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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hey Gary, glad you are giving it a chance. The first couple of chapters provide a lot of background details to give some relevance to how things work in that time and place. If you see something that doesn't make sense, please let me know! Thanks again for reading and reviewing! DDK
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    Thanks, and yes I wrote way too much about that and had to edit it down. My intention was to show that being telepathic has a down side in that it is too easy to become a voyeur but it just didn't add much to the story so I edited out a lot. The lensing capability is even more important in coming chapters...
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    I'm glad you liked it and appreciate that you did the cheer leading!
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    Thanks for sharing and I am waiting on the next installment!
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    I really loved the pacing and flow of this tender chapter. Well done!
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    Well I do have an outline of sorts, but the chapter got too long and too involved in the sexy cruise ship and I had to edit quite a bit. Thanks for liking my story and taking the time to review too!
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    I just hope I can keep posting once a week, but that is my goal. Dennis (Brian?) does seem to be one of kind and I am glad the story is keeping your interest! Thanks for your review and the PM too!
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    You are very welcome. I have been at it so much the last two days that I hope I am seeing it clearly and it came out the way I wanted. I usually take a day off and then go back with fresh eyes and point of view before posting, but I wanted to get it out. However, it looks like I will be going to posting only once a week on Saturday for the foreseeable future.
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    Better almost late than never.....Happy Birthday Carl!
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    Chapter 19 Special Assignment The next morning we awoke with our legs and arms entangled and nose to nose, chest to chest and our erections sword fighting as our hips moved seemingly on their own. It was the most intimate and satisfying way to wake-up I ever experienced. As we kissed each other fully awake, we simultaneously realized we urgently needed to pee and with one thought we were racing to the toilet. From there we proceeded into my rock show refresher shower unit and se
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    Congratulations and Best Wishes for a long and prosperous union!
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    I mentioned in my review that I love Paris. For anyone who has been there, it is easy to understand why. For those who have not been fortunate to have spent some time there, go if you can. Don't take a packaged tour though. The city needs to be explored and enjoyed leisurely. It has too many wonderful things to do and see to try to cram everything in on a packaged tour. One place that I especially love is the Orsay Museum of Art. If you like early modern art, it is absolutely fabulous. It houses the largest collection of impressionist and post-impressionist masterpieces in the world, by painters including Monet, Manet, Degas, Renoir, Cézanne, Seurat, Sisley, Gauguin and Van Gogh.
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    Chapter 15

    Daddydavek commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 15

    Thanks! I needed my Jonas fix! Poor Jenny. If she compares everyone to Jonas, she might have a difficult time finding anyone to measure up. That sword could be a real help! More please!
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Paris has long figured as a favorite locale in the CAP saga and so it continues. For anyone who has been there, it is easy to understand why. That Matt chose it for their honeymoon was inspired. JJ and Alex, what an interesting combination. And yes it seems from this latest bit that JJ is not asexual and has gay fantasies. Let the games begin! Still not sure where "Streak" is going, but rest assuredly, I'm enjoying the ride so far!
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    Prologue

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prologue

    Thanks! A good start, now off to chapter one!
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    Rest in Peace Robert! You will be remembered.
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    Mark's reply to my review of the latest chapter discloses some poetic license regarding the character of Ambassador Walpole and indicates he was not so inept as portrayed in the story. As interesting as that may be, I find that even the best people have bad days and make mistakes. So while the portrayal may be somewhat out of character, it was interesting and besides who wants to be predictable all the time????
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    At least three large mugs of coffee, about 36 ounces total. I take it with a non-dairy creamer.
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    Chapter 19

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Thank-you! A Granger fix is always appreciated. This chapter was nicely done in that the ambassador clearly demonstrated his ineptness, such that even he was aware of it as he stormed off the ship. More Please!
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Another Gay Writer's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Life is sometimes complicated by those things we call feelings colliding with perceived realities and social structures. I'm wondering where this will go next.
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    While they say the first year is the hardest, I think that saying is over rated. Every year has it's trials, tribulations, joys and absolutely glorious moments. So my wish is that you remember to keep living in the now and taking care of each other the best that you can and let tomorrow sort itself out. Happy Anniversary and remember today is the beginning of the rest of your lives.
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    STREAK. I'm picking the following definition as my guess as to what the title is implies. short period or unbroken run: a short period or unbroken run, especially of good or bad luck So who is going on a streak of, (I hope good) luck? Could it be JJ? Or is it going to be Matt? Or possibly even Wade? Somehow I doubt it is Will, Brad, Stef or JP. I wonder if Mark is going to give us another poll.....?
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    Happy Birthday Mike! & Many, Many More!
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    Another happy beginning! Great job. Things moved really quickly in this book and I can't wait to see where you pick up the saga next!
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    Chapter 18

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 18

    Powerful people make powerful friends and sometimes powerful foes as well. I suspect Granger takes the warning seriously, as well he should. That the Elgins were put in their place and succinctly so, was past due. More please!
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