got married a while ago. Definitely children on the way now that the majority of the drama in their lives is winding down.
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Very well written, for the few people in my life that have transitioned, so far, this very specific time of loss is good to have friends support you, close and not so close.
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Damn, it’s going to be even worse when they find out he didn’t arrive at his destination.
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Very bad move trying to abduct Wyn. wondering if there is a magik way to find the traitor? And figure out who has the teleportation magik, there can’t be that many of them, but they could be from one of the other countries.
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Smart negotiations to get access to tech let his location get noticed. Hopefully his return to his life in NY and with Henry is quick.
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It’s going to be interesting when it’s Ryan’s turn up on the Naughty list…
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Life Is, Sometimes, A Stairway
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Life Is, Sometimes, A Stairway
Hopefully Kai and Peppin find Milo soon, and a way for him to get to Sebastian. There is a way to travel between worlds, the just need to find it. Sebastian needs to give in to the real love he has for Milo. What only 3 more chapter? Looking forward to them all! -
It is good to hear that the Queen is telling Aaron that she wants to have him continue his relationship with Itumak
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Great birthday celebrations. Being so young he JJ did not have a sense of a need for security like older wealthy senior executives would have. And being in NY with so much going on not being concerned about his surroundings seemed to lead to his being easy prey. Hopefully with his intelligence he will be able to get out of the situation he is in, but drugging him to start with is not a good sign, and the earlier comment about not being able to use most of the concert tickets portends this to be a longer term issue. At least Henry has support around him to help him hopefully cope emotionally. The question is are the kidnappers after his wealth or his technological prowess?
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Wow, didn’t see that coming. Was it a dream? Reinard has been so paranoid about being killed off. If he did die in this way that is very tragic. And poor Galen will be beside himself.
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Not paying close attention to those feelings of things not being right, seems like a bit of foreshadowing to me.
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Dang, what a cliffhanger, almost as abrupt as the fire in the warehouse… I hope it’s not as tragic.
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Joining the navy is an interesting choice. But at least he made a choice, with Sasha’s input so he knows what the ramifications can be.
