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Its great that Ry and Jake have settled down and have begun to re-connect their friendship. Still hehe I wish Jake take up Ry invititation but then Jake has Shane. So its best not temp things unless this is Ry way of getting Jake away from Shane. I still am clueless to whats going on between Jake and Shane. I guess chapters will tell. Well they been friends for a long time 18 years. But will they be together for another 60 years. I do hate life when Jobs, schools, etc changes lives.

hey the general will land but you think that island going to have 1500 gallons to spear? Romantic drive through a an active volcano - janse must be sh*ting - just hope eric does mind another gas vent from janse Why should it take so long to drive to the airport and back? Its definitely going to be a surprise with the general and scar in the air duke it out but you're going to wonder how eric and janse take revenge on scar when or if they meet again?

There's nothing to stop Josh to go stay with Matt at Jamie's place. All the permission he needs is to say he's gay too (joke) Then the parents will be all alone. You're lucky you didn't introduce the bad economic times into the story. It be hard enough just to juggle being gay issue.

Summary: Kenny is at the peak of his life but it's headed for a downturn. Peter is no where near the start of his life. Can these two bring each other out of life's rut. Current Chapter 16 is posted https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewsto...&chapter=16 This is the end of Book1

Buy them!! - Then get caught for selling nuclear arms - and - then Instinct can play for a captive audience in sing-sing. I wonder if there was some other kind of collateral? but generals don't keep 30 mil laying around?

Thank you David McLeod for being my editor and friend.

Actually, the racoon should sue for misleading him as his next meal.

what he doesn't like the CUT look? you know its hard to go back to uncut especially if the coon runs off with it

Just edit the chapter and cut and paste in the improved chapter that way you can keep your reviews otherwise you lose them if u delete the chapters and add them back in Look forward to chapter 3 Its been a long time since I had a best friend - and - moving around doesn't help

Thanks for the lighter and less gloomier story some of us - just have too much darkeness and gloom in their lives

Am I to surmise Max and Conner are straight?? They seem to be a couple too. It be strange the school would have only one couple.

I worked at this one company for 12 years I think. There's only two of us taking care of the company flagship app. After a couple of years - we're pretty much equal on ... But what got boring is how much the co-worker is so selfish and predictable. We all can predict his typical actions. So hearing sorry from him - has always been fake.

It be interesting to see how Matt and Jamie in the same house for a few weeks. Josh be sad but could visit Jamie house to see his brother.

Ok - I was 1/2 right I guess the drama from a best friend hits home more than having a Haley who would make sure your life in school is like hell to pay for. But thats sure up to MAX - if he spits out rumors or keeps silent. Still its a test of friends that stick around or leave you flat. I think its best not to grow up - Adulthood isn't what its all cracked up to be. ---- There's a plus side - Noah sure does show how to be a Team Player. I hope Matt's parents work out their issues. Otherwise Sam going to have a 2nd sister (joke)

Do you realized the war of the operating systems is on the same processors and pretty much the same architecture? There's no innovation to the next generation processor for quite sometime. But still Windows is rugged on mean shutdowns. I remember corrupting SUSE 7.

Exciting action!! I decided its time to read the bad guys - I avoided It appears the them for changing lanes is for all - not just Eric Its for the loose ends, the general , Jane, etc. Nice CJ working with what he got as great story material. Low tech sure does make great drama.

Oh - I get that Sam is the good guy. Thanks for the clarification for Jonah. I do understand the need for the physical in order to feel love. - That does explain that the bit of the blame for Sam was shutting out Jonah. - Its just that - I hate Neal - punching a hole - in someone life - when its really Neal own fault. Much like the economy is punching a hole in our lives.

Sounds like a nice thrill for a Sam and Haley raid!!! with Matt brother in tow to see two shirtless boys. Also be funny for Matt and Jamie to look masculine - and act if they were play wrestling. Rather having the look of being caught in the act.

I gather that they must like each other - like a lot so what an ops? is going to stop love ???? and yeah who needs names - when its love at first ops!!!

Nice story from a straight guys point of view

I HATE Neal!! I expected better of Joshua like integrity but maybe sam is giving him the better of the doubt but Sam is consistent to not let Chris get hurt. Joshua should understand that!

I am quite glad that the author followed his gutt feel for the story and retained the politics that was necessary for the story.

I love this story!!! A big series of ops and oh my!!! Did they do that!!! (erkel snorts!!!) It makes me wonder where is Aunt Mabel and Uncle George forgiveness in their nephews Dennis the menius mishaps? Did they leave John to run the farm!! That sounds like punishment!!

Hey I remember this story from a sneek preview I though it was going to be a new long story? I guess I was wrong.

I have heard similar arguments in school a long time ago. Some students fail to see the significance of a symbolic object. I guess its a matter of seeing what it means to him by observation rather than reading into its only an object. I get what you mean by having issues of a chapter. 4.5 years ago - I came up of a what if story which is now called "Kenny and Peter" I sketch out the story and over time misplaced it on one of my computers. But once its sort of written. Its there in your mind. I started writing the story just last November. Its a long story but I am not sure how long. I have finished Book1. I have part of book2 written since its just one long story to me. But my editor spotted that in some way I have concluded as a book1. I hope I will find the time to write book2. What amazes me is that meat of the story does follow the sketch but I never thought the story would evolve the way it has. You could say as I hit the ends of my thoughts and when you look at the surrounding the world you created. Something sort of sparks in you to seek out a direction of exploration of whats in you - you may like it and then you might not but its a matter of expressing the actions or drama that the character(s) is enduring - now to what end - thats the spark to explore without preconceived judgment. Let your thoughts flow and then let an editor catch things. I dare say as I progress in my story - I will hit something that be a road block - as it could be that in my own life I has no answer or resolution to my real life as it would be for my character in his story. I have been writing bits and parts of my story ... an ending or just a beginning - that half empty glass or was it half full. A novel thought to catch yourself or how others will catch the story. I guess its up to us to clearly see how to bring out the meaning of the chapter or the actions of the character - just remember - it has to entertain the reader.