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    Chapter 4

    Why is Dante automatically attacking this this essence that he senses??? Can't wait to see how Dante handles meeting Tani, and find out that this is who is trying to help his mother; and who he needs to get permission to view and tour the fortress.
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    Chapter 11

    And so it begins... I do thing that Jake is right and they have to get the cooking channel growing and that will not only hide some of this from their mother, make Sammy happier, but also make more people aware of their other channel as well. I am sure she does know about the twins; how much she knows is an open question however Usually when you do the estimated bills, they fluctuate month to month but even out at the year, some months they add extra to your bill and other months take some away. Can't wait to see what happens next...
  3. Oh, I do so worry about Zalna and T'san trying this; not so much that anyone else will find out, but what will happen if they can't return themselves? Creline was as inscrutable as you could possible expect from a MasterHarper. Loving this story; but can't wait for the next one.
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    Epilogue

    Nice tie up before moving into the next storyline. Need to find out more about Damian and what they have done to him; and why his father allowed Anna Festus to do so.
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    Chapter 10

    A strange, delicious, and possible dangerous world is about to open up for these two. Loved the Sweet and Spicy name but do hope that Sammy keeps up with his cooking videos as well.
  6. What a wonderful chapter, so full of mystery, questions, and yes; even answers. I have to admit that I never thought about something like that happening when they sent the others to the other two weyrs; but it does make perfect sense. I do hope that they go see the MasterHarper. I think the further you go from an event; the less that thigs can really affect the outcome, but with the whole survival or Pern at stake, you just can't take that chance.
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    Chapter 9

    Well, I am not sure that I trust Leo. I know he was nice at the amusement park and maybe even here at the show, but he seems a little stalkerish... I do hope that they are able to help their mother, but would prefer they were not exploited, or they do not do anything to hurt themselves.
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    Kieran Klein

    I truly hate Anna and the Colonel or whatever rank he is now. What they did to Damien is beyond unforgivable. They should spend eternity in pain and misery...
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    Chapter 8

    Glad that the suspension was only for a few days; honestly surprised that it was not an outright ban. If Billy is so terrible, and he obviously wasn't very good, why was he playing instead of Jake? I sort of feel that we may see him again in the future...
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    Chapter 3

    Wonderful chapter flowed beautifully. So, we now know that someone with a great deal of power has decided to interfere with both Tani and Dante; but is this interference meant to keep them apart of drive them together. Such an intriguing book can't wait to see what all you do with this.
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    Chapter 7

    I can't decide if I think Jake is trying to help Sammy or sabotage him? They had to realize there was no way that video was getting by the censors and truly it should not have.
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    Chapter 2

    Oh, what a delicious start to this new story. So many details revealed but so much unknown. Can't wait to see where this one goes.
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    Chapter 1

    Wonderful start to a new story; I do love anything dealing with history, hope we get more of the historical backstory about the betrayal as we go along. Writing and pacing good as always, can't wait to see where you take this one.
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    Chapter 57

    A true gift, an update on the goings on of our favorite protagonist George Granger. Mark, we all have to thank you not just for this but the many years of joy that you have given to us all in the form of both the Bridgemont series as well as CAP. This chapter finds Granger in unusual territory, maybe for the first time in his life, he finds that he misses someone more than he knows they miss him. Because of his rank, family, and position; Granger would never have been able to stay in Russia with Tsar Alexander I, but he finds that his feelings for the man makes him desire exactly that. His continued presence there would have caused trouble on so many levels; plus, he does realize that while the Tsar enjoyed his time with him, he viewed it as fun and a time to let himself go; Granger felt so much more. Glad that Granger was able to catch Nelson before his return home; but have to wonder if he will find a warm welcome when he returns. His family and friends will undoubtedly welcome him warmly, but will the Admiralty, after all he separated from his ship. although consistent with his orders from the government, not something the navy would have taken lightly. Thank you so much for this update, Mark; and truly hope that you and your family have a wonderful Holiday and may the New Year shower you with blessings.
  15. Well, have to admit that I was already sure that Damian was going to turn out to be one of those with mental abilities. Hate that for whatever reason, his own father let them experiment on him. There truly is a special place in hell for those like his father and Anna. This must truly be devastating to Kieran.
  16. So, the secret has now claimed a causality. N'rax was a good leader and even in this he proves to be again. He knows the secret must be kept, so that no one tries what the missing did. Since he realizes that he might spill the secret without knowing; he makes the only decision he can, to go between. Zalna will be there for Morna. But know she has a burden, knowing that N'rax choose to go between rather than betray the secret. So, she too has become bound up in this as well. I guess maybe because of the season, I just felt this chapter was truly sad. Very well written, and can't wait to see how you move forward with this.
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    Chapter 6

    Hope that Sammy is able to help his mother find what she needs. Jake seems a little disconnected. It always amazes me how many companies dump employees close to Christmas, I am sure that part of it is tax based as the new year is starting; and the tax systems resets; but so many things are tied in at that time of the year.
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    Chapter 5

    How delicious and delightful this chapter was....
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    Chapter 4

    They both need to step back and let what is happening marinate in their mind a little more.
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    Chapter 33

    OMG, I truly despaired of ever getting another chapter of Kandric... This was wonderful and a truly blessed event. The chapter flowed wonderfully, pacing was excellent, and the writing as always first rate. I am totally enthralled with these characters. I fine them all fascinating and so well fleshed out. We got to meet some new ones and all of our old favorites. I actually just reread the first 32 chapters of this less than a week ago. I cannot tell or express my joy that a new chapter was posted; truly the best gift possible for those that follow this story. Bravo...
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    Chapter 3

    Okay, that video if it was uploaded would bring child protective services around....
  22. Well, we know that the question song was one of the reasons that Lessa knew to go back and to when. I am surprised that so many have just accepted it and decided to move on, even after a year, I would have thought there would be more questions. Zalna might figure it out, she is already on to part of it. I am sure that the MasterHarper knows, after all, he knew the song had to be written so it was there in the future to give the key. N'rax knows more than he shared but even he and the MasterHarper may not know it all.
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    Secrets

    Well, well, well; and the bitch is back and with an unpleasant surprise. What have they done to Damian, and can it be undone?
  24. Well, obviously not Jaden or Damien or Kieran would have recognized him. So who created this kid?
  25. I was sort of afraid of this. Jaden has been turned and is subverted to some extent; can he be saved or will he be lost for good.
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