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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter Five

    OMG--Joey keeps making bad decisions. He is back in Warren and is leaving on a job for Ronnie in Cleveland, Dam reached him by phone and told him to stay in Warren, He was coming to get him. He had already killed a guy coming after Joey. D is going to miss Joey who has left his home for Cleveland. Can D find Joey in time to save him from being killed in Cleveland?
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    Chapter 9

    I think the late evening when the teenagers return or begin to eat breakfast the next morning could be the scene of a firestorm. Celia and Trace seeing how messed up Joel is will demand answers from Joel and Colt. Joel will try to play his situation down. Colt might dig his own grave by saying he was not near Joel and was not a part of the fight. Whatever happens more questions will be asked by the parents and Colt and feelings will be hurt. Joel might even withdraw even more. He is likely going to be part of a wider rumor campaign after the fight. It will be soon known at his old school that Joel has left his former school.
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    Chapter 14

    Hmmm---"The devil fiddles." Well, then he needs to meet the witchhunter soon, I suggest
  4. “This is for your athletic performance,” he said, voice level. “You want to be loose on the rings.” “Yes, Coach.” Ha! This is for Casper's pleasure as he really train Eli to submit to him. "My only job was him. My mouth. His pleasure." "Maybe it was serving him. And maybe that should’ve scared me. But it didn’t." Eli is totally hooked and Mason is on him and wants to know what is happening to Eli
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    They are becoming more comfortable and attuned to each other--- “There are things I’m seein’… tis more’n I dreamed of an’ I want t’ thank you fer it. For bringin’ me here, for showin’ me all this.” Wojciech turned his head slightly, feeling Stoker’s strong arms and broader frame surrounding him. He sighed, a deep, contented sound, sinking into the comfort and safety they offered to him. In this moment, with Stoker’s arms around him, the world outside, with its looming wars and mad Witchhunters, felt distant, almost unreal. Sin be damned, there were evils in the world, and in the streams. But one thing he knew, he just knew it, was that right then, right there, with Stoker, there was nothing evil about them. Their connection was pure, unburdened.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    What a great tragedy. The fourth bandit followed them and killed Sam's sleeping parents and was ready to kill him. A fight ensued. Sam was righteously energized and fiercely attacked the bandit and killed him suffering a knife stab wound. While recovering, Mr Kent, the blacksmith, came to the cabin and learned of the sad deaths. He left to get others. Sam found a wonderful site to bury his parents. He knew he had to prepare their grave by himself. Now what happens with Sam and the knight and the townspeople? I think Sam needs to get away and clear his mind and focus on new things, not the sad past.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    The peaceful garden was just another way station. They returned to the transit station to be unnerved hearing a violin playing. What now?
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 35

    I can see ways those who think they are in charge lose their way and are destroyed Sir Mason Defarge was to control all intel and thinks he is going to get it--But other agencies, Like MI6, will oppose him. New intel from other sources who will be looking to oppose Defarge will counter his narrative--intercepts of Sinclair's phone call to Enrico and Yanni's analysis and be useful Sinclair is blissfully unaware of Enrico's and Xue's opposition to his plans. I can see Xue killing Sinclair. Enrico has to decide if he is going to kill Jared or leave him to talk to implicate potentially Sinclair in the sub mess and give them a scapegoat to take the blame as they flee Right now, other things have to happen to show us what Templeman and Will can do. Are they at dead ends? How can Templeman find Ezea? Will can conduct an inhouse investigation and might turn up Yanni. Could Templeman call her on Andrew's phone if he needs help? Argh.....
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    Andrew and his crew mates are heroes, and their outstanding results will safeguard them from Lord Mason who cannot touch them. The Royal Navy will protect them and interview them. Andrew will report the involvement of the Northen Aegis Defense company which will require a heavy security move on the London company HQ. Will the PM see he has made a mistake and return MI5 to its full posture? I can see a leak to the press. The PM's reputation is on the line
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Joel made a huge mistake going to the falls. Colt was hostile and was upset that Joel was with him and his family. He was not told why Joel was with them. Plus, Colt was picking up his girlfriend and they intended to be close as they drank at the falls. Joel met two people from his school who were surprised to see him. Luckily the baseball team was at practice. One loud mouth bully from his high school shouted at him and made people notice, They got into a fight and multiple punched were thrown, Joel's knuckles was bloodied and messed up. Joel moved away. Davin sought to comfort him and help him with an ice pack. He went through reasons why Joel might have moved away. He ticked off some reasons not mentioning that he was gay. Joel hesitated and realized he had to be careful. Right now he feared the answer. I also think if Colt finds out Joel is gay, he will get upset. The fallout from the fight at home could be epic. Joel better have an explanation. Colt is already mad at Joel and he is messing with his time with his girlfriend,
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter Four

