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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    Wednesday

    Not to be too much like a psychiatrist, but the last thing mentioned in the chapter about a young man in the first full flush of youth was a snake?
  2. Daddydavek

    School's Out

    A good start! Now on to the story!
  3. Life happens at the least convenient times. More please!
  4. Happy Birthday!
  5. I thought that Chapter 9 released today does a better job with the transitions and it brought the story back to me. It was definitely worth the wait.
  6. Daddydavek

    Chapter 20

    The lady Elgin is a shrew and surely showed her colors in Gibraltar. Caroline is beginning to understand the dimensions of George's ire and perhaps that will have a positive impact. Le't up so at any rate. More please!
  7. It was worth the wait. More than 8,000 words and the flow and transitions between narrators were much better too! So glad to get my Shay and Mira fix! I can't wait for more!
  8. The major media in the US is pointing out that the death of Robin Williams is a wake-up call that Major Depression is a serious medical condition. Suicide is a world wide problem and one of the leading causes of death. http://www.nbcnews.com/storyline/robin-williams-death/deadly-stigma-robin-williams-suicide-exposes-silent-epidemic-n179206
  9. Miles Long wrote in his review of Chapter 2: My gratitude for this chapter oddly does not curb my avarice for more...please and thank you. I just wanted to second that reaction!
  10. This is a great story and I recommend it to everyone!
  11. The lensing idea was part of the plan from when I first began the story. I'm glad that it was well received! Hopefully, I will get my ass in gear and get the next chapter ready in time! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
  12. Glad you like it. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
  13. Finally, got my internet connection to GA back. I think of it as Abel III finally letting us into his relationship through his log notes.... Whenever hacking into a large database, it is only a matter of time before it gets noticed. Even in the 28th Century!
  14. I have deliberately been delaying their romantic side to build it up. I think it worked and I'll let you be the judge as you get caught up with the story. Still replying from my cell phone. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  15. It's alright to have a romantic side. Abel III has been longing for romance for a long time. Still replying from my phone. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
  16. Nellies was fun to write about too and I have been to a place just like that. I'm replying from my phone as my u-verse won't connect to GA since early this morning. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
  17. Daddydavek

    Chapter 2

    Talk about a couple of really nice birthday gifts! Cam and Brad? Now there is an age difference. Matt putting in a room for a sling--Sweet! More please!
  18. GaryThanks for the praise! I will try to live up to it as I write more about Abel III's adventures! Dave
  19. Abel III has a strong psychic gift which he is still developing and learning about. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much!Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  20. Jim What an awesome review! I am glad that you like Abel III's story! I plan to post a chapter every Saturday. Thanks again, DDK
  21. Interesting in that Abel III has provided crumbs describing them and continue to do so. From a telepath's point of view, looks are not nearly as interesting as what's inside and that carries through in Abel III's logs...
  22. Truly a comic genius and a serious actor as well.
  23. Daddydavek

    Chapter 4 Earth

    I assumed that is what you meant in my reply.
  24. You've made a very important observation. Abel III is a lot different than his dad. However, his life experiences have been a lot different too and those are what has shaped him. Perhaps you might want to consider that silencing means locking down a person's shields permanently.... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  25. Abel III is very hungry for romance and yes he does find it....eventually. Thanks for the compliment! And thanks for reading and reviewing!
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