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I can't write a review. Charlie stole my word - Intriguing. Get in and get out - I definitely don't like that expression - reminds me of taking a swim in the ocean. Well, I'm dying to know what Heath wants from Alec. I'll just have to be patient. Great stuff, Kim!

Exceptional story, KC! That it's based on your own life makes it all the more so. A real birthday treat, too. Thanks.

Great story! I enjoyed it immensely.

You're definitely the master of dialogue. This story has a slower pace to it than your previous work and that really works here. It flows extremely well, though, making it a comfortable and enjoyable read. Great writing, Jwolf!

The story is developing nicely. Rob was a bit of a mystery. I wonder what his agenda is. Ben and Patrick are pretending that things are "normal". I have a feeling that could go on for a while. The alpha male dynamic that you described around Greg was interesting. Great chapter!

Nice job with this chapter! Glad you posted it. I'll be keeping an eye out for chapter 2.

Wow! A chapter where Lily doesn't dominate. I'm glad she's around, though. I'm thinking she may be essential in directing traffic once Adrian is back. Looking forward to that. Great story!

The whole kitten thing was hilarious - from Corbin talking to the little girl, Pete doing the "potty" training right up to the comparative "croch comfort" test. Just too funny. Corbin's revelation right at the end of the chapter was helpful, at least now I better understand why he's beating his head against a wall. Will this insight cause him to back off and save himself the frustration? I'm thinking not, even if the story plot needs him to continue the head banging. Seeing that it's only chapter 4, I imagine Pete will continue to be the enigma he is for quite a while yet. When he asked Corbin if anyone at OD dated, I started thinking maybe he just wants to be "courted" but that seemed too simple given how obtuse he's been. Mind you, I think I warmed up to Pete a little bit here; not sure why. Great chapter!!

Great chapter! The dialogue was excellent! Jake'a a hoot.

I'm intrigued. Dying for more history on Patrick and Ben. I really want to get to know them better. A nice flow to this chapter.

I have no clue what Pete's game is or where he's at around his sexuality. I'm pretty sure that's how you intended it - for now at least. I don't care for him much at this stage, but will keep an open mind. I'm trying not to stereotype him, as in pompous ass Brit. I think sorting him out will take a while, which is fine by me. Your character development is really solid and the dialogue is super - no surprises there. Definitely enjoying the read!

I guess our lovers are stuck with Han, the "bald headed man". Oh well, maybe they can come up with a game of sorts for losing Han in the crowds or traffic or anywhere. You did very well at maintaining the tension Savan was under throughout the story - good job there. Great ending! Great story! Thanks.

I thought the story would end as I read chapter 21. I was wrong. Not the first time that I've been wrong. But I'm glad it didn't end. There were still a few issues to resolve. What I have enjoyed the most about this story is the relationship between Savan and Cole. Some of the descriptions and dialogue were extremely well done. So, as you can well imagine, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Excellent chapter! It's my thought that your storytelling has improved dramatically over the course of this story. I really enjoyed the dialogue in this chapter.

A well informed (inside) source assures me that there are no cliffhangers in this story. I believe him.

This past Wednesday (August 15) saw Felix Hernandez of Seattle pitch a perfect game against Tampa Bay. That's the third perfecto this season, which has never been done before in the majors. Just incredible!. I believe this was #23 in major league history. Congrats to Felix and the Mariners!

As this demonstrates, having an editor is essential.

You have to love a personal letter that has bullets. Wait until dad finds out he has to join PFLAG.

I must say that I really did want Chris to get his memory back...mainly for David's sake. I believe it was a conversation between David and Jimmy a couple of chapters back where David says there's something missing from Chris' eyes, something that was there before the accident. Anyway, it ended the way it ended and that's fine too. I understand what you were going for. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Thanks!!

There should be a warning at the beginning of this story: Should only be read with a full box of kleenex by your side! David - what a sweet, sweet man. Excellent writing, Kim!

It's great to read your work again. I've missed you. As others have commented, the dialogue is superb - definitely one of your strenghts. I love the characters already. So Pete's going to be a challenge. That's great - makes for more intrigue....and a longer story....I hope.

So I see a 20-chapter story with 200 reviews. That's impressive! With 700 + rep points! You went and got famous while I wasn't looking! Good on ya, Kim! It's good to be back in Kim's reading room. I'm looking forward to this story. It's super so far. Your dialogue is truly superb!

I enjoyed this story immensely! Thank you.

Happy B-Day, Shadowgod!!

Happy B-Day, Kiltie!!