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Todd had the courage to tell Barrett, he has feelings for him. Now it’s Barrett’s turn to do something with that information. The art exhibition was interesting and may lead to more work for Todd, their short visit to the Mural got them to know a bit more about each other too. Hopefully the search for his birth mother will turn out well for Barrett. There are so many reasons someone gives up their child…
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Dramatic start to this story.
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If Carter doesn’t have any pain, then maybe he wasn’t raped like is seemed what Jeremy had done. If Carter had been so drunk he couldn’t remember, ha was not likely a willing participant in whatever happened. Jeremy need serious help. And Carter is kidnapped by a psychopath who tried killing him before. How did they know about his fears to enact this possible murder scene. Could it just be his imagination and fear making this up? Scary cliffhanger?
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Interesting start to this short story. Something telling about no report of man overboard. Is he going to be reported dead for someone to try and collect insurance? Not like Logan’s relationship seemed good at all. Maybe this time together will have them become friends, and maybe more.
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This chapter confirmed my suspicions of this being the beginning of a Dom/Sub relationship. Alan sure knows what he wants and is taking Cal on an adventure.
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Fantastic ending to this book. Now on to Janek and Hugo as possible mates… I’m guessing they didn’t have a dream like Marc did, or they would know something more. Interesting shifting a merchant ship to an intelligence gathering ship.
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Finally we get a yes to the marriage proposal. And they are having a baby. The guys need to break in that new bed and mattress…. Just saying.
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It was a Fantastic visit for the old friends. Lukas and Christoph finally expressed their feelings for each other. Now to figure out what Lucas wants to do with his life after helping Severin recover.
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This does seem like it may be a change in their relationship. And hopefully Todd can tell Barrett about his prior feelings. And Barrett can acknowledge his growing interest…
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So they both jumped to wrong conclusions, maybe that will teach them to talk with each other in the future.
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Wow, didn’t see that coming. What did Carter tell Jeremy? Was the car accident intentional, after his suicide attempt? So many questions. The aunt is a totally selfish person. He is better off without her, but still feels the family connection.
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I bet Sabrina knew exactly what she was doing setting Barrett up. And the table with an old friend was just perfect for her to make a quick exit. Seems like there may have been some internalized homophobia that Barrett was dealing with when he was around Todd previously, and Todd is unaware of the changes he has made.
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A little foreshadowing with that I didn’t tell him, and even Ben asked if Tim told Guy about meeting with Jonathan…
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Interesting start to this story. Looking forward to finding out more about these students.
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Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Growing Relationships, Home Ownership, and Court Looms
Everyone seems to be settling in to a good family situation. Some interesting developments with Jill’s prior treatment that she either doesn’t remember or has not disclosed. The mystery of the water being in the hole… was there another child involved?- 55 comments
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Earth, and the other settlements seem to have forgotten about this group. They are progressing to the next level of the planet habitation. The direct communication was interesting and the need for the frank conversation between Joel and Hank and their feelings for each other. Hopefully other people will be as open and understanding as these two. It could be an issue if the sexual feelings were not understood. Looking forward to much more.
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Marc’s strong feelings for Janek saved Janek in what would have certainly been a fatal incident. It wasn’t clear if Janek was attacked by a rogue ship, but certainly the trainees were unaware of the probe and its ship mimicking capabilities. Glad they are both ok. Liking forward to more of their adventures.
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Dylan, standing up for himself. Liam not knowing what hit him. Jessica called out for her part as well. All good things. He didn’t get any feedback on what he went their searching for, but it was something. Liam is so bad thinking that his saying he was in love with Dylan would elicit a positive response.. he seems not to know how deeply he destroyed their possible relationship.
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The three boys moving to the ranch will be interesting. I think they’ll really enjoy being in the country. They are all growing closer. And a little tickle time thrown in there for fun.
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Lunch-boxes and packages
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lunch-boxes and packages
Great chapter introducing new characters and a plot direction with this new client. Loved this about their current website “website looked like something out of the ark. ” Ralph is still trying to suppress his sexuality… -
Wow, that was a brutal way to end Carter’s marriage. Then attempted suicide. He has moved on, but that will make him question any one coming close in the future. These guys have been through a lot. Jeff seems to be a good brother. Dexter, acting like he should be next in line for Jeremy’s relationship is in for a very rude awakening it seems.
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Marc is still helping Janek and they both still have a relationship even a long distance one. It’s a little one sided as it’s Marc decision when he is wanting to show up and surprise Janek with his presence. Wonder if he would feel jealous if Janek did find someone before he finds this mysterious mate that he has had a dream about?
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Ok, so we learn that Carter has his own pain that he is going through. Maybe they can help each other.
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Chapter 37: “Use absence to increase strength and honor”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 37: “Use absence to increase strength and honor”
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This year of school ending with Samantha off to university, and holidays for the boys. And all making love on there last night together for a while.
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