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Now with Chapter 2 in there it makes some of what is in the tru chapter 3 make more sense. Loving their adventure. Looking forward to the conversation with DJ and Hoss….
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Nice start to this story. Their relationship is interesting, Grayson seems really into Corey, but it’s not reciprocated. And Grayson has a girlfriend… but is oblivious to his effect on the girl in the cafe. It seems there may be a stalker. Looking forward to see where this goes.
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Another great adventure for the boys, the places they went kayaking sounded really nice.
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River is glad that their lists mostly overlap. The kissing item is interesting. Could it b cultural or just something that Kenji thinks would bring more entanglement than he thinks he wants. They are both clearly liking each other at this point, but I can see River getting more emotionally involved. He doesn’t really have anyone else in his life besides his friends, and running off with strangers from a bar. And I’m betting he stops doing that.
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Great ending to this case. You all know this is a detective series, so something has to happen while they are on vacation… 😉
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Brandon has some serious issues with his belief in himself, and after being in love with Billy for so long, to chicken out like he did is rough.
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Mother did tell Connor he was going to have to take care of M for a while. Maybe she went for backup?
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This story has so much heart. I love how Pete is just his awesome self. Heading right to things, not ignoring and hiding, playing games. He is open and honest, doing what he thinks is right, like letting the guy he’s been coaching take that position on the team. Facing Mitch, after he cooled off some. Curious about this special dinner…
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What an ending, wow. Love of Thomas and Adam endures. Daniel gets his Aziel back and they make a life together.
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Good on Oscar for wanting to defend his friend, especially after Al the early trauma he went through.
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Calvin is a perpetual liar, and doesn’t even understand about perjury…. That’s going to come back and bit him. I bet after the next day in court, his “wife” is going to be asking for divorce, unless she is part of the scheme to get custody of Bryan and Caleb for some yet unknown financial reason…
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What happened to Mother? Hannah got abducted, and M thinks her memories were accessed. If Bradley was fired by “ higher ups” are there more agents out there, or just one with a lot of connections? the baby is growing faster than a normal human would…
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All the speculation about what could happen when Wanda was let into the circle of trust was unfounded. She’s now ordering things around taking care of her new grandson.
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Nice ending. This was a good story if two people coming to love each other.
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Uncle George is a very caring and understanding parent in all of this. Pete blaming himself for all of these other people’s issues is disheartening. That he thinks he would be better off dead, needs some attention, which Farley and George jumped right on. Farley seems like an ally if not “family” himself. Mitch seems to need some maturing. Hopefully Jimmy is ok, and he and Pete can build on their friendship.
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The are getting a lot of work in with this mustering. He’s also keeping in touch with his other friends.
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Chapter 45 - Young Quigley, Part 2
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 45 - Young Quigley, Part 2
Help come from the most unlikely places. Pickle was very up front and business like. And she didn’t like the people that are Quigley’s bounty targets. This will be the start of his career. -
Wow, what a confession of what Otis went through with his mother and her depression. It was fortunate that his grandmother took him and loved him. What an amazing man. They are good for each other. Looking forward to more.
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"The Articles Of Faith" (Part 2)
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Articles Of Faith" (Part 2)
So maybe there are 2 angels, and Aziel just needs a little more hope to fully realize his nature? -
So Rovnar moves all of Xavier’s group to the swamp area to deal with these red Dragons. The silver dragon’s history does not seem to go back to a time with living sand dragons. The group finds the red’s lair and is now approaching to fight the, it’s a test of the young ones skill. Nice cliffhanger.
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Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
VBlew commented on Alan2's story chapter in Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
Daniel is making Liam feel comfortable and leading him around introducing him to others. I’m wondering about Daniel’s mention of the Covenant in the prior chapter, if he is already a member and getting a feel for Liam joining, or if they are the source of the scholarship and had him targeted before.?. -
Emmet was using his magic to help Finley be calm during the discussion. There are growing feelings between them.
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M said mother told him he could get pregnant, and it really seemed like he was having morning sickness. He could be. That would make the agent want to inspect him even more!!! Hopefully with the tracker out Connor will be a little better with the headache situation. Back to SD. Maybe Hannah really can be of some help.
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What happened to Calvin. Something about his dress an appearance is foo from when he was last visiting the boys with his “ wife”… the testimony is weak and he does not really seem motivated for his won case…
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Off for a working summer. I bet the boys will be glad they both came on this journey.
