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Lee Wilson

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  1. All awesome suggestions, truck, shed, hail; none of them large enough to do the damaged deserved. Swimming pool? Too easy to get out of. A sewer? Now that's redundant, a pile of shit falling into an even larger pile of shit?
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 13 S2

    I should have read more comments before I said almost the same thing. Great chapter. It's awesome how the two families remain close even after having been separated for a number of years. As far as the search, couldn't they cover even more ground as eagles or falcons? When they find a cave, land in it and transition back to human, which they'd have to do anyway to take the treasure away. Also, a large bird can go back to where they have their clothes were stashed, carry them in a bundle to the cave, and walk out not being naked. How are wolves going to carry anything?
  3. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 13 S2

    You can be younger and still like music from the 50's and 60's. I have a number of old songs on my phone.
  4. I promise, a house won’t fall on her.
  5. She’s a witch, with a capital B. She’ll get what’s coming to her.
  6. Then you won’t be disappointed. 😈
  7. Thanks. Like I said above, chapter nine isn't completely wrapped up yet. I may have to change Stephanie's future.
  8. Good thing I'm not completely done with chapter 9. That's an awesome suggestion. Or not.
  9. Thanks. I'm pretty sure I don't create second class bitches 😁
  10. I'm sure action could have been taken. But as young Karl though, it looked like Stephanie was skipping town. Woo hoo. I'm a ten-thousand-aire!
  11. Thanks. I didn't think of it that way, but good point. Just exercising my patent pending creation of horrible antagonists. Not on purpose. If it was, it was my subconscious talking.
  12. Karl brought Calvin and Barry in for their appointments a week after the funerals. Having child patients, we had a separate room with toys and books appropriate for all ages. It was in sight of the nurse I shared with a few other doctors. Barry played in there while I spoke to Cal. Karl remained in my office with us. "How do you like living with your uncle?" "I like it, I guess. I don't have a choice, right?" "Not really, but what other choice would you prefer?" "Being with M
  13. I doubt anyone will complain.
  14. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 8

    I interpreted it differently because of the later part: “I was gay for you the moment I saw you. And do you want to know the truth? It pissed me off at first I was thinking he didn’t think he was gay then.
  15. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 8

    So, Liam is only gay for Mike. Guess he’s pan. Definitely does open the door for a double date with the girls now that certain thresholds have been crossed.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 17

    I pretty much knew it was going to stop before they went too far. But knowing it will never be finished…😢
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 48

    I had another thought about where this was heading. Twister city. My thinking that Calvin got custody was only an interim state. Calvin Sr.’s life insurance goes to Diego in trust for the boys, because senior knows he adopted them, and wants them to benefit from it, not junior. When the money isn’t there he gives up his parental rights and the Padilla family lives happily ever after. Okay, so I can dream.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 48

    Writing them is definitely better than reading them. 😀
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 48

    At the very least, Diego should press Billy to explain exactly what he’s trying to gain by continuing to piss off the judge. I’m starting to fear this won’t turn out like we’re all expecting. If Billy is setting up an appeal, the kids are gone. Calvin will get custody and disappear without a trace before the appeal ever happens.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Sneak Away 4

    And now, here we are, 3 1/2 months later and this and all the rest of his unfinished stories leave us wishing he had more time on this earth to be able to complete them.
  21. Thanks, and a good reminder. Fire has got to be one of, if not the worst, ways to die.
  22. Thanks. An antagonist needs to be bad, even a minor one. Otherwise, what’s the point? 🤪
  23. I understand, and you're right. It's likely nobody else can do them justice. Aside from a hand-picked successor, like I said, maybe it's best to leave them as they are.
  24. I didn't really know him at all, except by reputation here. Still, I was shocked when @Sherye Story Reader told me. I know I've read a couple of his stories - there are just too many to have gotten too far in the relatively short time I've been here or on nifty. I have to echo what @James Carnarvon said about his stories never being finished and add that it's sad that he'll never see the comments that are yet to be written by people still reading him for the first time. Very sad. I wonder if the rest of the folks here might chip in and continue some of his unfinished work... Maybe it's best to leave them as they are. RIP Comsie.
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