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Good background on the territory and terrain, and a little history of the political landscape.
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Good for Pawn. Now maybe he’ll get some respect.
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Mickey could only put up with so much belligerent behavior from Dave, then when he was attacked fought back and knocked Dave out, which he deserved. Then that soul opening talk with Drew on the bench, wow. Letting out all of the trauma he faced and how he got the scars. The request of Drew to not drink, was special, then the reaction seen by the neighbor emptying out his liquor supply, and crying. Drew was really touched. Seems like Drew has fallen in love, and is slowly coming to terms with that.
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Interesting story of how Reginald came to have this divine gift. Does he still have the amulet? Or did it just unlock this ability? He is loved by Alexander and Omar.
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Loved the visit by Gordy. Had to verbalize the words to get it understood. Interesting way to write the Scottish accent.
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Sure, Lucas you’re in control. With Ethan having the key to your manhood. I think you have that backwards… very interesting story.
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Awesome beginning to a new book in this series. Making friends with the neighbors, and being wary of potential enemies… It seems that the other Ark survivors abandoned ship just to survive. Hopefully with Ark II support they will be able to do much more. Wondering if Their fist visits will be in person or with the body doubles, as a precaution?
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This was an awesome chapter, up to the last sentence cliff hanger…..
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If only Zdain and Josel would talk to each other a little more they might figure out the liked each other as more than friends, then this blackmail would end….
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Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Stars in the Sky
Wow, this chapter covered a lot of time, from when the children were born to when they are young adults. It’s a real shame that Robby’s family missed out on all of the love this family had to share. The growth and planning a legacy is awesome. -
Another great chapter. Drew just being himself. Mickey was all worried about something that was a non issue for Drew. Nate had very good advice. Looking forward to more soon….
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This seems like a gateway drug to something more. Ethan is baiting him by taking away the “program” what will Lucas do now that he has felt this new strength?
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So now that Drew knows Mickey could be interested in him, it’s time to step up his game. Daisy gave her approval!
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The conversations with the parents went well. The scene at the gay bar was interesting, if you run into someone you know, then it is likely they are gay too, or very accepting.
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Chapter 12 - Shadows and Light
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Shadows and Light
True love supports you where you are. Manny is doing this for Robby, they will make it through together. -
Another great breakfast and conversation. I’m thinking that someone is making assumptions about the other’s sexuality without talking about it with them….. it may not be what he thinks.
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It seems Alexis being guided by something to find these additional artifacts, hopefully it will remain a positive force.
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Drew seems like he is attracted to Mickey, and really wanted to take care of him. Mickey got some feelings, but wasn’t sure how to interpret them. Looking forward to more on this developing relationship.
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Interesting beginning, both guys wanting to have the other one be safe. Looking forward to the story.
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Interesting that the station chief was going to check on the detectives skills and instead was able to record the bad cops pulling info from Charlie about their crime boss…. Then the FBI shows up… The boys have a good protector in Roger.
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Marc is doing well with his calculations on the exchange with Ernesto, and the additional time mining in this area may yield enough to get his ship in good condition. The relationship Sasha evolves. Marc is a good guy and up front with what he wants, sometimes the other person is not ready for his kind of loving. Who is this mysterious other guy?..
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Matt now has Jakob, who wants to have a relationship with him…. Oscar doesn’t even know what he missed out on. More revealed about the new students, Ralph is put in his place.
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Chapter 9 - Balancing Act
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Balancing Act
It’s nice to see these guys growing together, discussing their issues, and working things out. Manny will at some point need to introduce Robby into the conversation with his parents. The deception with Cindy is just prolonging this, they already accepted him… -
Amazing chapter, so much just in a couple of days. The messages, then communications with Earth. Surprised they spoke with Brazil before communication with Ark V. But there was a threat that they possibly needed to know about. Hopefully it was just dementia… It’s good to see the animals responding nicely to the humans.
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Interesting ending, the murderer got away with the prize. Looking forward to more with these characters, especially Sampson and Troy.
