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Daddydavek

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  1. The Guardian is a big deal and more will be revealed in a few chapters down the road. I don't see Abel III exposing himself or his family to the government or their pawns. The dream was hot and Dennis seems interested....
  2. Daddydavek

    Chapter 8

    Brad and Cody are back in a good place and that was a relief. Zach's sprain is a problem as sprains can hurt worse than a break and some take almost as long to heal.... I still can't wait to get to Hawaii! More please!
  3. Chapter 23 A Red Letter Day Abel III's Personal log: Saturday 24 February 2734 Our commingled dreams of sailing the Milky Way turned carnal by morning. Dennis' fantasies were powering our shared dream. It seems that while he and Kade were working on the deployment of the white noise generator and how to disperse our probing through it, they also discussed the famed sexual prowess of the Abel Silversmith generations. Dennis learned that Abel Sr. was a versatile top and a demanding and mag
  4. Mann expressed what I felt when I first read this yesterday!
  5. Jacob and Russell are sweet and I really loved this chapter. The idea of an engagement makes a lot more sense to me than rushing headlong into marriage. They are both still very young! More please!
  6. Passing kindnesses forward is one way to get in the habit for yourself. Way to go Wayne!
  7. I posted the following entry in the forum for my story Abel III and unless someone was interested in my story most probably did not see it. In laymen's language the video describes the latest theories about galactic super clusters. It is very well done and I recommend everyone to take a look if they haven't already seen it. DDK Posted 03 September 2014 - 11:21 PM I just saw a great video that came out today explaining galactic super clusters and the most recent and best understanding of ours. The video is on Youtube and can be found at the following link:
  8. In a world with instant communications and numerous devices to take advantage of that, our time is subjectively moving much faster than when correspondence could take not just days, but months for delivery. Therefore, our patience is measured in nanoseconds rather than days or weeks....
  9. Using the ocean which is a dynamically fluid medium as a dump is catching up with us and like air pollution will cost us much in the long run.
  10. Thanks for reviewing. Discombobulation even sounds like it meaning and I hope it didn't put anyone off as I think it conveyed the disorienting sensation they experienced quite well. The next chapter is due up Saturday night and it explains Dennis and Kade's contribution. The relationship between the Abel's is evolving and hopefully in a healthy way. The Guardian is beyond comprehension...
  11. It is a fact that the money interests would put roadblocks into a new and disruptive technology.
  12. One of the best of the lot in my humble opinion! Bravo!
  13. Is it just me or does time move a lot slower in the 17th and early 18th centuries than it does in the 21st century of the CAP world? I too have been checking for my Granger updates.
  14. I've always equated being grown-up with being responsible. Being responsible doesn't mean you can't have fun, be lighthearted and a bit of a shit disturber. It does mean taking into consideration the feelings and well-being of those you love and are responsible for however. I think Will is well on his way to accepting responsibility and acting responsibly.
  15. That Aditus writes in English and does it well as his second language is quite an accomplishment. He does not hale from a country that has two official languages with English being the second one either. That his ideas are pictorial rather than pictures and words like most of us is also singular. I use words to sort, describe and give cohesion to the pictorial fantasies in my mind and for Aditus to do just do pictures and to still be so very intelligently verbal in his writing in a second language that it seems is becoming his first language in written stories is amazing. TetRefine makes a very valid point that I share. I think almost everyone has some doubts dealing with their sexuality whether straight, gay, bisexual or asexual as they grow up and even as grown ups. The doubts are not just about adequacy, but also about whether how much or how little should I conform to what others expect; how much am I willing to risk if I appear or act different and do I really like that, or am I just curious?
  16. Caring people are such a change that Mark is having a hard time believing it. I bet he gets used to it though!
  17. Daddydavek

    Chapter 7

    I found it interesting that it seems lord Alex is not used to being turned down, nor being informed that he misread JJ. Cody is working on being involved and it was nice to see Will and Tina in his corner. Darius is still surprised by Will and me too! More please!
  18. Learning the craft in a scientific manner is helping them beyond measure as we soon discover. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It makes the effort worthwhile.
  19. They would have never attempted it without the group support as well as the mind-meld and lensing effect achieved with Dennis' help. I'm glad I was able to convey the danger. The way our heroes develop their powers and their skills in using it is an intrinsic part of the story. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! I always appreciate your insightful point of view.
  20. The reason the Rams got so little flack about cutting Michael Sam was that their line was already so deep. Sam wasn't cut because he was gay, he was cut because bigger guys with as much talent made more sense.
  21. Abel Sr. realized it a while back in the story. Abel III has been a real revelation to the family and made them rethink a few things. Abel Sr. acknowledging to Abel Jr. that he shared some guilt was the breakthrough in their relationship. The real breakthrough was made by Dennis and Kade (with help from Hal) as we shall see in the upcoming chapters.
  22. Chapter 22 More Than Observing Our transit out of the quadrant around Starview and the stars of Alpha Centauri went smoothly. The group psychic force field was tucked in just inside the outer hull plates and we spent our time during the transit in Grandfather's cabin belted into the various chairs and couches while Dad and Kade remained on the bridge. While Dennis was completely joined with me, Grandfather, Drew and Hal were normally linked and sending some power my way through the link.
  23. I think I agree with CarringtonRJ. I found the back and forth a little too tedious but I also suppose it was realistic....I am showing my age.
  24. Happy Birthday Iarwain ! Have a great day and a spectacular weekend!
  25. I like the dad sticking to his word, but every kid on Earth screws up from time to time and I'm sure dad in his time did too. Maybe he will remember that. I hope! On another note, I think this could go somewhere and become a full story. DDK
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