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Great start to the story.
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Micro got the wolves to safety. Still wondering what is this long ears, one of the wolves show him an image… if it’s still out there is it a threat to them? This cliffhanger in the middle of Martina’s story leaves me really wanting to know more. Excellent chapter.
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Chapter 22: “Create compelling spectacles”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 22: “Create compelling spectacles”
Such a cleaver theft of the orbs, now to build something to counter the papal Flying Fortress… so many lives lost in political machinations. -
That was a very weird scene. Older people wanting to play games with student, of consenting age.
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That shadows scene with them battling reminded me of the first chapter… Maybe love alone isn’t enough, in this story…
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Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
The awkward moment at the baths was dealt with really well. The boys spying was also handled really well.- 23 comments
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Very good, now they both know they like each other. Hopefully their interactions are less awkward going forward.
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You’re Not Okay And That’s Okay
VBlew commented on frozenphenix's story chapter in You’re Not Okay And That’s Okay
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Maks missing the concert may come back to bite him. Will his father cut him off? We’re the drugs Aleks too something habit forming? Hopefully not and he doesn’t do something he’ll regret.
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Wow, what is this magical force that started in Grey’s dreams and is now manifesting. And Dave seems to be creating something to protect his mate. Anxiously awaiting what happens next.
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The interlude Itumak took with Connor and Soren was interesting, showing how different people process grief. Aaron is doing a good job. He is holing it together and doing his duty as King.
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This has been an interesting journey with these two. They discovered more about themselves.
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Moving On and Peaceful Living - For a Bit
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Moving On and Peaceful Living - For a Bit
Great chapter, the boys, all of them are getting along, and on to an adventure at the Korean Baths. I agree about nudity in the US. Once you get over the initial idea of being nude, when everyone else around you is too, it drops a lot of barriers. -
That started with a very angry Necko, her father did a really good thing getting her to the orchestra. Maybe she will take the advise, and there is possibly a remedy coming.
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I love the description of the forest dwellings. So much yet to learn
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This vacation sounds really wonderful, allowing them all to relax. Even the disagreement in the beginning was minimal.
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This is an interesting journey, both literally for the boys and figuratively as trying to figure out one’s sexuality can be challenging, especially when your companion seems to believe that you are like they are.
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I’m also thinking that Otis knowing how to use a gun will be useful in the future.
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I’m liking this version. The depth to the storytelling is really inviting. Looking forward to this version.
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This helps explain why Grey was so upset when Mark arrived at the tavern. hope that with time the explanation and the quest will help their friendship.
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Finally, they sat and talked. Now Connor gets to pamper Soren some. And maybe with the threat of breaking up over Soren can express his feelings more. Looking forward to the dance.
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The Boys Are Back In Town
VBlew commented on frozenphenix's story chapter in The Boys Are Back In Town
Good ending, and a surprise for Mike learning about how much more of the supernatural world there is. Looking forward to their future, and how their relationship fares being separated. I also wondered if after the transformation to a shifter, if it helped Pinky’s human physical condition. You didn’t mention that. -
Cory's Christmas Present, and Happy New Year
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Cory's Christmas Present, and Happy New Year
Nice ending, although it did seem like going from a slow jog to 90mph in the epilogue. -
Great chapter, it seems they are on to a mythical quest for answers. Loving this story.
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What a difference the two perspectives of how they got to the army barrage of the town were. And since there were huge assumptions on both sides with no communication, that tragedy brings us to now.
