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Vulnerability and honesty are the keys to intimacy. This chapter was sweet intimacy! Thank you.
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Sweet sweet chapter! I think Feida's threats to ban her husband to the barn are largely bravado on her part. Her husband's "submission" to her "power" seems enough to keep her happy. Nice job on this chapter. The scene where Elyran offers to teach Greiff to read was most touching. Looking forward to the next chapter...which is already posted, I might add.
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So you like avid fans? How about rabid fans? "But mimo....but mimo" I found that strangely entertaining. Excellent chapter!!
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First off, the love scene between Dan and Aaron was decidely HOT! I sensed some urgency there! You brought Alex back! Complicate Dan's life, why don't you. Aaron's life too, I suppose. I have no idea how you're going to resolve that one. Super chapter!
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I like the way you seem to be expanding the subplots - a trip to France with Adam, the "hunt" and now Jenny's powerful uncle. This story could go on forever. Well, a man can hope, can't he? Another great chapter - a long one too!
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You are cruel, twisted and evil....and I love it! It's good to see James so eagerly engaged in his career. Loving the story, Marky!
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Now that I've had my cigarette, I can review. Kudos on the love scene, well done! I enjoyed the internal dialogue that Grey has with Dr. Grey. Funny stuff. So that sounded like "The End" to me??? The story index still shows "in progress". In any event, fantastic story!
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Ok, so I definitely wanted Grey to scream out, "Bed...Bed...Bed!!" Oh well, guess I'll have to wait. Great writing, great story! I'm in!
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Ruth is back! You authors and your cliffhangers! They work well though, don't they? I suppose death was a rather harsh consequence for Reynolds. I'm ok with it though. Super chapter!!
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I'm impressed. The message is clear and simple and they don't go and get in anyone's face about it.
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Geez, all that self-defence training! For what, I ask? Well you had me on the edge of my seat for the whole chapter. Really well done! So the Nur 'zul dude and his guards are toast! Loved it!
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Great way to start the weekend off! Thanks for posting the new chapter. It was excellent as usual! Reuniting Anthony with Alessandro was a nice touch. I definitely want to see more chapters! Thanks.
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... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
Conner commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
A remarkable story. It really was. Well written, well told; can't ask for more than that. Thanks. -
WOW!! That was excellent. It flows so beautifully. The way it builds and builds was breathtaking. I couldn't wait to get to the next sentence. The sentiments expressed simply enveloped me. Great work!
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Well you've set this up niely, including the cliffie. Here's where I get to practice patience...which I truly suck at. Needless to say, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Chapter 4 - Accepting Assistance
Conner commented on Fitz's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Accepting Assistance
So much for trusting Will. Will placed himself into a position of trust and betrayed that trust at the first opportunity. After the show, Scott was particularly vulnerable. Great writing! -
That chapter was totally intense. Really enjoying the story!
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I also have to add my compliments to you for making this scene work. Their growing friendship and love overcome the awkwardness of the situation. I don't believe you intended the scene to be erotic per se, but sensitive and caring. You nailed it beautifully. Great writing!
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... Forever Is Never That Easy (Part 1)
Conner commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ... Forever Is Never That Easy (Part 1)
I have to award Kyle the best line in this chapter when he told Coop, "...with you, nothing is easy..." Naturally, before the chapter ends, Coop proves him right. The funny thing is Coop finds a way to look inside Morgan's "coked-out" brain and see a way out by offering Morgan something he thought he'd never have, namely Coop. As Coop points out it's a one time chance for Morgan to "experience" why Chase came back to Coop. Morgan couldn't resist. It's most certainly a twist I never would have imagined. I have to conclude that being coked-out and being in love sends you to the same distorted reality. Superb chapter, Jwolf!!
