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Very interesting that the school promotes fighting as sport, and they let that happen in areas outside the normal sparring venues… or was that just for show to get Rafe more interested in the school? Andre does need to learn some skills it seems, even if just to defend himself.
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There was a great progress in this chapter, they really do seem to be communicating at the end. Curious to see what this restart will be
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Now Is Always The Perfect Time
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Now Is Always The Perfect Time
That last bit about Jonathan’s family being all about appearances says a lot about where his thinking has been. He still needs to see the light about Maddox really wanting to be in an out and proud relationship with him. Hopefully that happens soon. And to realize that they are both up to being versatile rather than strictly top and bottom…- 29 comments
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Glad everyone is healing and out of the hospital. Sounds like it should be a relaxing time away. Hopefully we’re sone with Janet. But there will probably be some more drama in the future.
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The title made me think that the hope was for a relationship with Finn…. And there still may be. They need to talk. But the getting his Mother out of his head first seem a better approach. Now to see where things go from here.
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Good job Jason, getting the music right for Devyn to enjoy himself. Now back to Jason’s house for some more good times!
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Very interesting that, connection that Black did not know was possible. Was it something to do with is seeming agent upgrade?
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This sounds like it will be a great partnership for all of them, and keep LM from possibly getting sued or hurt in the future.
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Great chapter. Now that the know how each other feels, it’s going to be a wild weekend!
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Act I: Lost Property (part IV)
VBlew commented on buildercub's story chapter in Act I: Lost Property (part IV)
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Loving this tickle family. The Woodstock to go with Snoopy was adorable. That’s a good sign for their compatibility.
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It has been a long time coming for Jason to fully accept Devyn for his mate completely. It is worrying that the wolf neighbors are being unfriendly.
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Thanks for this story. I was thinking that Mithras was aime kind of advanced AI for a while, but in the end some other form of higher powered sentient being, maybe even the visible interface of the living planet itself. Great ending where there is new life and acceptance of the boys, and the reunion of Ned and Peter to live out their lives.
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Fun start to what looks to be an interesting new family. Looking forward to more.
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DV Ch 9 - Happily Life Goes On
VBlew commented on quokka's story chapter in DV Ch 9 - Happily Life Goes On
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Part 3 In the dead of Winter
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Part 3 In the dead of Winter
Beautiful chapter. The love they have for each other, the working through their troubles, and an amazing Grandfather to bring them even closer together. Looking forward to where they go from here. -
Tani still believes that Dante has a family that he can’t interfere with… which is an erroneous assumption he made, and it’s helping him from his love. Also wondering if there is a way for Dante to go to the Ekho realm?
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Wow, that was a fast moving chapter. There is a lot at stake for the children’s sake and it seem that Jitendra had put his faith and trust in very good people to be sure that his children were protected from becoming prey to a family that rejected him.
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Troubling day for Devyn, he is already so low in self confidence that speaking in front of the class was really challenging, but he did a good job up to that point. The revelation of having his own home and seeing where his family was headed, is something that Jason seems to be making sense of. We’ve only been introduced to what appears to be the ground floor, is there an upstairs with more bedrooms, for Richard and Patrick? Also was this all he inherited? If they were able to afford the home was there other assets?
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With Connor being so young and not really having good support around him, it must be really rough. Hopefully when the meet or talk, Jarrod can help.
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I agree with Danners, this story is excellent and there is a lot going on with everyone, hoping the characters speak to you some more as I love this world you created.
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Great chapter, starting with the villain, and ending with the major players getting all caught up for the next thing. I’m really liking this revised version.
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Very glad that they got to have an honest discussion of each other’s feelings, even if it was uncomfortable.
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Great story, really enjoyed reading it, an this seems like a good place to stop for now., with everyone being in a good place
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Cole needs to grow up and have a conversation instead of making assumptions. That’s part of why it took him and Damon to get together in the first place. Glad that he has good friends to look after him.
