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Geoff certainly was more than interested in Tom in the locker room. Maybe there is something there. Or Tom just likes showing off. New to porn can lead down a very long rabbit hole…
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Come on, Jacques... Decision Time
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Come on, Jacques... Decision Time
Very interesting… curious if Marcus’ family is somehow related to Jacques? He had been fighting with the magi’s all night but that last bar was dangerous and he saw that and save his friends from something. Looking forward to getting back to Alex and the Maison. -
I’m with @drsawzall on this Carlos was misleading in his last statement about getting the pills back from Beverly… If Arnold is admitting to guilt, the case is over, but could he have just been covering for his wife?
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And Pawn is promoted to a King…. But a very different one than his father….and this is rocking Bishop’s world.
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I don’t think Ryan knows about the other men Michael has been seeing. Thinking he is the only one is a flaw in this sick plan.
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Chapter 17:Carter's hunt leads him into devastating truths.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 17:Carter's hunt leads him into devastating truths.
All of the past is resolving. And Carter is having a hard time with the discovery… Dexter is a key here, sociopath that he is. Hopefully all works out for Jeremy and Carter, but it’s going to be difficult. -
Star Boy and the Chaos of Hormones
VBlew commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Star Boy and the Chaos of Hormones
Interesting. After his first day on the job the firm gets him with a psychologist to help explain the dynamics of what he is really working in. That was quite a debut, but the pheromones seem to be driving everything for him. -
What a fun way to spend time together as a family. I thought initially that maybe they were going to be drag costumes, but these were selected specifically for each individual. Terrific chapter.
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It is almost a first contact situation, even though they communicated before they arrived, being in this android form is strange to the Ark III people. So far so good. It took them 100 years with the technology and Athena and robots working to make Gaea habitable. These people would have to wait that long too, unless the build a dome, maybe…
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The Sea, Pt. 3 / Hereafters
VBlew commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in The Sea, Pt. 3 / Hereafters
Wonderful ending, being saved from the incoming sea by the love of his life, then beginning their new life together in this place across the sea. I’ve really enjoyed this story. Looking forward to future works. -
Library used to be my favorite place too. Now most if it’s on my iPad. Lovely escape.
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A Golden Ticket Outta Dodge
VBlew commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in A Golden Ticket Outta Dodge
Wow, interesting understanding of having this recessive trait, he’s really rare, and able to profit from it. Who will the mate end up being? -
Interesting development with Marc’s discovery of the changing commodity markets, seeming to be manipulated by a few others, now he’s taking advantage of that data. Fun times with Sasha…
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Fun chapter exploring with his new boyfriend, introducing him Yao family and friends.
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Awesome ending to this story. Even if it appeared that things went bad, the community rallied around the guys supporting them.
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Chapter 16: The past comes knocking. But who will open the door?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 16: The past comes knocking. But who will open the door?
This “father” that Ethan’s diary is talking about, is it Dexter’s father? And then Jeremy’s father he never knew about? -
This double life seems to be something many people go through, trying to present to part of the world, they conform to heteronormative behavior, when it’s not truly who they are. Something is going to come crashing down. I still don’t think he will go back to his mother….
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Catching up with the Guys
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Catching up with the Guys
Banter is great, so are hardcore whatever scenes. I like both. The guys seem to be putting Jacques on the spot just because he seems distracted to them. What is with all of the people glowing? This seems new, is it some latent talent he was unaware of? -
Chapter 1: A sacrifice for love... I will do anything for love.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: A sacrifice for love... I will do anything for love.
Interesting beginning. Looking forward to the journey. -
Great wake up scene. Then the info on the parents, tragic they wasted their lives on drugs and alcohol, and couldn’t even recognize their own child… glad the brothers had each other out get away from them.
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Nice easy trip to the cabin. I did miss any conversation they may have had with Casey too. Mickey took being recognized fairly well. That may happen more in the future too. Hopefully just as nicely. Now onto that “bonus”
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Now we see why Ryan was so aggressive in getting with Michael. I have a feeling he is not done defying his Mother. She may not get what she wants…
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Great chapter, some good family bonding time. Do wonder if Devin really needs some more healing time to be able to drive further.
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This chapter and the prologue seem to be the same.
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Lovely tickle wrestling, with awesome commentary. It was a fun day.
