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I really like Doryu and look forward to getting better acquainted with him. I hope he remains respectful as he will probably challenge his father from time to time. Maybe Doryu can get to know Kaleo at the batting cages.
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That is a very bold statement considering this is a @mastershakeme story. Lucien did not say all Leclaires must die. Lucien is compassionate, why would he kill the scared little puppet boy Adrien when he could kill the puppeteer, Adrien's grandfather. There is a possibility that the grandfather is Lucien's original captor and only survives because of Lucien's blood.
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Eli's bond with Lucien will produce changes in himself that I am sure will strengthen him. What all will Eli discover as he researches in the Archives? Will Adrien be one of those that must die? So many questions now?
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Fun chapter! Great holidays. Jose and Robbie could be contenders with Hector for the throuple.
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Great story! I guess I caught up on the story just in time. Niran and Kaleo seem destined to be together, but I bet it will a rocky road to get there.
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All of the other really good prison names are being used as Shayna's relatives in that other story we read.
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Thank you! You are absolutely right. Better and better.
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Bubba is insatiable I hear.
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With the US Attorney's office going to be dealing with good ole Bernie he should see some jail time. I hope Bernie gives Bubba everything he demands once he is locked up.
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Eli will give freely now. If the Vespers plan on Eli being the sacrifice they have a huge surprise coming. What about Adrien? Eli has feelings for him too it seems. Great chapter!
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Going to the Golden Globes will be great and maybe some Oscar nominations will come their way now. The dinner with Hector and Juanita is helping cement a solid friendship between the couples.
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Happy that Austin stepped away. No fallback guy for Will. Marie got exactly what she deserved from Will, walked out on. Too much like her mother. Hope that Brad starts investigating Kendo and buries him quickly. Maybe that will force Travis to get help. Jake needs to get involved with Travis ASAP. Will is Will and I would never second guess him. Really surprised me going off grid to deal with things. He'll be back and watch out!
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This felt like a real growth chapter for Levi. I hope he opens both doors, the parttime employment and the volunteering. Either or both, would help him in his growth.
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Please don't let a random negative opinion get to you. I read allot and every once in a while, an insulting comment is made about a story. I must also say that those comments are usually by another author versus a regular reader. More than likely envy or jealousy. You have a great story going here.
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Really a good chapter. I am sorry I did not read this chapter before I read 'The Descent' chapter. This chapter really set Eli's mood and state of mind going into 'The Descent.'
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Good to know you are back and you were missed. Now that we know Lucien exists, I cannot wait to learn the story behind his imprisonment and his tie to all the Vespers.
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Juanita will definitely turn the leak into major news when her show airs. News of the sequel should also increase viewership in the original film.
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Let’s Be Mates Forever
dboggs9700 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Let’s Be Mates Forever
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The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Three of Three
Beautiful ending and a wonderful story. Auntie was perfect and I loved her handling of David's parents. I am sure Patrick has gained a valuable ally in Auntie if he ever needs anything. -
So, Shayna is still the victim in her mind and refuses to get Doc Mac. Hopefully when Jake does get through to Doc Mac, she is not listening in on an extension or eavesdropping. Jo has quite a history and is amazing for what he has overcome. Rhett needs to have Jake or Frank talk to River and convince him that he is guilty of nothing.
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Great summary drpaladin. Something in this chapter has made me change my mind about Aaron. Instead of seeing him just as an arrogant asshole, I can now see some compassion in him.
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Sky's discussion with Brant was so perfect and flawless. Brant was honestly scared of losing Sky previous to that discussion. I still think Hector for the third man.
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The Saturday Boy, Part Two of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Two of Three
You imagined the perfect Auntie. I see her putting David's parents exactly where she believes they would belong. -
The Saturday Boy, Part Two of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Saturday Boy, Part Two of Three
Thank God, no overthinking things and directly into bed. Enjoying the chemistry between David and Patrick. Out of the blue, I am picturing Auntie asking David how long he and Patrick have been together. Of course, with a Fran Drescher, 'The Nanny' accent. -
Let's hope it's a breakfast run although I doubt it.
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