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I can not imagine what plot twists you will come up with in four chapters, after the actions you dreamed up for this chapter. Sending Jonah to have a friendly man to man chat with Victor, about being in love with Will, is exactly what I had expected. Getting him high, pissing him off, then stealing his phone was just so predictable. Nope, I am not about to guess what could come to be, four chapters into the future. You will just have to surprise me❣️ Was everyone just standing around just watching Jonah beat on Victor until the police arrived?
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Happy for Elizabeth and Charles, but more pleased that the story has gotten back to Reggi's new powers and strengths. Just curious, how old are the new loving couple? I was also very surprised that Reggi's fire-stick did not burn down the stables, or set the animals into an uncontrollable and frightened frenzy! Its powerful displays certainly knocked Reggi for a loop. 🙃
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Another Sleepover and a Sleep-out
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Sleepover and a Sleep-out
Another interesting chapter. This story seems to be acting as a magnet, for a-holes and stupidity. I think that Stephen could benefit from having a companion dog like Oscar at home as his pet. It would certainly make bullies and a-holes think twice, but idiots may need to learn the hard way. Looking forward to see how Jeff will fare with the police. I mean how many ways can a kid screw up? Lots apparently, if we are talking about Jeff! Our story appears to be building into another far-reaching @Lee Wilson drama, and yet he claims that we are only at about the half way point❣️ Lucky us! -
Short and Sweet! I think everyone agrees with that. Well done❣️
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An Overnight, a Phone Call, and Assholes
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in An Overnight, a Phone Call, and Assholes
Crap! My previous comments disappeared, and I will try to repost something similar later, when and if I can find more time. 😢 And I was so proud of it❣️- 31 comments
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Mom Thorne and Lord Westbury share a mutual attraction, and interest in each other. Is it too soon after her husband's death for this to become a more serious relationship? She seems to be really enjoying her visit to London with her son and their very dear friends. Will this powerful family, continue to expand its influence in London and beyond? The Thorne family appears to have made a grand impression on the capital's elite and powerful.
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Could Kirk be considered a victim of a mercy killing? Somehow I believe that Devlin was only aiming to grow up and be just as responsible as an adult, as his father. Hopefully Kirk can now "Rest In Peace" in furniture heaven, and be glad that he wasn't born a public port-a-potty!
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More Legalese, and Back To the Boys
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Legalese, and Back To the Boys
🤔 Can someone remind me who Mr. Turner is and when this took place? Otherwise this seemed to be a rather calm chapter from our author, after Jeff's father intervened on the issue of his sentence. I totally agree with @pvtguy's comments, and realize that @Lee Wilson is just sitting back and waiting to stir up more possible complications for all the boys, and their parents. This is chapter 8, and I think we still have a long way to go before a conclusion of this story can be reached. At least that is my hope! ❤️- 36 comments
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Family first, is always a respected view by GA readers.
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Sharing their wealth and grateful appreciation for dedicated service, Reggi and his cohorts celebrate the Christmas holidays with family and staff in London, and at their Thorne estate home with Reggi's mother. So far things appear to have been peaceful since the confrontation of the previous chapter. The group is strengthening their positions in London's powerful political and business world, and the same at his traditional Thorne estate home. Many plans had been made in @Albert1434's previous chapters for the goals as to future developments of Reggr's vast holdings. What will become of his plans and future, now with the added support of Khonsu at his side? 🤔 May the force, continue to remain on Reggi;s side!
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Excellent chapter, with the brothers reunion. turning out, somewhat as I was expecting. Like others, I expect more complications to be revealed in future chapters. Many unknown innocent children have suffered as a result of the greed and the involvement of a large cash hungry, and sick organized crime group. I am afraid there will be more twists and turns to follow. My fingers remain crossed, as to the safety of all concerned. This case has many unknown loose ends, and Daniel needs to contribute what he knows to the honest investigating police authorities. We shall see where @Paladin will take us, in his future chapters of this emotional journey.
