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Daddydavek

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  1. Happy Birthday MJ! & Many, many more!
  2. Why thank-you! It is however, just a cargo carrying ship and not a complicated configuration. And thanks for reading and reviewing! DDK
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    Chapter 14

    I think the timing of Matt asking to talk to JJ and doing it the way he did made it obvious to JJ, that this was mostly Brad's idea. Will would have handled it with more of an understanding of how JJ processes. Now JJ wants to talk to Brad and Brad will have to decide if he wants to be the dad who takes care of things and thinks ahead and risk alienating JJ, or the dad that let's his kids test their wings and promises to be there whether they succeed or not and need help. It's a terrible choice for parents who want to protect their kids from life.....
  4. Thanks for the latest installment!
  5. Daddydavek

    I need to rant...

    Some people have to look down their nose in order to feel superior. My mama told me you can't throw dirt without losing ground. DDK
  6. I agree with Mann but the story can be read by itself too. It reads really fast too as it is a real page turner of a story! DDK
  7. I think the above quote about Mr. Arbour is spot on!
  8. Perhaps the paranoia of being caught helps keep them in check and then too the power doesn't manifest until after age 21 or thereafter so much of the growing up has hopefully occurred. With the power comes responsibility and Abel III seems to have that, Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  9. Happy Birthday Ron ! & Many, many more!
  10. Happy Birthday! & Many, many more!
  11. Daddydavek

    Chapter 13

    Wow, Zach is learning to be a power player! I guess being around Will all this time has had an impression. Poor David Louis Parnell is on Will's shit list and somehow that is going to be an unpleasant place to be. JJ and Alex--I wonder how long before JJ takes the lead and forces the issue? More please!
  12. Life is not always easy, even for the gifted. The story is at a crossroads and there may be a delay in getting the next few chapters out...
  13. Stranger things have happened. I seem to vividly recall the 1999 RAMS and a little known quarterback named Kurt Warner who came in after the starting quarterback (Trent Green) had a season ending injury going on to accomplish great things.
  14. Thanks for your review. My hope is that our main characters learn much from what they had to do, but the story is at a crossroads and it can go a couple of different ways before this part of the saga ends.
  15. We sometimes forget other life forms on Earth have existed far longer and may yet teach us much. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  16. More soup please!
  17. Thanks for reviewing. I guess the paranoia the hidden families have about being discovered was not adequately described over the past 26 chapters. Nor the reasons for it.
  18. Without the resources to carry it off, rescuing Dustin and Diego was not a viable option. The Silverspin is leaving before they will even be brought out of their comas for their inspection by the J&J twins. But who knows, maybe the Silverspin will meet up with them again.... Thanks to all for reviewing. This chapter was emotionally draining for me too and difficult to write.
  19. Sad and perhaps wrenching. I think they will always be affected by having done this.
  20. Sad and perhaps wrenching. I think they will always be affected by having done this.
  21. It was a very difficult chapter to write. Sad and tragic both. Faced with a horrible choice, they now have to live with it.
  22. Chapter 26 A Birthday Surprise Abel III's Personal log: Thursday, 8 March 2734 We awoke early this morning and rushed through breakfast as we were due to dock with the space station Valentina Tereshkova, named for the first woman in space as it served Gagarin's World. Time had flown by as we hurtled toward our destination from the transit point, but we were at least two days ahead of schedule. This meant we would be able to spend an extra day at the station to celebrate Bill's birthday wh
  23. I loved how Sam made everyone's day!
  24. Belated Happy Birthday! I just noticed this thread and it's already after midnight in your time zone!
  25. Jacob and Russell do make a beautiful couple. When Russell said he would chose Jacob over his twin, then I was convinced.....
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