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When the handcuffs came into play I figured it was Marty, the detective husband, and that meant Frankie was safe and being lovingly tickled and molested.
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Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
I surprised @Summerabbacat that your mind would turn to preserving her. I thought 'rot in hell' would have been your preference. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Noah is the younger sibling. Maria is Benjamin's twin and also almost legally an adult. Noah is the one stuck with Natasha, and yes he needs support. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
When Natasha, through others , becomes an effective threat, Simon will be there to help. You are right @Flip-Flop there is more to learn and, more turmoil. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
I think you will still find it satisfying. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
You will need to wait and keep reading to find out if your efforts work and she gets buried. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
I can identify with this. I have two 12 year old sister black and white cats. They both believe the other should leave so they can be an only cat. 😾😸 -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Ben, Maria and Noah all attend the same school so he has chances to talk to them. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
And she does dig deeper. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Martin will have more to deal with than just Natasha. 😉 -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Very true @Daddydavek 😼 -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
She will try @mayday -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
How did you guess @Ticklishboy30 that there's still more turmoil. 😻 -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Natasha is nasty and vicious but totally not strategic. More of Nathan soon. He's still happily working in Adelaide. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
I love it @Cane23. Martin does have a choice of titles, but Doctor requires the least explanation. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
We don't get to meet the boyfriend but 'like minded' would be accurate. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Martin, Benjamin and Justin need to continue to not be intimidated. You are right that with Benjamin and Justin living with him, they will notice things about Martin and the family company. Justin particularly, will be joining the dots. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
I suspect it will be hard for her to further alienate Benjamin, even though she hasn't finished. Both Noah and Maria will appear during this story. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Natasha is not above using her children as a weapon against Martin. Martin has the resources he needs to fight back. -
Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 11 – Sometimes Things are OK
Natasha is a teacher at an unnamed Christian School which is not the school that Benjamin, Maria and Noah attend. The incident does show how someone who is assertive and works in a responsible position can claim a level of power and authority they do not have. For good reasons the law protects people making child abuse notifications from being identified and from criminal or civil prosecution. Unfortunately this also protects people making malicious notifications. So far Natasha's attempts to exert control and cause trouble have been thwarted. Unfortunately she hasn't finished. -
The next morning Martin took Benjamin to school to make the necessary, and he thought, simple administrative changes. The principal was not sure he could approve these changes even after a short phone conversation with Simon. Martin found the whole process frustrating. Benjamin had said he wanted the school to change their records to where he was now living along with contact people for emergencies, reports etc. Martin was his father and happy for the change. Their solicitor said it was leg
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Kieran's mother is keen to re-introduce some family traditions. While keeping traditions is valuable, it is necessary for them to change with the experiences and attitudes of newer generations. I'm with Kieran's mother and her openness to change.
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Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Turmoil Chapter 4 – decisions and revelations
Bert indicated that he implemented a plan to protect Martin's inheritance. As yet we don't have details. -
Are you suggesting there are people who don't!
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Chapter 10 – Moving has its Moments
Paladin commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 10 – Moving has its Moments
