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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    New Beginnings

    I agree with Mikel. If you think there is a lack of socialising (using the Brit spelling) then take on that responsibility. It sounds as if you have plenty of leeway to act. As far as the perks, enjoy them!
  2. Damphir, River, Silver, just a few of my favorites.
  3. In the year 2024; almost a third of the cars on the road in America will be either all electric or hybrids and the newer cars will be able to drive themselves. the divide between the 1 percent and the bottom 90 percent will be greater than ever. the weather will be more radically violent with droughts, floods, hurricanes and tornadoes more common. outbreaks of uncontrolled diseases like Ebola, dengue fever etc will be more commonplace as drug resistant germs and viruses become more virulent. the St. Louis Cardinals will win their fourteenth World Series Championship.
  4. Happy Birthday Adam! & Many, Many More!
  5. Well I got past the sub part and hopefully, our loving pair do not get into it. BDSM is role playing and in my mind, genuine love isn't a role, but rather it's the most basic reality most of us ever experience. To me BDSM, or anything that pushes the boundary toward pain, domination, submission, and dehumanizing a person is just a freakish fetish and not a true expression of love. While some may be titillated and maybe even want to try it, for me it is a turn off.
  6. Daddydavek

    Chapter 4

    Cam and Brad were not a problem for Matt or Wade and it seems like Brad is at least in lust, with perhaps more to develop. I sort of hope Cam gets to go to Hawaii. I personally, always am ready for the story to shift to that locale. Matt and Brad playing hockey and enjoying themselves.... Neat! JJ not worried about getting a drivers license and Will being impatient to get one again shows their contrasting priorities. JJ is focused on his skating and only somewhat distracted by Alex not coming when expected. Will is focused on Zach and enjoying himself along the way. The exchange with Brad about Cam and working was interesting. Makes me wonder if Will ever finds a passion for work and the obligations that entail? Another interesting chapter. Thanks for sharing! More please!
  7. Happy Birthday Jo Ann!
  8. Being telepathic the Silversmiths do have an advantage screening New hires for miscreants and malcontents. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  9. re: The shower, it only works in low gravity of 50 percent or less of normal gravity, so sorry! Abel III is lucky in that he has Grandfather, Drew, Dad and Kade, all much older than him with a wealth of experience and being a telepath, he doesn't just know it because they told him, he can literally experience some of it mind to mind. It must be awesome! As for their future, it does get a bit exciting, but let's not get ahead of ourselves! Thanks for the neat review and as always I appreciate you reading and taking the time to review! DDK
  10. Yes when they mind meld, it strengthens their combined powers! I am glad you are hungry for more! Again, thanks for reading and reviewing!
  11. Daddydavek

    Sunday

    Meeting the others their age in the village was done well and I did note that even they could not believe the uncle gifts.... Still loving the story! On to Monday!
  12. I love your reviews and yeah I can see where you are coming from! As always thanks for reading and reviewing!
  13. Happy Birthday Bill! Wishing you All the best on your Day!
  14. I loved your last sentence. However, they are still in their 23rd year and in love! And besides as the author it gives me a chance to exercise my fantasies! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  15. The hiatus at Starview is almost over...and that is all I will say about the future direction of the story. I think that Abel III and Dennis are very responsible and discreet. Being discreet is something of a survival mechanism as they are being hunted by the government. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  16. Thanks for the interesting review. Well computers are very good at keeping time and young lovers less so. DDK
  17. Chapter 20 The Suggestion A couple of weeks passed by as we busily worked installing and implementing all the upgrades. The bridge was completely done. The family quarters also were completely repainted and redecorated, mostly according to Steve and Bill's master plan. Everyone agreed that they had a flair for pulling together some creative ideas and implementing them. Work on the crews' quarters was progressing nicely too. The main work areas, common areas and hallways would be redecorated
  18. Daddydavek

    Saturday

    Can I echo the don't mess with snakes, especially if there is a chance they may be poisonous? This chapter is a little more over the top and why do I expect the rest to follow suit? It is a fantasy!
  19. Happy Birthday Cia! & Many, Many More!
  20. The only thing I missed in Chapter 3 was hearing from JJ! And I am really looking forward to hearing more from him in coming chapters. As far as Devon finding out Will's true age, I don't see that as a big thing once he realizes that Will's dad and his grandfather figure are ok with him being a sexually active person, a fact of which Brad and Stef certainly are aware. I am still curious what Wade is going to do about his very junior younger brother who seems to be still in school in CA. So many possible story lines to write and follow, I hoping that Streak turns out to be a good one on so many levels....
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter 3

    Brad and Cam were upfront about the age issue and the issue of Cam being with Matt first. I hope that Matt's new found maturity is not tested too much by the idea of Brad and Cam together and it looks like we will find out in the next chapter. I do think it was wise to get that possible bugaboo resolved as soon as possible. Now as to whether I think that Brad and Cam are going to be together for the long term, right now it improbable. It is not just the age difference, it's everything. Cam is still trying to finish up school. He has had to overcome a fair amount of adversity and admits to having several failed relationships. He does seem to be the somewhat jealous type and Brad has been something of a philanderer. Zach is having problems with isolation and I think that is going to be a given for someone deep in the closet. Thankfully, he can channel some of his frustration in physical activity, but maintaining the "devout christian" persona as a cover seems to be doubling his frustration. And he is young and horny. Additionally, he is trying to be fair and not be jealous that Will can have his flings. It's a lot to ask for a young man still in highschool. Thank-you! More please!
  22. In reply to my review of Chapter 9, Stellar wrote: It is worth mentioning that my intended Veil of Shadow average chapter wordcount is above 8500 words. Hidden Sunlight hit nearly 9k per chapter, though that was heavily influenced by the word-heavy last few chapters. At any rate, I'm glad you liked it! I enjoy exposition, but this chapter for me fell into the "necessary but unsatisfying" category as a writer. But it was necessary for your readers as it is a complicated story and since we are reading it as a serial, it brought the story back to us and filled in some of the gaps that were confusing us. I think, even though it was bit unsatisfying for you, that it worked beautifully for us readers and was very well received by me! Thanks again!
  23. Daddydavek

    Friday

    It just gets better! On to ch. 4!
  24. Daddydavek

    Thursday

    Sounds like the young nephew is a budding nudist! More please!
  25. Daddydavek

    Thursday

    Sounds like the young nephew is a budding nudist! More please!
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