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Photographing and being photographed
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Photographing and being photographed
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Excellent chapter, rescuing the twins. Your comment about them having regular blue eyes means they didn’t automatically change with the death of their father. Nice cliffhanger, looking forward to more.
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Killian helps Kane realize that he will have to go home with his witch of a mother, at least for now. Killian and Asher explore their feelings for each other, and Adam helps Killian slow down and see he still has a lot to process, before having a sexual relationship. Adam is a good guy helping out.
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Quinn finally got his Birthday present. Now that he is 18 things should be better. Will see what his Mother tries…
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Asher finally got his apology and asked Killian to be his boyfriend. Zack is still a bully… he is my main suspect in the killing. Kane shows up in person as a surprise to Adam and they all have a great time.
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It was a wonder they picked him being so young as the ambassador in the first place, but he willingly accepted and seemed to do a decent job. Added diplomatic training could not hurt, and more education on another world would be of benefit as well. Looking forward to the next book.
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Great intro to the story’s main characters and their current situation. Looking forward to where this one goes.
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Killian really hurt Asher with his question about when Seth was killed. Hopefully they will get past that. Killian has a great idea about reuniting Adam and Kane.
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Crazy man Ethan… you should be sharing this information with the detective.
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I believe this is the first time the sex was not all about getting Alan satisfied. Calvin now has a beginning appreciation for being a bottom….
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This was a very therapeutic chapter. These guys needed to talk, heart to heart, and it looks like they made some good progress.
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Good for Asher coming out and letting Killian know how he felt about him. Killian for going to the memorial and then saying something, even with his father being there. Hopefully that will lead to a positive start to some kind of investigation.
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Nice wrap up to a great story. Everyone is working on themselves to some degree.
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I thought this was an interesting way to make Quinn be quiet and listen “Do yourself a favor and sit the fuck down before I shove my dick down your throat to shut you up.” Not a typical conversation…. But they do have history, do they even know they are each gay?
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That was a horrible thing to have happen, and the police being less than helpful. But maybe since Jake does know about the car coul possibly have some retribution…. Danny was a blessing to his friend, cleaning him up, and getting Nate to get help.
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This was a surprise turn of events. The betrayal by the new “best friend” is a hard thing. Does Dave have an open relationship too? What is his partner going to be thinking about this relationship?
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Finally the tension was broken…Bruce makes his move. Did Karen subtly indicate her life was a carefully constructed illusion? Does she know what Bruce really wants? The question to me is, will this just be a fling, with Damien left with an aching heart?
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Marc is a busy man, running around with his new beloveds, meeting the parents.. and still mining and studying.
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Interesting beginning to this story, looking forward to where it leads.
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Hit Me with Your Best Shot
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Hit Me with Your Best Shot
Bunny boy made an assumption and published without fully checking the facts…. That’s going to come back and bite him.- 12 comments
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We have the answer to why Barrett was short with Todd in the last chapter. First having hope of finding his mother, then finding out she was dead and his father too. It is a lot to process…. With Todd’s mother passed too, there is some common emotional connection there. Hopefully they confide in each other, and grow from this. Barrett going to his foster mom was a good call, he will be supported.
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Glad for the continued story. Slight time jump, Carter is running the company now? That’s a big jump from the basically intern that he started as. Curios as to what he is doing to get Jeremy’s attention to come home? Hopefully not anything illegal. Like burning down the house… that would be pretty drastic.
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Felling he was all alone Killian got suicidal thoughts. Asher to the rescue. Then Asher helped him change an even a kiss on the cheek. Was Asher jealous before, and trying to stop the budding new friendship with an openly gay guy, where Killian was in the closet, did Asher overhear Mom says she accepted Killian no matter his orientation?
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Todd, having a little pity party is OK when your life feels like it’s falling apart., And your friends and family aren’t available to give you feedback. As long as he doesn’t wallow in it and the others reach back out in a timely fashion he should be good and maybe recognize that he can work on his artwork and make some money.
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Terrific chapter. Learning Opa’s true backstory was very interesting. Finding out more about this prophecy will be interesting, especially since Greg has most of the Character traits…. The eye color depicting rank must mean something special for Jake. But they are keeping that a very close secret. Will be interesting to see what abilities each of them have, yet to be discovered.