    OMG----D finally put Joey on a bus and told him to go west. Joey got on and got off. He asked for a bus ticket to Warfen, Ohio.He had to go home where he was needed. He did not understand that he was going to be killed and maybe others in his family also. Joey felt he did not fit anywhere else. D was taken by Joey who he thought was beautiful and a virgin. Joey at the end felt D was very appealing and he was confused. The stage is set for a potential disaster with lots of death with at least Joey and D targeted, D dropped the ball and would pay with his life unless he is lucky. Will D spirit Joey away now that he may no longer have a home?
  12. I am so sorry for the harassment you went through for what you have written. I hope you can put this painful experience away and can look ahead with a positive attitude knowing you are appreciated. I am glad you have largely resolved the matter. Please do take the time you need to recover. You should enjoy and feel good about what you write, and it will show through in your chapters.
  13. akascrubber

    Fisting Finn

    Interesting----Tomato Martini Combine 2–3 large basil leaves, ½ cup Sun Gold or cherry tomatoes (about 5), halved, a pinch of kosher salt, and a pinch of sugar in a cocktail shaker or large glass. Smash with a muddler until tomatoes are broken up and pulpy, about 30 seconds. Add 2 oz. gin, 1 oz. dry vermouth, and 1 cup ice and stir until outside of shaker is frosty, about 30 seconds. Strain cocktail through a fine-mesh sieve into a chilled martini glass (this will remove any tomato bits and seeds). Thread remaining 1 whole cherry tomato onto a cocktail pick and garnish cocktail
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    Much better learning how to take on guys with hocky training versus Quidditch--no brooms in a sub. Andrew was masterful, powerful and lethal when needed. If he really had been in the Royal Navy , he would deserve a medal for saving the lives of UK sailors and saving the sub.
  15. akascrubber

    The Healer

    Danny healed Ryder, his mate, with one kiss then another. Now, he is placing his hand over a wound on Ryder's father injured chest to fully heal him. He realized he had a great calling, "Danny understood his purpose. It was to love and care for his mate’s pack, and it felt so natural that he could no longer see how he’d never been aware of it before."
  16. "And Lyn didn't have to wear a dress made from the draperies." Yet...Who knows what Alexander has planned
  17. Are you abandoning this story? Please don't
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    And Stoker will use powerful, addicting sex play that Hugo really wants to force the renamed Hugi to accept his new endearing name. It will further break down their class barriers
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Hugi--it will shock and torment Hugo if Stoker calls him Hugi!
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    The witchhunter forced them to move on using his flintlock as a reason. They followed a new path and reached an out of sequence metronome. Hugo figured out what was wrong and adjusted the metronome until a new catwalk appeared, He and the witchhunter began to walk along the catwalk. Hugo realized it was flexible and warned his nemesis to throw way the pistol or he would shake the catwalk and let the witchhunter fall into the abyss. The witchhunter fired wrongly at Hugo and fell over the side, Stoker asked if he was dead. Hugo said he will survive since he still has his watch, but they do longer have one. They will move on with the protection of a watch. The witchunter might find them again. More danger...
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    I want to find out how Andrew and the crew are saved. So far, I hear speculation. I expect Andrew is going to return with his family to Canada. Only 4 chapters to go--The tension is building
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter Three

    Joey is living a poor sad life, but it is all he knows. His luck ran out and he saw something he should not have seen. Vinnie wants him dead D takes joey out and tells him he is going to die soon if he goes home. He saw something he should not haves seen. Joey is bewildered and does not understand why he cannot go home. He has responsibilities, D offers him cash and a bus ticket away. But, Joey still wants to go home. For some unknown reassort D knocks him out. Life is going to change for both of them They will be on the run with D in charge. I cannot wait to see how they act and stay safe.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    Andrew did it. He took the right advantage and killed one thug and then used his weapon to kill two more thugs. Then he approached the control room and convince Bravo, the last mercenary to give up or be killed. Bravo surrendered and was zip tied, It is over. Andrew was a hero and made the difference. Now they have to notify the Russian sun and looming UK warship that they are in control and will need to leave. The rescue sub is available.
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    Chapter 8

    The title of this story is "Learned to Lie" Does this mean Joel is going to learn to lie about his past and sexual orientation? I do not think he can keep why he moved hidden for an extended period of time. Gossip and rumors travel fast. I think Joel will need his own convincing story or maybe his version of the truth.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 58

    The plans for the expansion of the house are coming together. Ten fleets are established giving the house overwhelming force to intimate others and maintain order. Marc and Adam are very pleased. They are bringing together their children and grandchildren to see what they are doing This assembly is encouraging Marc and Adam to have more children. They like being parents. They are also happy to see their children take over the leadership of ships.
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