Lee Wilson

Why isn’t there a groan emoji?

I know. It’s difficult to not keep sharing.

I’ve written both ways, a chapter at a time, never getting too far ahead; and completed a story before I started posting. Switched over to the second mode after I had three stories going at the same time. I think I pulled that off ok, but I like being further ahead. Still tweaking chapter by chapter, but essentially complete. 5000 words in a day? I think I’ve done that in a couple hours a few times. Motivation is a big factor. I can just as easily struggle with getting through a chapter over multiple days. The key for all of us is write at whatever rate you’re comfortable with. I know as a reader, I want more, faster. I also know that isn’t always possible for a writer. Case in point, I just completely caught up with Ridley Pearson’s ‘Kingdom Keeper’ series's, along with ‘The Return’ and ‘Inheritance.’ I finished a couple of those in a single day. I highly recommend them, even though they’re intended for teenagers, I thought the series was awesome.

Whoa, completely didn’t expect that. Hopefully that doesn’t make things weird for them tomorrow. I have to wonder if Olivia is the kind of girlfriend that helps the gay boy look straight. I’m not sure, but Liam and Mike’s nocturnal activity might have gone a little, shit, waaaay past “normal” experimentation.

Good chapter, lots of topics to digest. Kind of sad they’ll need to kill off a couple of the coyotes, but that’s Darwin for you. Gave me a thought, could they transition to extinct creatures? A T-rex would scare the shit out of the coyotes.

Or can become a larger animal. 😀

Don’t feel bad, I had exactly the same thought. Gramps and Pop spying on the boys to see how they were doing.

Gotta wait this one out. Not sure where it's going. Interesting though.

Indeed. I wonder, since that comes in chapter 7, maybe I should post it early? As a matter of fact, a whole lot happens in chapter 7. I should really delay the posting. 😈 Guess y'all need to check in tomorrow to see if I'm naughty, or nice.

I suppose that may depend on the exact definition of survival. Was it successful? Maybe not. Was it a severe loss? Losses come in varying degrees.

Hmm, should I say whether you’re close or not? Maybe you had gotten your hands on an early draft of chapter 7. Maybe not.

Step two might be devious as well, we shall see. Evidence comes in many forms. Some, even circumstantial. Confession is good for the soul.

No details, but there will be more than one. One with mostly the truth, but not all of the truth, and another, well, let's just say for the Warden's ears only.

The next morning at breakfast, Mo told Fred about his altercation with the guard, Dennison. "I guess he was tired of me just giving him blowjobs. He wanted to fuck me." "Geez, Mo. I feel bad that you had to do that to see me." "No worries. It was a small price to pay to be with you. Unfortunately, making love may have to wait a while. There's no way I'm letting that dickhead fuck me. That type of contact is reserved just for you." "You can be sweet when you want to." Mo

Yeah, I noticed the black Zach on a later re-read. Thanks for the compliment.

Yep, soon they’ll all be one big happy org… er, family.

How subservient. I hope Toby doesn’t get abused. He’ll obviously be getting used, though.

You may be right, and I may be crazy, (sorry Billy), but you might be looking in the wrong direction for the ugly.

The sex cements their feelings, but sex alone wouldn’t have done it. A good synopsis and not an awful prediction. But what kind of mess?

That feeling would seem to be the case. It will become more evident… Say, around Thursday. Since he works the night shift, he doesn’t have too much interaction with other guards. Mo might be safe.

That they will. Perhaps as the saying goes, absence makes the heart grow fonder. The lawyer is pretty useless.

Time passes slowly for Fred. The night after Mo had sex with him, Fred gave Mo another blowjob. Fred couldn't justify calling their sex fucking, Mo was too gentle. Meals were spent with Mo and the rest of his gang. Fred started to feel comfortable, even unafraid. Mo was indeed watching out for him. That didn't mean he didn't attempt to grow eyes in the back of his head. He remained aware of his surroundings when he wasn't with Mo. Fortunately, that time had shrunk considerably since the first da

Maybe, but I wouldn’t count on Watson.

No, just decided to go ahead. I know what I learned from @kbois has helped me make this better. And you’re right about the re-reading. I’m probably well over five cycles. I find something every time through, but less each time.

1. It’s still early in his sentence. The lawyer may yet appear. 2. Servicing one is much better than many. 3. Yep, Fred has to play it cool to survive. 4. I wonder. Or will it become a love triangle. The suspense is killing me. Oh, wait, I know the ending.