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"The Cookout" (Part 1)"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout" (Part 1)"
Daisy finally put all the pieces together, and clearly told Blake what he needed to do to keep Jackson in his life. She loves her son too much to let him be a secret. -
Sounds like this was where you needed to be at that time in your life. Love the whole role playing thing. I never got into that myself, but is sounds fascinating. The language thing I get my second long term relationship was with a polyglot. English and Greek by birth, and then majored in Spanish and took up Japanese, and a smattering of others just enough to get by.
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Fun pride parade.
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Nice intro to film school…
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Areal conversation between Blake and Pitt, still not willing to act on anything. The letters amusing as always.
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This is a big change from England. There seems to be hope now.
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Seems like Ryan either wasn’t paying attention to himself, or really needs more counseling. Jasper is slowly working it out for himself, but that much drinking is not helping anyone. Blake included.
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Finally enough sex to drop all of the masks…
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Beautiful tragic ending. They both loved each other but Jimmy had to move on.
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Great development, the father may eventually come around… Mom is as supportive as anyone could be. Seems like she’s had time to het used to the idea, before Dallas came out. the scene at the tattoo place is interesting, hopefully the penis parts removal don’t have any snags.
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Great ending to this first part. It was difficult, but there is now some hope of a future together. Traveling companions is a good footing. Glad to know they are part of the same world as Nathan and Brohm, loved those stories.
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Great visit and Joshua’s revelation to Olivia about his past went well, and there is no expectation of sex for the time being, which allows them more time to get to know each other better. Kevin and Daniel, interesting twist. 2 long distance relationships… at least for now.
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Beautiful short story. Seemed like fate did bring them together. Gay twins.
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Josel now informed and confirmed Zdain’s attraction to him has to think about what he know and his feelings, since they are different from what he expected.
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Chapter 2: My First Felony
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 2: My First Felony
The reality of the situation finally hits home. They make a nice team. Hopefully they can find similar tops.. -
I don’t think Luke knows what he wants yet, and this comment by his mother is not helping. And since we’re not gettin his inner monologue we have no idea what the real issue is.
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Chapter 7: Passionate Night
VBlew commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 7: Passionate Night
That bite healed Aelios and gave Adrian some powers, will he be able to go out in the Sun? So far it doesn’t seem to negatively affect him. The sex only seemed to help them both. -
Seth has been told multiple times to talk with Judy. Maybe he will this time. Micah has had experiences that he had to work through and now want to have a good relationship with Killian. And let’s Killian know about that too. They are being honest and truthful with each other.
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School Begins With a Bang
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in School Begins With a Bang
George. Any need to choose his friends more carefully, but you don’t know what will be a tipping point for someone being bullied. Even though the Ax may not have Ed’s prints, it probably has someone’s prints. And the could be falsely accused. -
Love the description of the characters, there are a lot to keep reach of. Looking forward to the story. There seems to be something going on with Luke wanting to distance himself from his friend. Will see what happens with that.
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They finally agree that their love for each other is worth staying together, even if it means not going home. Will they still go after the aggregates? Can the get to a place where Wojciech can heal faster?
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That’s a lot of water to reach to the roof on the 2nd story. Glad they got outside.
