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Nice flashback to a good time, even if he didn’t want a. Birthday party, he did get a nice present from Ed.
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Ricky seems more bisexual than gay, if he was sleeping with female cast members, and male cast members. Still something of a coming out regardless. He does seem to want to have some stability, and not be traveling like he did before. Larry seems more interested in music production, and money than what Ricky wants.
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Jem stepping in front of Bzup to protect him from an aggressive Azim is proofing his words with action. Hopefully non of the other humans shoot Azim… this chapter has a lot of soul searching and understanding of the two versions of Bzup people.
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Seems like a good place to end this. Business is going well, and there’s a good team of friends working together.
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Dating Apps Were Never Meant for This
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Dating Apps Were Never Meant for This
Love the rabbit boy… first we had a cat boy chasing Rusty…. Have to wonder what this guy, who seems to now be in charge of Xpress is having to prove and for whom?- 18 comments
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Kai loves this man, was afraid of possibly being rejected, but found just the opposite. Seems like soulmates who just had to find each other. The boat seems like an aesthetic to replace the sunken one. Love how they are comfortable around each other and taking time to get to know each other even more.
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Andy did the right thing, even if illegal. He had the means, and will help Matt, as much as he can. There will be a lot of emotional trauma to deal with in addition to his physical condition. Last we heard he was not eating well as a strategy to be less attractive to his owner. Maybe that worked, which is why he was on the marketplace. Here’s to hoping that things get better for both of them. Hopefully Ahmet is still alive. If he got found out, that would be very dangerous.
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This discussion on reproduction is interesting. Some kind of cloning? If Bzup-kind have been there for like 300 years, that’s a long time to remain hidden. What have they learned of the other life forms on the planet. They must have some need of sustenance like the seafood Bzup has gladly been eating. They have not tried giving him any land animals to eat yet… also wondering about that initial message Bzup sent after he was let out… was that an I’m safe made contact message? This is so interesting, being in a first contact situation. Surprised the scientists have not set Bzup up with something like their children’s education system for him to do some self paced learning yet. That would surely speed up the communication learning.
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Beautiful ending, especially after that cliffhanger in the last chapter. It seems they both feel the same way about wanting to stay with the other. Especially after emerging from the rip tide. looking forward to the next story in the series.
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This seems like a much better use of the property. Like the addition of the boat. There’s a lot to keep everyone occupied.
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Leave us hanging here, wanting so much more. Kai finally told his siblings and that seemed to go well. Can’t wait till he gets to the house.
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Last Night Being Thirty-Nine
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Last Night Being Thirty-Nine
It’s awesome to have two people so in love after all that time together, and being so passionate with their celebration. Tickle power is really something special. -
Damn, hot session on the beach, then back to a riptide like how they first met. Scott desperately trying to save Justin again.
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A Minute? A Year? A Century!
VBlew commented on R. Eric's story chapter in A Minute? A Year? A Century!
Glad to have you back with this story. Tampa is a beautiful area to be. I love the interactions, the philosophical discussions, Joel, with the neural link, now able to tap into Athena ‘s sensors to see anywhere on the Ark, got distracted from what he was doing. The FTL travel in the stingers out to Zeus was interesting. The references to movies and TV from our time is interesting. The very open discussions about sexuality. Looking forward to more on the ark, then hopefully planetside. -
Awesome chapter. Sounds like they need to find that old desk. Love that Kai overrode the getting left alone plan. He wants to spend time with Adam.
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So now Bzup has the ability to touch, it extends his ability to learn more faster. And the scanning of Jem’s eye has enabled him to grow his own eye, so he ma be better to interpret the world around him like humans do. Maybe these aliens just interacted with he sea life and had no need for arms or eyes while on the surface of the planet. The ability to grow and use arms with 3 “fingers” surely shows a higher form of intelligence, and hopefully protection under the compact for the bureaucrats coming. Can’t wait to read about the eye and interaction Bzup may have with that ability. Reading? Using the human’s tablets to learn faster?
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Sounds like they are eliminating some enemies and gaining access to some valuable technology. Jamie is sad at losing his very brave brother.
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Bzup proves to be very interesting, greeting the entire crew, asking to go outside. Then going to the ocean and sending out some communication. Being polite and taking the food offered. Going back to his area for the night. I was thinking, maybe some tendril attachment to Jem to gain more access to be able to comment the blobs did with the orx, but that would probably seem too aggressive at this point, like he was attacking Jem, and been cause for violence.
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Emmett needed the time to decompress from what happened, and then learning that Dex is dead, and reliving the experience telling Finley about it. He still doesn’t know what Finley is, but feels safe with him. Then totally breaks down when he gets home. And what was that with the alarm going off there when Finley enters?
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Adam is now a man on a mission with just a few days to get ready for Kai’s arrival. How will Megan take it? Probably fine. They are close, but he still needs recouping time, and back at his old home it may be easier. Although the will have to explain how the know each other…
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If it can process language, then maybe they will be able to communicate. But I’m thinking they need to establish language, kind of how they did in Close Encounters. But is this creature capable of doing that? Then possibly releasing it so it can communicate with it’s creators ? very interesting that it’s just Jem that it is responding to. It did seem to recognize Jem when he said his name, then responded with Bzup. Is that its name? Are the speakers transmitting Jem’s speech to the higher frequencies? Or in human hearing range?
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Omg, the banter in the comments is almost as funny as this chapter. Great that Kai is being released. The Doc is hilarious. Kai has a great idea in calling Adam. They both want to talk with each other… looking forward to that, and maybe an in person visit?
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Thanks for this story. I’m glad that Conner and Soren are together now. They will be good for each other. Especially now that they are communicating much better.
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Now we know it’s not the orx that suddenly became intelligent, but some other alien biotech that has been controlling them. This gets really interesting. Are these sea based aliens as posited, just wanting their own place on the planet, having a similar loss of a way back to their home world like the human inhabitants? Jem and Nico are deepening their relationship, and seem like typical horny young men. this is an exciting adventure.
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Glad Kevin read the note and stayed around. That news about the crew spreading misinformation was telling. Kevin has two people to watch out for, Danny and Chris. Hopefully some time in jail and a fine will have Chris being a better person, but if he gets fired over this, there could be some kind of revenge. Chris doesn’t seem that bright.
