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Jack and Vince feel happy and accepted by the pack and Theo's parents. They learned the Whiteflame still...." guards the realm to prevent all kinds of evil from spilling into the worlds." They still need to react with others in the real world.
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Jake survived the horrible night in his dorm and left to get coffee and admire Kody again. He almost asked him out on a first date, but things got awkward when Max walked in and saw him behind the counter. Will Jake apply for a job?
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Chapter 10: The Cave Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: The Cave Episode
What does it say about Voss that she fixates on a synthetic human who is scared of her? -
Chapter 10: The Cave Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: The Cave Episode
They always seem to survive and they did not have to eat the foul, alien based chili Enough of Barium Silicate or the Slug's kidney stone was brought back to keep the ship running. Poor Guy! He is Counselor Voss's singular object of affection and hates it. -
Chapter 1: The Illusions of Sand
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Illusions of Sand
So--this is like the TV show 24 hours ! West drove Peter and Jacob through the rioting crowds to safety at the British Embassy Will and Andrew are at the palace and cut off from them. The palace has been attacked. Andrew is leading Will away. Will has lost his glasses and needs to follow Andrew This is a violent, unpredictable situation -
What a horrible story of peoplewho will not take any more punishment and repression. The dictator's 42 year old reign seems to be coming to any end. This country will go through a great upheaval. Lots of lives will likely be lost. Why are West and Peter in Tripoli? They are in danger and West feels it.
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Will Carter faced the most serious political disaster of his career. He held his seat but the Liberal Party was down to a small standing in Parliament. He has to decide what to do and find allies. Julian Defresne, his sociopathic opponent, will take over the control of his party. The country is undergoing a severe financial crisis and needs international help. The PM appoints as his trade representative to find help from the Chinese i Hong Kong. He does not know Andrew is going to be with him to stop the FSB hidden role in the crisis. Andrew will face multiple efforts to stop him and kill him. Chinese intelligence will be watching him. This is a fascinating ,complex story worthy of a Carter tale. You need to read on to the end through the back and forth contours of the plot to find out who wins and loses.
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The presentation beforenthe court was detailed but eventually the Sura clan was exonerated. The Baselius apologized to Azula. The Dowager Basilinna Olneth was confined to her quarters under heavy guard and stripped of her privileges, Investigations were ordered with a two week deadline. This was all good news. I do not think those who benefited from the Sura Clan disgrace will be inactive. They might kill key people and sabotage the investigation. Raith needs to be watchful. Azula still needs to decide whether or not to support Lyria.
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Chapter 15: The Wilderness
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Wilderness
What a good. conclusive final chapter. There are no loose ends. Andrew and Yani indirectly saved the economy. Will accepted his backbench role and plans for the future. Andrew and Will's family and friends are comfortably together. Now, what is going to disturb their lives next? -
Miles gave him the push he needed Then left Troy was strong enough to follow his dream. Owen became part of his life
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Troy needs closure He asked the key question "Miles, Why did you leave me?"
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Chapter 14: Ascent and Descent
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: Ascent and Descent
When Libya fel; into a crisis GADDAFI was overthrown. The mobs who found him fucked his ass and mouth as a final humiliation -
Chapter 9: The Holodeck Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9: The Holodeck Episode
Doc carefully reasoned with counselor Voss. She had to give the reality program or they all would die. She was an addict for the 19th century ballroom program. She was needed and this program would end in 20 minutes Voss said "end program" and it did The crew now has a therapist -
Chapter 14: Ascent and Descent
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: Ascent and Descent
The battle with the FSB agent was sustained and brutal. Andrew was not winning. The RCMP officer arrived and shot and killed the FSB agent The matter was settled and the Canadian delegation earning what it sought. Andrew was secretly handed the software package before he got on the plane Will and Andrew deserve a long rest. -
Travis agreed to go with Will. He did not know what was in store for him. When he found out hewas going to be gone for weeks, he was very disturbed. He thought he would be replaced on his show. Travis has a nurse and doctor abd is being treated for drug withdrawl. The next week will be very painful. After his trip to Hawaii, Travis is being put in a rehab facility. He may stay there 8 weeks He told Will he hated him. Is he going to feel that way when he leaves rehab?
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Expectations are very high for a meaningful resolution. Will it be a win-win or lose-lose?
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Barnaby and his friends travel through time to stop a serial killer who is ending key individuals who know the future and can finger who is the killer. Acting on a cryptic note, they chase the killer through 4 millennia to find the him. What dangers will they face? Will they all survive? Will the serial killer escape to torment Barnaby again?
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Once again, Barnaby and crew travel through time to stop someone intending on v changing history for evil purposes. Barnaby keeps his cool as prblems mount, The killer refuses to be stoped. " "To catch a killer who is running from tomorrow, you simply wait for them in the place they failed to undo." They are victorious. Horay!
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Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
Failure means death to the FSB agents. They dare not fail. -
Whispers in the Alcove
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Whispers in the Alcove
Bastien wants another heavyy sex session with Lawrence. Will he top Lawrence? -
Chapter 8: The Space Battle Episode
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8: The Space Battle Episode
OMG --They raided the enemy warship and stripped it of all useful items. They are are whole and strong "They were broken, they were traumatized, and they were utterly unhinged. They were a crew of heavily armed marauders drifting through a hostile universe." And soon, they will have a huge target on their back. -
Julian worked the land coffee plants with the workers. He stayed to the end and earned their respect. Clarke noticed him changing. "You’re standing in your own life,” he says. “Not running from it. Not waiting for someone else to tell you what it is.” Julian is really anticipating the arrival of Sam and thinks of him often.
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Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
Is Andrew going to push or throw the FSB agent of the roof? The guy threatened Will and the kids. Andrew is mad in turn. -
Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
Two victories tonight, Will was happy a good trade treaty was signed with China. Andrew was pleased that the FSB effort to steal $ billions and blamed China failed miserably. The FSB software was corrupted and the plan to steal money was stopped. There will be some very mad Russian leaders who counted on becoming much richer. -
Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Dragon, The Lion, The Beaver, and The Bear
Twice the FSB has been defeated tonight The three agents tried to kidnap Becky and her RCMP protector roughed them up and the three Canadians fled to a waiting vehicle Then as Will and Andrew with the two boys got into the elevator another man got in. Andrew realized he was a senior FSB agent who held a hidden gun on Will. Andrew signaled he would go with him instead of Will. Andrew was the knowledgeable guy any way. As Will got off, Andrew told him in code words he was in trouble. Will told his nearby RCMP agent, Will was in trouble. What happened next will fit in CSIS great stories. Arriving on the roof, Andrew asked if he could take his coat off and the FSB agent agreed and did not see Andrew's attack flooring him.
