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  1. VBlew

    Chapter 5

    I had to read all of the comments to be sure this theory was not posited previously. With the need to RE wire Caleb’s brain, after the heavy metal is removed, would the wolf shift healing help at all? Seems like if the person is hurt in their “human” form, that typically a couple of wolf shifts is all it takes for them to be good as new again. It Caleb’s neck wound is still healing too. This theory may apply to other shifterverses, an not this one. Learning about Asa’s betrayal, and attempted murder for coming out to someone he could not trust was something. And going forward with brutal honesty, especially in a mate relationship is really good.
  2. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Amazing start to this mysterious, magical story. Looking forward to where it goes. There is something up with the Sherrif for sure.
  3. It’s great to see their growing relationship. Slow and steady as they say. Lucas has a lot off patience having gone to Larkspur and finding out what he was looking for there was not available, found this new place to start a farm, and now had a partner he picked up on the side of the road. Fate is being good to these guys. We’re all expecting something more to develop between them, and it seems that it will, all in due course. this is the first mention of the edge of Lucas’ property, so perhaps Jubal should see the land agent about buying the next parcel, soon.
  4. VBlew

    Parents

    Wonderful chapter getting to meet the parents. These guys come from very different backgrounds, and are dealing with it quite well. It’s nice them giving Toby the option of skinny dipping with the old folks or not. Toby’s interest in ecology is bringing all of them together too.
  5. VBlew

    Queens

    Great chapter, so I gather Kurtschono is like a priestess? Performing this ritual of the naming ceremony.
  6. VBlew

    The Hunt

    Great chapter. Maybe now Gideon will know how Kavan felt when he was rejected from trying to save his bonded! Who or what is this creature that first got away, then came back and attacked Kavan? Looking forward to what is coming.
  7. This seems like Nathan may have something to do with this but not the one who stated it. A brother of his? Taking someone with this skill set off the street and making them into a Spy? This seems like some demented kind of training.
  8. Great chapter, this story is very interesting and intriguing. Looking forward to more. This is a period of history that I know little of, and the main character is very engaging.
  9. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Nice twist, a Dakota being honest and coming out as it were to his family was met with love and support. Then meeting Drake and Shamus in town was no coincidence. Does Dakota know what kind of shifter Drake is? Or just know he’s not human?
  10. VBlew

    Chapter 3

    Nice flashback to their first meeting.
  11. VBlew

    Chapter 10

    JJ got some good advice from the girls, and seemed to follow it. Having a friend turn on you like Matt did hurts, maybe he will come around, maybe not, but his other friends are there for him.
  12. So glad that Rusty finally took action, but waiting 4 days to do it? Seems like the bold romantic gesture was enough to get Matty back. Very glad that Jamie was a gentleman, and we’ll see if Matty tells him so?
  13. VBlew

    Chapter 6

    Why Chase left 3 weeks later after his confession has not been explained. What happened during those 3 weeks? Why did they not stay in touch if they had been such good friends? seems like they both still have feelings for each other and a bond too. Danny may not know what he saw, but he was jealous of Michael’s relationship with Sam. We still have no real motive for the Murder, it’s usually money, or jealousy.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 3

    Won’t Giles figure out the Mate Connection? I thought that was something that Alphas could detect, but maybe they have to connect first.
  15. VBlew

    Chapter 7

    Demeter is going to wish she never messed with him. Travis is getting stronger and learning more about using his powers. There is an implication that he is going to be stuck here for years. Is this the same timeline that Josh is living in?
  16. VBlew

    Chapter 31 S1

    Great chapter with the trip to do some site seeing, and learning more of the local tribe, the petroglyphs were very interesting.
  17. VBlew

    The Sleepover

    Great chapter, they’re both awkward around each other. Soren needs to tell Conner what he is. It may make better not being a werewolf.
  18. VBlew

    Chapter 13

    Interesting chapter with Zenial telling about their similar past. The connection with Soullen. Although with him no longer accessible, that relationship will change. Who is this new person? Is it Q in disguise? looking forward to more.
  19. VBlew

    Chapter 5

    JJ is trying to find himself. On the other hand Travis did try to get back to him, just was in a different timeline… and I don’t think he could text from where he is either….
  20. VBlew

    Enlightenment

    Great story. The ending felt like riding a rocket, and then it was very suddenly over.
  21. VBlew

    Chapter 16

    This is a great shifter story. With the hints I was thinking dragon was what Drake was before Connor guessed. This will be a very progressive pack. Looking forward to more.
  22. Seems like Rusty was getting a little jealous hearing about Jamie being around Matty, but not enough to quit sulking… whoever got Francine to step in should be congratulated, making Rusty go low, and then to the high of singing about his love Matty. Now with Xpress spilling the T about their relationship, Rusty hopefully will man up and go get Matty, and apologize.
  23. VBlew

    Chapter 3

    It seems like these demons all want something from Travis, but I expect that Oblivion will have something to say if he suspects he is being manipulated.
  24. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    Interesting that he teleported to a different version of his earth. And his ignorance of things is concerning with their consequences.
  25. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Wow, what a way to start. Glad you’re back at this story. I’ve missed these characters, and am looking forward to finding out how they save the pups caught in transition.
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