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Jeff's parents reacted to his "beer heist" from Circle K with little signs of shock, at his continuing stupid acts of behavior. Will his lie about not having been warned (by Leon) that the police were searching for him, be able to be overlooked, in future legal proceedings? Has he also set up Leon for a future clash with his pal, Brodie Kosa? He is lucky to have an important and smart lawyer as his father, but he also placed him into a difficult position. @Lee Wilson just loves to load his stories with many complications, and we just love to try to sort everything out! Buckle up readers, for more problems that are sure to twist their way onto this roller coaster ride of emotions❣️
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Sleep-out/over Talk, and Getting Caught
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Sleep-out/over Talk, and Getting Caught
Jeff pulls a bonehead move of stealing beer and makes a quick escape, while Leon is left to face the consequences of Jeff's stupid decision. Yes there will be consequences brought to bear on Jeff, when the police arrive at the Inness household. This opens a whole new "can of worms" that @Lee Wilson added to our story, in addition to Stephen and Micheal being caught in bed together by their older brothers! I fear these developments will sadly set up our younger boys relationship with a few more pitfalls to suffer through. Thanks Lee.- 34 comments
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It looks like a cat take-out box to me
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Reggi returns to his London home and learns that the Lady in Black had been there while they were gone. They learned that Kareem and Jim had greeted her arrival with shots of gunfire, sending her into retreat. Reggi used his new powers, to create a new weapon out of an innocent looking walking stick, and met her in battle the next night, with the support of Khonsu at his side. She learned that she was no longer confronting a mere mortal, but a powerful new adversary! Was this only a temporary victory by Reggi, in what will become a greater war of escalating new power displays by Reggi? 🤔 I know @Albert1434's answer will be to keep reading❣️
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What an intense chapter! I give it a double WOW! Monty seems to be right about one thing, Victor does display many manic behaviors. 😱 He is out to destroy Joshua, at any cost, no matter who may get hurt in the process, including himself. Excellent chapter, even though I also felt like I was watching a slow motion train wreck take place. No signs of any writers block, shown with this chapter. Next chapter, it will be time to start picking up the pieces.
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They All Noticed Something Is Different
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in They All Noticed Something Is Different
An excellent chapter as to all the parents reactions to Stephen and Micheal's relationship, which displayed a great love and understanding towards their sons. Pete and Alex continued to just go with the flow, as to any unkind reactions to their buddies relationship. @Lee Wilson did plant a few landmines to cause some possible havoc in future chapters, where they could be tripped to explode our future emotions. I will consider this chapter to be a gift, until that happens!- 36 comments
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Khonsu's statement sounds very predictive and bestows Reggi with some amazing powers to learn and also master, before they will be needed. 🤔 Now that the estate business and plans have been decided, it and his mother's well being, will be left in Mark's capable hands, as a return to London is deemed necessary. Khonsu has left Reggi and his friends with profound changes to figure out! Reggi is now a wizard, with the powers capable to defeat any threats posed by the Lady in Black. Sounds good to me.
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It appears Daniel has his own group of protectors. This should not be the end of of this reunion. I can see where this situation will work itself out. It wouldn't be bad to have some bikers with batons, around for back-up, if needed.
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All good things must come to an end. We can all see that Victor's vengeance will crash this party. Jonah is his main target, but Will could be used by Victor to wreak havoc. He is there for a reason, and it is definitely not to celebrate the triplets birthdays!
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More Pool, A Trip North, and Oops
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Pool, A Trip North, and Oops
Yep, that pretty much sums up this chapter. Was I surprised? Very much so. Who would have thought that Jeff would actually work on becoming a better person, and seems to have accepted going to military school, with a surprisingly more positive attitude. The fact that Stephen and Micheal started to experiment with jacking off, was not as surprising, to me. Boys will be boys after all. This play probably did a world of good for Stephen, and his attitude towards his body imperfections, more than we will ever know. The future discussions the parents have with their boys. is where our interest should be focused on for now. Looking forward to see how that works out❣️- 40 comments
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Some very important Egyptian magic was bestowed to Reggi. What will be his his density? With the gifted knowledge of the secrets of the ancient universe, the threats posed by the Lady in Black, seems to have become his to deal with. With the support and help of his growing group of allies, Reggi feels determined they will be able to face whatever the future may have in store for them, with confidence in his recent gifted powers and responsibilities. That is a hugh amount of pressures that has come to rest firmly upon his shoulders! The future is calling for him to step up, and assume his new roles. Wow❣️
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Pool, a Fool, and Home/Away School
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Pool, a Fool, and Home/Away School
What an important chapter this appears to have been. All the characters were trying to deal with previously known or unknown facts, and taking what they thought were the best reactions, to a host of situations. Jeff was very due for a course correction, due to his past and present foul and mean tempered behaviors, to all concerned. Especially his threatening actions towards his mother! Stephen's family were trying to reduce the pressures that he had not shared previously, as to the very bad experiences that were directed at him, in their other town, and school. I love how this story is developing, and I am looking forward to much more of your unique tale! It is a story that truly tugs on one's heartstrings! -
What or who was the charity benefiting from the event? Was it ever mentioned? Everything went very well with Reggi's introduction to the power brokers of London. So far, the Lady in Black has not made her intention known, for why she was now in the city. 🤔 That mystery will continue to lurk in the background, for now.
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Bob the Blabbermouth Bed
Flip-Flop commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Bob the Blabbermouth Bed
@Lee Wilson continues with his efforts to spread his own form of "bedlam" in the furniture world! What more could this author possibly bring to the table?
