What a couple of typical sophomores. Of course they are confused and bitchy as they try to figure themselves out. I think it was a realistic portrayal. Good job!
So much in one chapter. The main thing is that David is taking charge and has some clarity about what he wants and what needs to be done to accomplish that. Now if he can just get his dad and grandad on the same page....
So it's not all sweetness and light for David...or Mark. That's hardly surprising but it does raise some more speculation and questions.
The cameras work. But will they reveal anything? It seems our good friend the author likes to keep his cards close to his vest.