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  1. WOW, so it truly could hinge on getting Mark back to us. I hope the pain that he went through did not effect him too much, or at least to the point that it causes issue; being torn apart and spread across time might have that effect. This seemed almost a Leave It to Beave type chapter...
  2. One is better, let's hope that the other is going to be as well. This seemed calmer; but of course, after the last chapter, a tornado would seem like a light breeze...
  3. Lady Talula and X-Ø are absolutely fabulous... What an exciting rescue and just in the nick of time. Once again, family and friends pulling together, even if it is a one off situation.
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    Visitors

    I honestly almost felt that I could hear a choir rendition of the Hallelujah chorus when Stef and Brad decided they had to get back to West Coast for work. JJ even had to catch himself to not try and keep them there. Kris handled the meeting perfectly; all the family so far is impressed with him. Not sure that Jake would be able to help him with the issue in Germany, but he might know someone that could. I really am glad that Brad seems to like Kris, I think he is good for JJ. I miss the JJ that was around when Matt first made his appearance, the happy bouncy boy that just seemed to love life. He has always been one of my favorites. That said, he needs to figure out how to interact and react to his family and how to keep his relationship with Kris front and center; without causing issues with any of the rest of the important people in his life. Will can be so tiresome. I honestly think he just needs to step back and realize that not everyone reacts to everything the way that he does and the way that he thinks they should. I swear, sometimes, Will is Brad on steroids. That said, I don't think anyone in the family truly cares about each other member as passionately as he does. That can be an issue though. Oh, the thought of the Thorpedo and the Ancient Relic of the Massive Cock coming together. I just have so many thoughts running through my mind. Can't wait to see what happens next...
  5. Okay, there is drama; and then there is soap opera level drama. Maybe too much drama for me...
  6. Sad that some are willing to just give up whomever they are or were to someone else so that they don't have to make any decisions or run their own life...
  7. Okay, not sure what is going on; but that went to hell in a handbasket rather quickly...
  8. Well, I think that if Lyoth and Strawren can get to them, they can help; but don't discount Phentrom if he so decides. Can't this group ever catch a break???
  9. A chapter filled with questions and answers but in the end; the truth...
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    Chapter 6

    Okay, that got complicated really fast. I fully trust Greg to make the right decisions; and the Prince backed him fully, of course, did anyone suspect that he wouldn't? Looks like their household just got a little bigger in one night. Is Josh in thrall to a mating bond or a paternal one? Only time will tell, but of course, it could be both, and that might be a little confusing for all involved. LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next. Well done, lot's of information delivered to the point.
  11. Such a loss.
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    Chapter 1

    WOW, love how you used the apples for metaphors and how perfectly they blended. So well done...
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    Chapter 1

    All of these were truly well done; but 2 and 3 really touched something in me; I think because of my age, they resonated more with me than the others but so enjoyed them all.
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    Into the Past

    So descriptive and the imagery that the words painted were so impactful. Brought up some really nice memories of the past for me.
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    Seasons

    Spring and Fall were well written but disturbing; but I guess that was the point. Summer was really nice. Winter however was very powerful. I truly felt the emotion behind this one. They were all well written, but this one was truly special.
  16. Starting on them now... Can't wait.
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    Changes

    Truly delightful, and so descriptively accurate about the situation.
  18. Talk about some powerful words, this one has it all; but Mendacity is nothing short of brilliant.
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  19. Loved them all, but Mendacity was truly brilliant.
  20. Keeping those under you hungry and drugged is standard operating procedure for just about any cult out there. This one is nothing new; can't believe that Lyoth was idiotic enough to just swallow a bunch of pills that he had no idea what were, I am sorry, but how dumb do you have to be...
  21. Who is Maddox Barksley and how did Jaycen and Troy put him away? Was it while being reserve deputies or did they testify against him; we need the back story on this pronto. LOL Love the Baby Rambo reference and seems to be accurate. Have no issues with reasonable firearms as long as someone is trained to use and care for them properly.
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    Chapter 14

    Well the search for Ethan is ongoing; but the man that took him doesn't seem to want to hurt him, and he knows who he is; but why take him??? He did not recover what he was looking for and it seems that would be more important that taking Ethan. Well, can't wait to see what happens now...
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    Moving Day

    Oh, so much love to share. It amazes me that some people seem to have an abundance of love and share it openly with others and are happy to do so; while others seem to have none to give and if they did, they wouldn't share it with anyone but the person looking back at them in the mirror Moving in with someone is a huge step, especially when you are so young and this is the first time, When it is really the first time away from living at home it can be even more traumatic.
  24. Wonderful start to this story, can't wait to see what happens next. So much love on both sides; and you know or hope each side will embrace the other fully.
  25. Loving all the background on the friends and their past and how they relate. Nice to have those old friends that you still can get along with; you and they have both changed, but still find things in common, it can be harder than you think. Love how Dan thought he was so isolated; but then in vivid color was someone from his past that had more in common with him then he ever thought. And amazing how often under the right circumstances or with the right person, that can happen. Seems to have gone well with meeting the friends and acquaintances on both sides, well except for Ron, who I think may be a bit of a bore about his politics, some just can't shut up when they need to but then we all have someone like that in our lives. Really well done, can't wait to see what happens next.
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