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These guys really are taking their time to work together on their relationship, likes and dislikes, past failures, and supporting each other.
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Awesome chapter. School is going well. Pete is learning more from seeing the game from a coach’s perspective. He was being aware of his surroundings, even with the guys walking him home, and avoided some goons. The shooting range is teaching him about gun safety and use. The dinner sounds terrific.
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Another great story in the series. It looks like it’s a continuation of a family of detectives… looking forward to the next story
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The Meeting and A Huge Surprise
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Meeting and A Huge Surprise
I’m guessing the partially right part has to do with where they will be living, and it’s not at Manny’s place. Less disruption to Rocky’s life that way. It looks to be an interesting story. -
Glad to see these guys again. On to a new adventure. They have the skills to do the soldiering, just need to complete this mission and get fast tracked.
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Chapter 10: Will it all come to an end with them being happy?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: Will it all come to an end with them being happy?
Thanks for this story, that was a tragic ending. Leaves me wanting to know what happens in their future. Hopefully Henry is a good father and Mateo finds a love that is not built on deception. -
Loved the trial, so much drama and suspense… with the real intent on having these 3 youth, who took care of the youngsters while they were on the streets, be able to live fulfilling lives. Now they will, thanks to Barron Greg. so much compassion. They may even take advantage of the school that’s being built.
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Canada Holiday & Graduation
VBlew commented on quokka's story chapter in Canada Holiday & Graduation
This is an intense underground structure. And still top secret. It’s nice knowing he has a fantastic retreat, that he will be able to share with his friends. Just seems a little excessive…. -
It seems they both are attracted to the other and still don’t know what each other are. It’s going to be explosive when they get together.
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There is still some sense of self in Simon. Maybe his friends will be able to come to his aid. Connor was embarrassed by his actions of being rejected, but he still wants to be with Simon. So, maybe there is hope yet.
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Julie seems nice enough. She took them in, and is helping Connor get a job. Entry level may not even do a background check with the former employer. The encounter with the MIB, was not so bad, but was the warning about M or Greg or Nathan?? There are 3 hims currently in the house, we could just assume it’s M. And after being beaten with a baseball bat, who would not be suspicious. M’s comment about sentient AI makes you wonder if he’s encountered them before.
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Love the retreat and the reserve that the grands have set up for him and his friends. Interesting that there is no mention of him having children there…
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So, is this the same Man in Black, or a clone? Was it a dream or did M rescue him, just to have the MIB appear at their room? M is definitely getting into the sex. And Connor is releasing his past.
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I hope Uncle George sues the school and personally the principal for harming a minor! Best laid plans and all. Pete is protected from the media by his friends. Hopefully the injuries are not too bad and he heals up and can play ball. He’s an athletic young man so healing and PT should get him back in shape. Seems like this news story is upending the town. Hopefully brings about some attitude change about gay people in the area too, but you never know.
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Great chapter, loved the celebrations and the fact they found a gay friendly venue for them all to be able to dance. If the treasure hunt goes well, the boys could be all set financially for life.
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Great conclusion to this section of their story. With new identities, and the wealth from the keep, they are starting a new life, and seem really keen on each other. No more questions about their relationship status… looking forward to more adventures with them.
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Loved this story. Looking forward to further adventures with this new team. All kinds of possibilities. I definitely see how having others with powers to talk to relieves the stress of needing to hide that from loved ones.
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Excellent conclusion to the mysterious ritual. We have an explanation for who was the cause. And the minister is chastised. Hopefully Jamie’s new role with this special squad will be more to his liking, and he can learn more about his powers and how to control them. The minister was not going to willingly create another monster. I do see him as a potential threat to the country with his mind reading powers.
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To The Medical Center We Go
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in To The Medical Center We Go
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More interesting developments. Since Ken and the boys have not spoken yet they don’t know they are working on the same case…seems like the perps left the apartment in a hurry…
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The House at the End of the Road
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The House at the End of the Road
So Connor encounters something strange in the abandoned house, goes unconscious and is rescued by M. Then sees an Orb… unconscious again and wakes up back home. M must have some serious strength or can levitate things… then Connor hears M talking to someone, but there is no one there…. Very mysterious. Sunday with Hannah will be interesting, He needs to tell Hannah about his feelings, but is afraid.- 12 comments
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Good time getting high, and explaining to M why he was not wanting to kiss M. Lousy experience in school, being bullied by his father and people at school. Was Hannah around, then? Then getting the dog and making M happy. Waking up with M in bed was too much, and he gave in to the Kiss. But like we know from the first food. M does not know what to do, and he bit Connor’s tongue… Connor runs into the man in black who calls him by name. Then escapes into the swamp. Hopefully M is safe with Jack to protect him…
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This story is so touching. Looking forward to this revised version. It does seem to flow better. Great intro to the major characters.
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The soul stones may contain good people from the past it sounds like. And maybe they match the dragon eggs? Gordech can now communicate with them in a spoken language. That is very helpful. Great Cliffhanger with the dead walkers coming into the area they need to cleat the stuck gate mechanism…
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This was a difficult chapter. He was a killer, but not a torturer. I still have some hope that maybe Brohm is not dead…
