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  1. Daddydavek
    Thank-you. Abel is an interesting character that has been percolating around in my head for a while. I think I almost have him figured out and hopefully by the end of the story you will too and still like him as well.
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    I am really pleased that you like it. I am trying to keep to a schedule of posting on Wednesday nights and Saturday nights. Thanks for reviewing!
  3. Daddydavek
    Thanks! We all have our fantasies and Abel's might be a little more elaborate than most after going seven years, especially ages 16 to 23. I hope to keep everyone interested!
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    Chapter 13

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 13

    The plan laid out by George's father sounds plausible, but somehow it seems people are always ready to believe the worst. So while it is a gamble, it is probably worth it, if for no other reason than for Granger's children. More please!
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    Ah, and there you have it. Mark is famous for leaving these openings which he exploits later and this could be an important one!
  6. Daddydavek
    Addy thanks! I especially liked the ginger haired Andre Schuerrle. Those baby blues contrast so nicely....Thanks for the links to the eye candy!
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    Tidal Wave

    Daddydavek commented on jkeele777's story chapter in Tidal Wave

    I've always admired anyone who could write free verse and make it make sense. Great word pictures.
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    I think that Will has always been confident in himself and it was bolstered when he won his emancipation which was a battle. Therefore, like most self-confident people he does see himself as usually right. However, he is beginning to listen to what other people have to say, especially to people whom he loves and or respects. So there is progress. Like everyone, Will is a work in progress and I for one am enjoying the journey. Your observations as Mark noted are succinct, but aptly describe a defining characteristic of each of the major cast members. Although, I think regarding Brad, I would have used the term control freak instead of jerk.
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    Abel III's awakening is a process and there is plenty more for him to discover about his abilities. I hope the story continues to interest you and I always look forward to your reviews and perspective! Thanks!
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks! I tried to provide a context where it was almost inevitable and not traumatizing. I hope you continue reading and reviewing.
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    Chapter 9 More Problems The next morning I awoke determined to get through my general scans of the remaining military ship and hoped nothing would come of them. I hurried through my shower but did relieve tension and was soon dressed and heading to the dining room. I was surprised to find my grandfather and Drew there and it was clear they wanted to talk. Or should I say have a private telepathic conversation with me. They were concerned that I was attempting to do too much and thought my
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Ok, the horse I could see. The oversize urn full of concrete, not so much! There has to be more.
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    Sound Bites

    Daddydavek commented on Ron's story chapter in Sound Bites

    Life goes by really fast, but this one was supersonic!
  14. Daddydavek
    I think that the young lord, Alex, could become an important person in Wade's life. However, I hope he doesn't become Wade's obsession. And my preference is that after some several years, Matt and Wade have settled into a comfortable partnership.
  15. Daddydavek
    In this day and age it is an achievement to own your own house by your twenty-seventh birthday. Congratulations and best wishes!
  16. Daddydavek
    Happy Birthday!
  17. Daddydavek
    Happy Birthday! & Many, many more!
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    Chapter 9

    Daddydavek commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Well Lacey is starting to get a clue and actually handled it well. More please!
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    In her review of the current chapter Kitt expresses surprise that Will handled being banished from Claremont so well while Zach spends a week with his parents. I on the other hand thought it was entirely within character for Will, who has a deep love for his father, despite suing for emancipation. Love and control are two entirely separate things as for as Will is concerned, at least in my humble opinion.
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    Chapter 33

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 33

    Matt is growing so much and becoming a much better person in the process. 9.11 had him in such a funk for so long that it is so refreshing to see him thinking with his big head again. JP as usual has impeccable timing and more than a little experience dealing with volatile temperaments. Wade it seems, finally got it that blowing Matt off on the trip was just a little rude and has come to settle their differences. Hopefully, JP's little discussion provides Matt with the insight to be gracious and truthful with Wade. Well done! More please!
  21. Daddydavek
    Thanks for the review and your kind words. All will be revealed in time. Abel III's awakening is a process and he is still making that journey of discovery.
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    Thanks! From my point of view you do just fine.
  23. Daddydavek
    I'll add my best wishes for a massive change of luck and finances! Keep looking for a different job while working. It is always easier to find one when you have one, even if it sucks!
  24. Daddydavek
    Well some people claim to have gaydar.....of course mine never worked reliably.....
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    Chapter 4 Earth

    Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 4 Earth

    Okay....I'll try to make the next five month's in Abel's twenty-third year last, but no guarantees.
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