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Johnathan Colourfield

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  1. HAHAHAHA! That was hilarious well done ricky! I love how everyone takes it so seriously
  2. After having a long chat with Bugeye tonight i thought i might as well as everyone Is there a way you find "the muse" i'm getting quite far with Angels, nearing our quarter point. I mean, sam suggested put random words in a sock and pick one out and expand on it Any other methods you can think of?
  3. yeah i have done lol it was different lets say xD Would you meet up with an ex even when the ex thinks there a chance of you getting back together?
  4. Just Wow Lugh. You really did shock me with this one, i'm not one to usually like your work but just WOW. it was picturesque in the way it presented the government, i enjoyed every second. What can i say... I'm hooked
  5. Just Wow Nephy. Another perfectly crafted story by the goddess that practically invented darkness for this microcosm of GA. This took me in so many different directions and moved me through many emotions. Such perfection for a developing writer such as yourself, as with Camilo i commend you highly to anyone, i am in love with your works and i always have been and always will do. I hope to get started on your other works at some point. You truly are an idol here at GA. Johnathan xx
  6. That makes me feel quite light hearted about love, it really does. Such witty banter between the two counterparts. Well Done Camilo a very intriguing piece and (dont quote me on this) one of the most unique approaches to an anthology story of the stories i have read so far Very satisfying use of the conversation and just the conversation a technique many writers struggle with (mainly myself, i am terrible at "real conversations". You have made this piece seem very real and for that i commend you. I hope to see you again in the next anthology!
  7. 10 Years (27) - Just finished my PHD in Drama and Understanding Playwrights , Happily Married to my boyfriend i hope and living somewhere in england Writing happily for GA. 15 Years (32) - Running my own private acting school earning lots i hope Still happily married. Maybe take a year off and go on a backpacking holiday Writing for GA and maybe some freelance writing work for local newspapers. 20 Years (37) - Drama Teacher in a secondary school/university lecturer/drama examiner and earning more than before i hope / Doing the private business at the weekends. Busy Busy Busy.
  8. LOL i have to do about oedipus's sons in Theatre Studies xD this was helpful xD
  9. Happy Birthday Other Birthday Person :D
  10. Happy B'day Nikki Belated though! lol
  11. LACEY!
  12. The feeling of the skin, The adventure of the touch, The inevitable feeling of lips upon lips, Keeping control of your inner urges. The hands adventure, Beyond the barricades of society, You feel his breath lightly on your ear, His moans in true depth of the heart, Intertwined both physically and mentally. You run along his back with your hand, Until a gasp.. A retraction.. You brushed past the point.. The point of such suffering, The point of his only escape from life all those years ago.. You felt the agony of young childhood, The pain of teenage life, never truly feeling accepted, The suffering of his first year in the adult world, Never knowing where to turn, Never knowing what to turn to, Until he finds his escape in the world. All this escape, This alternative world, All that mattered was his own suffering, The pain is no longer there but in his heart, he will always feel it. The pain of the blade… The movement of his skill simply because… He didn’t feel accepted. He never asked to be popular, He never asked to attractive, All he ever wanted was to be accepted fully. To be in a world where society doesn’t look down on the different, He knew, deep down, this would never be. And so he turned on himself, Made himself suffer for what others did to him, He felt.. He felt as if he was helping him… He tried everything to stop. Every Alternative. Until he thought he had finished, he thought he had got over it.. One Mistake is all it takes. One mistake and you are done. He had One Mistake that he made, and he was paying for it ever since. His pain, his agony, his life of misery and depression, So easily healed… Just to show that you care… and that nothing matters more than them.. That’s all they ever want.. To feel… To fully feel… Needed. Comments Please
  13. Obviously for biting someone who looked like a lost lover (be kind to me xD)
  14. Hey guys Here is my novella Every Little Thing She Does is Magic for you its chapters 3-5 I hope you enjoy and this will be the last installment of it for now till i get going on the motivation front http://www.gayauthor...ry.php?sid=1208 Have fun reading! and review me hehe
  15. i'm only going to a ) drool at taylor (mmm taylor marry me...) and point out how crap the movie is
  16. YAY! Well Done Nephy! I was there when you said i'd never get a good spot at ga... now look at you! *steals piece of cake*
  17. "Drag" Shows are amazing to watch. I watched one a few years ago, Cher, Doris Day, Katrine Jenkins, he did them all and he was hilarious He was a great guy as well, quite interesting to talk to I hope you can get over your tension with your parents xx
  18. dont worry. i dont find it off topic. my teachers a communist so hes a wee bit biased lol I'm all for keynes really, he was a genius. >.< i've been corrupted >.<.
  19. Hey Guys I know a few of you are teachers/lectures and i was wondering if you could give me advice on how to revise for my A Levels? I struggle with the repetition method and the whole idea of mind maps just confuse the hell out of me. I'm just kinda worried about it all not sinking in. If it helps i do Economics, War Literature, Theatre Studies and Business Studies. Johnathan xx
  20. what? Just cuz i've someone really amazing i'm not allowed to share with the community that helped me so much? Well screw you chase.
  21. Well... today was f**king brilliant. just bloody brilliant. We started off both on our buses texting each other, really excited. We talked LOADS. then we had to find each other in the bus station and yeah that was difficult. So we found each other and obviously started talking. It was good, we did a few of his errands and such and just were friends. We got back to his place and got comfy, he was sitting on the chair opposite me, i was sitting on the bed. We started talking and we both really started to open up. it was him first, opening up about his childhood and his life and his , i wont call it properly because he doesnt like calling it, he opened up to me about his "flawing", he broke down in front of me and i really wanted to hug him but i thought not to.. When i had my rant about my life we went onto our laptops and played a game together . It was then when it happened. I dont know why... but i leant over and i kissed him on the cheek. Just a simple peck on the cheek. But it meant the world to jace. I rested my head on his shoulder and we played more of another game on his laptop and i got comfy and then we got really emotional together and he asked me to be his boyfriend. I said yes. We then spent i think like 2 hours kissing and holding each other on his bed, I ran my hand so many times along his back, i still get shivers as to how it feels. It was so soft and gentle and amazing..
  22. Happy Birthday To Our Resident Vampire hehe
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