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Interesting mystery caller who knew about Michael, and the mystery man again…. Hannah has some serious issues taking M away from Connor. Maybe Connor will be honest about his feelings for M now too, he’s on his way to save him.
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Connor is beginning to like having M around. The attention is disturbing him some because of some past experience. Is Hannah jealous, or possibly coming to understand Connor more?
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Great chapter, the suspense is palpable. They have the building plans, and there are 3 levels, so maybe they can go under this shield to access where the ritual is happening??
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New story to me. I love the beginning. A boy appears out of nowhere in a swamp. He has a Mother figure. Goddess, maybe. Nice he has no memory of who he is now, it seems like possibly Fae? Or angel, “Michael” definitely caused a reaction. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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Loved the games to subjugate the nobles around Birmingham.
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River seems to be able to physically take care of the stupid client, hopefully the threat is just intimidation, and won’t result in something bad. The smile and feelings for Kenji seem to be sneaking up on River. And now we have a date to look forward to.
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Now that the secret Thomas has been keeping from Zack is out, maybe the can address if. If he doesn’t run away again.
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Simon is getting a new teacher, even if he’s a necromancer and will not feed Yidian desire.
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Awesome chapter, checking out the neural interface connected to the other “bodies” going to the planet surface, space walk on the exterior.. Being vegan myself, the explanation and support for Ian not wanting to eat animals any longer was very nice to read.
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Glad the are going on a quick holiday. The flashback to the past is pretty traumatic, good on Keith for seeming to get over his harsh experience with his father.
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They escaped the cave with the help of something luminescent. Now back in the daylight a Daemon appears. Hopefully like the rest, this is just a dream. Possibly a premonition of unfinished business with Helmsley. Good cliffhanger.
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They all fought together, and we got the first glimpse of a shadow slayer. And the huge potential gift of sand dragon? Does that mean that they could become sand dragons, then transform into their current form? Love how all of these stories are converging.
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It looked like they got completely lost in the cave system under the keep. This is fresh water so it has to lead somewhere. Maybe after some sleep they will be able to get the light going again.
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Chapter 7: The confrontation.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The confrontation.
So much emotion in this chapter. The the cliffhanger with the question at the end. Mateo needs to figure out who he really wants to be with. Henry also had some soul searching to do, he is the one who out Mateo in the gilded cage, then left him alone… -
Great chapter, both bodies discovered, and some possible clues from their background in High School. From the scene of the crime, blunt force trauma and both being shot, so possible ballistics reports too. I agree that something is off with the principal’s reactions…
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The Paranormal Hits Home
VBlew commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in The Paranormal Hits Home
Great chapter, this portal into another dimension, that the minister knows to search for and to not to look into is frustrating to Jamie. They did excellent on defense. Doctor Who has lots of aliens… this seems more like a kill the alien game though. -
Intriguing flashback. Seems like Mark is a catalyst for good change. And he needs to come back from wherever he was sent before they got to the labyrinth.
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Very interesting chapter. They made it across the desert. Only to be snubbed by these snobbish magical “nobels”. Will be interesting to see what happens.
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Chapter 28: “Do not commit to anyone.”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 28: “Do not commit to anyone.”
Interesting meeting, and a lasting peace, but that has its own challenges. Being aware of the intelligence around you, is a constant need. Stealth entry into an organization happens, especially like is happening in our own world today, bad actors with long therm plays… -
Great to see this continuing on with Ken and Joe together, the boys are now amateur detectives…
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Glad he recovered quickly from this attack, and has a good new friend to help him around.
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Quick case, seems open and shut over just 2 days. Glad to know this happened before he got with Joe.
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Epilogue: Normal Families?
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Epilogue: Normal Families?
Thanks for the great story, some language lessons, and a wonderful set of Characters. Looking forward to any sequel. -
Excellent start to this story.
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Devin is going to have to be careful with his stealth Superman transition in the future, he is being recognized for his heroic acts, which are good deeds, but could present a future issue. The Santa and elves hospital visit was a lot of joy for everyone.
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