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Everybody likes 'Star Wars' - it's not sci-fi, it's a fairytale! 😁
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🤣😂🤣 Well @Paladin your characters are certainly not waiting - always straight at the point! 😁 You've made a nice little mystery around Aaron! Who is he and where is he from? Might be from the future but might be an alien... Is he one of those honest people without filter, or there is a light spectrum of Asperger there? Great start - funny and intriguing!
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Wives, boyfriends and families
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Wives, boyfriends and families
The best argumentation ever! If you have problem with it than take the twins!- 18 comments
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I know it's ridicules being jealous of fictional characters, but I really envy their sex life, stamina and passion. It's so tender and emotional how Quinn takes care of Orion's legs and scars. Sex is great but this is love.
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gastroenterologist - Word of the Day - Sat Oct 12, 2024
Cane23 commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Death of Jeremy's father rises some questions. Why would anybody wont a death of good, honest, family man? Unless...it was a family member, or someone very close to family who saw him as obstacle. Carter didn't say the complete story - the part about his mother and twin brother. Could Jeremy connect the facts based on that information or it is still too early for that?
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The Drop in Centre
Cane23 replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
You have no idea how happy I am to hear you are well!!!!!! I've been watching news last night...actually, the impact happened early in the morning CET. -
I agree with @Al Norris very informative (educative) story! Gender issue is so complex...as human nature is, I suppose. You wrapped it nicely in a romantic story! Thank you @CassieQ!
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Beautiful! Unlike 'en pointe' I see the trace of light here! Barking dogs seldom bite! Always remember - lash is in your hands! xo
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Written in poetic style, no verses but story you could easily recite on the stage - simply marvelous! Such conflict of emotions - both regrets and reliefs; sadness and acceptance of end. We see that love doesn't die the day when it's over, it cannot be switched off. You ended the story An Accidental Clarity with words "You are human...!" It's exactly what this story says - being human, having emotions and memories... Oh, how I envy the people who can turn around and never look back!
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Ahahhahahhahah, Lee, you are CRAZY!!! Only YOU can take topic 'In Too Deep' literary! 😂 Good you haven't written about colonoscopy!!! 😂 Still laughing...😂🤣🤣
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The Drop in Centre
Cane23 replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
I'm shocked watching the scenes of destruction on net! Thinking of you, guys. Stay safe, take care of yourself and your families! Cane xoxo -
The most amazing conclusion for the most controversial topic of the story! 😂 After all the time that has passed, it is not more than an anecdote, but I understand their need to grab HEA without secrets. Great ending to a great story, I've kept my thoughts for the Review! 😉
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Your poems are so lyric and calm. Nature is endless inspiration, and you show the Nature in all her glory through your verses. I like poetry but reading it might be a challenge for someone whose native language is not English. It cannot be a fast read for sure.
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Orion and Quinn's road to love could be titled with Shakespeare's The Taming of the Shrew! Nevertheless, these guys complement each other ideally - both in bed and office! Planner and executive! 😁 I haven't missed that Caleb has been with Quinn's family. In some early chapters, he expressed interest in Aiden, but it has not been mentioned that Aiden is gay. Does it mean they are an item now?! 🤔 Another great chapter @P. E. Knapp, if I can make a wish...I would like more exciting events at the see (diving, sailing...). You marvelously write adventures at sea!
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Shirts, sociability and well-filled jockstraps
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Shirts, sociability and well-filled jockstraps
I have to admit, Ralph has easily become my favorite @Robert Hugill's character! Probably because I find him very similar to me ! Once again @Robert Hugill has proved himself as master writing ordinary things - extraordinary and exciting. Shopping e.g. I've been there, so I know that exciting feeling and insecurity trying to find something new, something you, actually, like. It is amazing to exit your comfort zone, even if it is only buying a shirt or briefs (btw, knickers - new word to me). And then, liberating feeling waring something new, exciting, sexy - feeling good! The following photo session is going to be interesting - Ralph and Nolan, Russ...and newly married couple as bonus! I cannot wait to see that encounter. Ralph is looking for some 'real' friends, well, with Emil and Marcus, plus Brian and Gordon - who could ask for more?! -
“...you and Uncle Andre have shown me that it’s possible to be gay and have good lives, that you can be qualified and have good jobs, that you can be in a loving relationship, you can be good parents, and you can be open about being gay and the world doesn’t have to come crashing down around you... Both of you are our role models. You have shown us that we don’t have to be worried about being gay, we just have to be good people...” This beautiful extract from the last chapter of this amazing story summarizes the plot and gives the moral to remember! Following the lives of Andre and Chris, we see their emotional growth, tightening of their relationship, the influence they make on their family, friends and surrounding. Good people, indeed. Story starts as a light-spirited romantic tale about relationship between two extraordinary guys we have already met in prequel 'Beau'. Playfully 'dancing' at the edge, but never crossing the line of monogamy, @Paladin gives his homage to gay lifestyle writing about erotic skinny dipping, mutual showers or gentle cuddling between friends, partners and lovers. As story progress, demons from the past occurs, threatening the happiness of the main protagonists. Overcoming every obstacle, they become the central gathering point of family and friends. They become the role models for young boys, someone always ready to listen, help and support. Dealing with child abuse, health issues, children care and fostering, cybercriminal, new technologies...but also love, friendship, caring and supporting - Andre and Chris are traveling this amazing journey through 30 chapters, making readers smile, cry and enjoy with them. I suggest you read a prequel 'Beau', charming story which introduce us to main characters and setup a stage for 'Andre and Chris'.
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Does anyone have a friendly poltergeist haunting their house?
Cane23 replied to Page Scrawler's topic in The Lounge
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The trouble with real life
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The trouble with real life
Oh, if she only knew how 'urban' Ludo and Arthur's 'lifestyle' is!!!- 12 comments
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Yes, when Ralph mentioned 'underground' Nazi experiments, it has instantly reminded me of notorious dr. Josef Mengele who conducted experiments on Jewish twins in Auschwitz. His nickname was the 'Angel of Death'. Ralph pose and attitude reminds a little bit of some SS officer. There's amazing movie The Boys from Brazil with Gregory Peck and Laurence Olivier. Mengele is alive in Brazil, making experiments with Hitler's DNA in order to clone him. Nevertheless, back to the story... I like this combination of mystery and adventure with teenage romance. I'm anxious to find out who are Norwegians?!
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I would say it's bottom in charge, at leat in this story. 🤔 Maybe I'm wrong...
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Mitches are bitches! 🤪
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Making plans and meeting Verne
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Making plans and meeting Verne
That picture is going to hang above fireplace, to be seen by parents at Ralph and Nolan's wedding! Maybe with Donald Mitchel's reproductions on another wall... -
Making plans and meeting Verne
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Making plans and meeting Verne
I'm sure about 'opening'! If I remember well - Russ, Gordon and Brian like to play together, so, one pair more - the merrier party!
