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Dolores Esteban

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  1. In A Town I Don’t Know 01 Prose Poem Walking Down The Lane I walked down the lane of a town I don't know. It was a mild November day and the sun hung low. I met you in a corner of the town. There was a paved roundabout where a windmill grinds. The two of you were laughing and holding hands. I went to a cafe and drank red wine. What's there is not. Who am I? A name to a list? A name not remembered? A name to be blamed? I emptied my glass and the sun went down. I walked down the l
  2. I've finished a multi-chapter story and I'm doing the final edits.
  3. Corvo Attano is definitely an inspiration.
  4. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 12

    Many thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I'm happy you enjoyed the story. I spent a lot of time thinking about truth. What is truth? Is there an ultimate truth? Can it be found? Should it be revealed? Etc. I wrote a science fiction story in the end. People set out to find the truth and don't find what they expected to find. There are many truths. And sometimes a truth is just a belief.
  5. Thank you. l'm happy you liked the story.
  6. I hesitated to publish the story - delicate theme and so -, but now I'm glad I submitted it. Thanks, everybody, for reading and commenting.
  7. I havent't read the Valdemar books either and hence lack the background, but I think your short story is a well done intro to a fantasy world.
  8. Dolores Esteban

    Forbidden

    A delicate topic but sure a proper take on the theme. Death penalty is too harsh a punishment. The ending of the story leaves room for much thought.
  9. Dolores Esteban

    Off Limits

    I'm curious to know how the story continues. I can see happiness but also pain and sadness.
  10. A totally unexpected take on the theme. I liked it a lot.
  11. A totally unexpected ending I so didn't see it coming. Well done.
  12. Dolores Esteban

    Verboten

    I like the unexpected twist and the reasonable ending of the story. Well done.
  13. A beautiful story. And very sad. The ending makes me wonder how the story continues.
  14. Bonfire “Otis, tell me, what were you doing last night?” Trevor Monroe asked with a sneer. Otis frowned. Monroe, sixty-nine, seized the silver knob of his walking cane tighter. “I told you the boy’s mine. Keep your hands off him,” the plantation owner said. “Yes, sir,” Otis replied with a bow to Monroe. “I assure you, Sir, I have no interest in him.” Monroe gave his steward a haughty look and walked on. Otis gave him the finger and spat on the ground. He wasn’t interested
  15. I've uploaded my story. I deleted 300 words
  16. I've finished my first draft.
  17. I might give it a try.
  18. A 'world' feature would be great.
  19. Thanks everybody
  20. Thanks everybody
  21. Thanks for letting me know. The image says: Merry Christmas. Have a magical holiday.
  22. Dolores Esteban

    Forgiven

    Great.
  23. Merry Christmas everyone
  24. Dolores Esteban

    The Story

    This was amazing. Very well done.
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