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Happy Birthday ! & Many, many more!
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The coach was a pedophile and he molested more than JJ as I recall. JJ is interesting in that he found something to excel at and is still pursuing the dream. He didn't start skating as a six year old, it was Matt who introduced him to skates and he found something he could be good at. While everyone else in his close family was into surfing, he found his niche and it says a lot about him that he put up with all the hard work it takes to make it in that arena. My big concern is that he falls too heavily for Alex. Maturity wise, he is still a fairly young teenager and first crushes can be really tense when they end.....
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Jonah is clueless about so many things. He didn't even know the meaning of his name. Poor Ren! He has it bad for Jonah and can't catch a break.
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Well that ended hot!
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Why thank-you very much. The Guardian is an important facet of the story as becomes evident soon..... Thanks for reading and reviewing Addy!
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Happy Birthday To You! & Many, Many More!
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Poor Jonathan faces a daunting task even after accomplishing so much....
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Ben, while sex is intrinsic to human beings and is a part of this story, it is not really a story just about sex. Having said that, there are some hot scenes in the story, but they are not written as JO material. For those kinds of stories, Nifty may be a better site. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Chapter 23 A Red Letter Day
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 23 A Red Letter Day
Thanks for reading and reviewing Ben! While they are trying to understand the Guardian and his role, they still have a long way to go. -
What an inspiring post! Despite all the hard work and challenges, it seems you are getting some real satisfaction in this job. Thanks Matt for letting us know what's going on with you! DDK
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Or, unless the him in question is a size queen and you are hung like a horse.....
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The latest chapter of Streak starts with Zach, moves on to JJ and ends with Brad. JJ and Alex manage to get hot. (Jeremy was spot on with his comment earlier.) Brad gets a little advice from everyone and just maybe realizes he he has to let go. It is a well done chapter, but in my estimation the writing describing Zach's little speech at the team meeting was Arbour at his best.
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Poor Brad. I think he gets it, but it is really difficult. You did an awesome job laying it all out concerning JJ . However, the job you did writing the scene with Zach and the team meeting was Arbour at his best. Well done!
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Chapter 27 After Effects
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 27 After Effects
Exactly! I think that with their shared link and being able to mind-meld that Abel III and Dennis are about as comfortable and secure in their love as two people that age can be. I really appreciate your reviews as you are always thinking! -
You give us a taste and then suddenly it's over and we have to wait a week for more..... Why do I get the impression that the journey stays a bit bumpy?
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Chapter 27 After Effects
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 27 After Effects
A weakened Dennis and Abel III do find some additional fulfillment with more than just each other. It may just be a sign that they are not back to 100 percent themselves however....Remember though, that Dennis and Abel III do share an open link and they do mind-meld which is certainly the rest do not have. As usual you pick up the relationship! I am so glad you are reading and commentating! Thanks! DDK -
Chapter 27 After Effects
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 27 After Effects
I think you have the right of it. The fact that the prisoner's were being kept in seclusion, sedated and that there were two of them made it that much worse. Using his new found power while he was drunk himself may have made its use a little less subtle as well. I enjoy your thoughts and comments! Thanks for reading and reviewing. DDK -
Chapter 27 After Effects
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 27 After Effects
Silencing certainly had some effects, not all of them expected and maybe not all of them discovered yet... Thanks for reading and reviewing. -
Chapter 27 After Effects The next morning came all too quickly and we drug ourselves out of bed. For the first time in more years than we could remember, neither of us awoke with an erection, nor were we in any mood for making love. We moved mechanically into the refresher shower unit and scrubbed each other quickly and then started the drying function and quickly finished and grabbed towels. We knew the repercussions of silencing on those who participated would be severe and la
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Thanks for my Granger fix and what a nice one it was!
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Happy Birthday MJ! & Many, many more!
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Chapter 10 The New Year
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 10 The New Year
Why thank-you! It is however, just a cargo carrying ship and not a complicated configuration. And thanks for reading and reviewing! DDK -
I think the timing of Matt asking to talk to JJ and doing it the way he did made it obvious to JJ, that this was mostly Brad's idea. Will would have handled it with more of an understanding of how JJ processes. Now JJ wants to talk to Brad and Brad will have to decide if he wants to be the dad who takes care of things and thinks ahead and risk alienating JJ, or the dad that let's his kids test their wings and promises to be there whether they succeed or not and need help. It's a terrible choice for parents who want to protect their kids from life.....
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Chapter 13: Inequality for All
Daddydavek commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 13: Inequality for All
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Some people have to look down their nose in order to feel superior. My mama told me you can't throw dirt without losing ground. DDK
