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Good chapter as well; Skold scares me, but Dom fascinates me in a way that I just can't explain. Even though you know he came because of the seer; I still can't decide if I fully trust him. Can't wait for the next chapter...
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I really like this chapter; nice to get to see a side of Rebecca that I had no idea existed. Really like the pacing and writing in this chapter, keep up the good work.
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Really enjoyed this story; the writing and plotting were excellent. I did find the pacing strange in places but the story still moved well. I hope that there is more to this story; these characters are very well developed and very interesting.
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Chapter 10 - Truths Revealed
centexhairysub commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Truths Revealed
Well, a good heart is something that cannot be taught; you are either born with it or not and Seeon obviously was born with a good heart. I hope that he is able to embrace all the changes that are taking place... -
Chapter 9 - A New Seeon
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It is almost as if he is being reborn; into a family that cares for him as a person and not a thing to do with as they want... -
Chapter 8 - A Wedding Night for Seeon
centexhairysub commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 8 - A Wedding Night for Seeon
Well, at least they seem compatible in some ways; have to admit I was worried about that. I still think someone needs to drop this damn priest off a tall building! -
Chapter 7 - A Reception to Remember
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Well, I have a feeling that this conversation is going to be a doozy... I have to wonder how much change he can handle before he goes into a mental overload... -
Chapter 6 - A Marriage of Cultures
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The over priest Deda is very annoying; maybe someone should drop him from a tall building... -
Chapter 5 - Blessings and Family Visits
centexhairysub commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Blessings and Family Visits
Well, the groom maybe in for a surprise in more than one way. I have to wonder how Seeon will handle being so free in this society when he figures it out... -
Chapter 4 - The Waza Family
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So they are suppressing his ability; I guess maybe someone in his position is not suppose to use that ability. I wonder how strong he will turn out to be. -
Chapter 3 - A Wedding Prepared For
centexhairysub commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 3 - A Wedding Prepared For
Well, I assume that he has some type of power such as his sisters had; but are they trying to keep him from coming into the power or trying to bring it out? -
Chapter 2 - A Ma' Nee is Made
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Well, have to say that anything that allows him to escape this kingdom, even it is the one of his birth, would be a significant improvement. -
Chapter 1 - A World of Change
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An interesting start to the story; the King comes off as a little sociopathic and ignorant; but then his reliance on religion to protect him would mark him as such... -
Connor handled everything, even the issue with the bone shard much better than I can image most would; of course, the mating pull may have helped more than anyone realized. I think that once Connor accepted that Kellar could heal the ewe, he was better able to accept all the rest of it. I am sort of surprised that Hugh did not go all wolf and leave at a dead run going after the man that hurt his mate. Wolves are very protective of their mates. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.
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Have to wonder if they won't use the Earth me as a way of making the Earth ready for them??? Jumping them into the future and as they said, training their minds; for what? Another good chapter, can't wait for the next one...
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Loved the breakfast scene; was just way to funny and so true to life, well written. The Daddy Sheriff porn was a little off putting for me; as it appears the deputy was raped, and that is just something that I have trouble with anyone joking about. I do look forward to the confrontation in the DA's office, it will be very interesting...
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I think the story really started to come into it's own with this chapter... I found the interaction between these two small groups so telling. Can't wait for the next chapter...
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I have to admit that the earth crew is handling this better than I expected; even the hot headed one... I wonder how long the security guy will put up with it if the other team keep snipping at each other.
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Why is there always one hot-head in every mission to another planet that will never listen to reason? I do find this story very interesting and will continue to follow it...
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Really getting into the story but sad to see that even in advanced groups there are always those that don't think they have to follow the rules and want to dominate others.
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Okay, now I am not sure if the debate is in the past or at the present time. Pete has only himself to blame for his death, does that even make sense? He did not follow orders or procedure on a world that his people knew nothing about, but I have to admit the first thought I had was that he had done something to the communication devices and killed himself; so I do understand the idea popping up in the head of those involved.
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I am assuming that the action in this chapter happened long ago but can't really tell.
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A good transitional chapter, the pacing and writing are both first rate.
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Another good chapter, just enough info to keep us hooked. Good going, can't wait to see where this goes.
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Have to say that this chapter really piqued my interest, can't wait to see where this story goes. Love allthe info given, makes it easier to get a full picture of the plot.
