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Glad for the continued story. Slight time jump, Carter is running the company now? That’s a big jump from the basically intern that he started as. Curios as to what he is doing to get Jeremy’s attention to come home? Hopefully not anything illegal. Like burning down the house… that would be pretty drastic.
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Felling he was all alone Killian got suicidal thoughts. Asher to the rescue. Then Asher helped him change an even a kiss on the cheek. Was Asher jealous before, and trying to stop the budding new friendship with an openly gay guy, where Killian was in the closet, did Asher overhear Mom says she accepted Killian no matter his orientation?
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Todd, having a little pity party is OK when your life feels like it’s falling apart., And your friends and family aren’t available to give you feedback. As long as he doesn’t wallow in it and the others reach back out in a timely fashion he should be good and maybe recognize that he can work on his artwork and make some money.
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Terrific chapter. Learning Opa’s true backstory was very interesting. Finding out more about this prophecy will be interesting, especially since Greg has most of the Character traits…. The eye color depicting rank must mean something special for Jake. But they are keeping that a very close secret. Will be interesting to see what abilities each of them have, yet to be discovered.
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It all seemed like an idyllic day, until Bruce froze it all. What is he playing at? Is Damien just another conquest or something more? Did he start to have feelings, that have been suppressed? Will Damian play along, or just isolate himself? Looking forward to more.
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Fun times playing around in the water naked, led to the perfect picture for Jake’s ideal documentation to be the inspiration for his painting.
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It was good to see Barrett taking care of Todd emotionally and got upset by the idea of Todd‘s father being such a jerk about this. In the end he took care of his guy.
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Chapter 4: Forgotten Memories of Argos
VBlew commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 4: Forgotten Memories of Argos
This is the second group of what seem like rogue vampires running around trying to kill humans that Aelois has had to dispatch. Was he the wolf form too? -
Adam is trying to be friends with all of these guys with differing relationship statuses. Carl - best friend, Ross - love interest, Thomas - curious gay friend?
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Todd at least made the attempt at an olive branch. His father really doesn’t seem to care about supporting this son, even emotionally. Such a shame. What will he do if Barrett and Todd tell him they are dating? Fire Barrett? Then where will that leave Anthony? This could really go sideways if the old man is not careful.
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A truly beautiful chapter of what a loving couple can be for each other.
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Excellent chapter. So he thinks the killer is someone he knows. There’s the threat in the prior chapter from the bully…. Asher tried to visit while he was in hospital, but didn’t come by after he got home? Guilt maybe? He has a friend in Seth’s father. He admitted he was gay to his mother, reluctantly. And she left the room, so not sure how that will go. Then there is his overbearing father he will have to deal with regarding why he was in the park, and hopefully help with finding the killer.
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I agree with the continuation of the story. They need some time to heal. Then maybe they can come back together. It may be a concern that Laura or Dexter will not let Carter see the boys, hopefully Jeff will help with that. Is Jeff having feelings for Carter? He has been extremely supportive through the whole story. So many unanswered questions.
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Jake was nothing but a gentleman in his interaction with Nate and Danny. Helping Danny explore his feelings, letting Nate get used to being around, while teasing him. Then helping Danny with his artwork. The very generous offer to paint them. Danny’s step-dad was way over the line groping him…. Danny running to where he felt safe, with Jake.
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Wow, that is a doozy of a cliffhanger. First Killian’s realization he is gay, then Asher not wanting to loose him as a friend, was that why he told the other guys about Killian and Seth meeting? The confrontation at the car. It didn’t seem like Killian knew who the attacker was.
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Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
Just when they thought the were safe Lopez found them and hurt Jeremy. Distracted by trying to kill Jeremy, Carter found the gun and the courage to shoot and kill Lopez, where are the henchmen? Will the sound of the gunfire attract the search party to save them? -
Great idea to transport the people who need to help you to space. Even 5he short teleport grabbed attention, but was not enough. Hopefully now Brett will be able to address the right people at the UN. It will be interesting to see where that leads.
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Excellent first date! Fun locations with healthy food options, so they are both on the same page with that. Looking forward to the next date, but they didn’t set that up yet. Maybe seeing each other at the bar Friday night?
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Excellent chapter, things at first seemed bad, we’re turned around. With the right counsel they were able to take over the business that had fired one, and start a restaurant next to uncles’s bar, and rescued two boys who needed a loving home.
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Sad that Seth move from one bad situation to another one where people were treating him like a pariah. Killian being the only one to to befriend him. Then the kiss and later realizing he may be attracted to boys…
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Lovely story, from potential tragedy to love and marriage.
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Jill Helps Figuratively Bury Her Dad
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jill Helps Figuratively Bury Her Dad
Thanks for this story, involving a harsh topic. In the end the perpetrators got their dues. The children survived each with their own issues, but did well and Brendan was a good parent. Nice that you tied up all of their lives in the epilogue.- 60 comments
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At least the boys seem safe now. Josel not trusting anyone at this point, but who could blame him after what they have been through. The rescue with the birds was intense. Josel does not understand how he was being used by Jolanda, and really is better off with this group who seem to know his father. Zdain will hopefully pull through. Maybe he heard Josel’s kind words. They both need friends.
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After a rocky start at school, the boys seemed to connect at the beach.
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Marc is being helped by his family to kick start his mining operation. The board meeting was not as boring as he initially thought, with being able to address people renting ships and not returning them ready for the next renter. He will be catching up with his friends soon…
