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  1. Cane23

    No Going Back

    You've posted a gallery of interesting characters here, to count only living: Mihairi, the sister, probably the biggest Owen's support in the future (unlike the past); Nathan, hypocritical and bigoted sister's ex; Joseph, sympathetic nephew (possible gay also); new Minister, possible leader of the inquisition against town homosexuals; Lawrence, the boss and powerful man in the town (he might be interested in Hargraves' inheritance); some old friends, or, maybe "friends"...Joey and Simon (there is still question who betrayed Owen)...we still have to meet Colin (we know him from synopsis) and who knows how many more interesting personalities! There are so many possibilities to develop story, I'm really curious and eager to find out... I like the settings especially - English province has always reminded me on the best literature classics.
  2. Cane23

    Seeing it all

    Nice chapter, Toby continue exploring... He and Noah might be cute couple. Why should Noah be worried about outing to his parents when his older brother is gay also?!
  3. Cane23

    No Going Back

    Great start of this new story, so intriguing and captivating. I am really hooked on it and can't wait another chapter. It is interesting to see your writing talent appears in a bit more serious genre than much beloved Brian's story.
  4. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    Yes it is.
  5. Cane23

    Chapter 4

    Coop didn't get much information from previous owner, at least he knows it's something about windows. This is not a job for a lawyer, he will have to look for an exorcist...
  6. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    There are many good and strong shifters to fight baddies, but there is only one light shifter... And there are not only hybrids to heal, the world is sick, it needs a light! But, as I said, not my story to tell. @kbois can make him evil or dad...hell, it wouldn't be her first time, wouldn't it? 😜
  7. I have written in Review that this is the most intimate and the most tender love story @Mrsgnomie has ever written. With Max and Reid I expect something totaly different, something fast and furious! 🙂 They have such energy and so stubborn and strong characters that story will be funny, crazy, with lot of twists and turns and certainly more drama... Oh, and some wild sex too... 😂
  8. Cane23

    Chapter 10

  9. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    Such waste of energy...but ok, your story, your rules!
  10. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    Asa is a healer, his mission is to repair, not to destroy. He is such a divine creature that I believe it would be sacrilege using him in combat. But it is Kage who is protecting them all the time. At the end of the previous chapter, I've been thinking that it was Kage who helped Sebastian spare Caleb's life in 2nd story. Kage's shadow might fall on the enemies...
  11. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    Life is so cruel!
  12. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    I have no words to comment this!
  13. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    Second reading...of course you gave us signs at the beginning, of course the only way to be cured is to be cured together... Read carefully Cane, read carefully!!!
  14. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    But it was such a tender and emotional moment... Isn't it wonderful?! I really hope that nobody expected situation like - "Caleb and Vann looked in each other's eyes. In that moment both of them new...they were running spreading arms. Caleb cried - Oh, son of mine...Vann replied - Oh, I knew you are my dad"!!! Caramba, that would be some telenovela! 😂
  15. Cane23

    Chapter 10

    I'm so overwhelmed by this chapter that I have been sobbing half of it. I have to compose myself before reading all the comments and share my own.
  16. Yea, yea...I know you. We are going to make a million theories about Bahamas holiday, and you are going to start a story like - "Max has been sitting in Caffee, waiting for Kyan and Bahama holiday from two months ago seemed as something happened in the previous life..."! 😜
  17. Cane23

    Chapter 9

    Now that she finished her story, she can be hyperactive with yours! 🤪
  18. Cane23

    Chapter 7

    This was beautiful chapter, so emotional...honestly, I didn't expect that...I thought it's all about passion, lust and sexual exploration. But this is different, more serious in a nice way. Well, sometimes a lot of alcohol is needed to open your heart and soul. Story is very hot, but I'm glad that there is more to it than just sex.
  19. Cane23

    Chapter 9

    craziness is directly proportional to the content of the chapter!
  20. Cane23

    Chapter 9

    ...and you have chapter to publish...or, it might be two if the wedding party went crazy...
  21. There is something childish and innocent in Kyan which is both charming and cute... but not always easy for Perry to handle it... ...stay with us...I mean, really?! 😂🤣
  22. Ah Gracie... 😂 Thank you for this scene @Mrsgnomie, a huge payback for skipping approval moment at the end of the previous chapter! 🙂
  23. Cane23

    Up the bum

    Good to know! 😂
  24. Startin from today, I have nowhere else to go!
  25. Somehow, I believe that this is exactly what is going to happen! Maybe with little "help" from Kyan and Perry around reservations! 😜
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