Daddydavek
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Will spent his time in class after bumping into JJ overthinking everything as usual. He really does try to analyze his family and their motives from every possible nuanced angle. Sitting down on the bench with JJ and JJ's apology was so well drawn it was like watching a movie. Will was obviously touched but still processing his feelings and invited JJ to see Stef's redo of the dorm suite. When he introduced JJ as his brother, it touched a nerve for both of them. The call to Travis with Will telling Travis to stay with JJ and come visit Boston for the weekend was just the right note to end the chapter. Thanks for sharing and as always: More Please!
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As Victor seems not to have a filter, I suspect poking the bear could be more dangerous than Jonah anticipates....
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A very successful night for George with successive sexual interludes with beautiful men each enjoyable in their separate ways! Loved it! More please!
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I hope Will continues to handle his tryst with Thor carefully, because Thor is going to fall hard for Will. Claire, Jack and Isolde got no support and a proper scolding and Will wasn't there. Will is definitely going hunting for digs in NYC. More please! .
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Jonah running for class president against Victor is ballsy and guaranteed to put a bullseye on his back. Not sure why the trips thought it was a good idea. Looking forward to more!
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Thayer and Cutie spied on by C.O. who in turn appears to have also been watched and assaulted from behind. Too many people seem sexually interested in the Boy and his V card is in danger.
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William is talented and needs to dump Victor. Jonah is undergoing a culture shock while grieving and dealing with guilt. The triplets are a definite force to have on his side.
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"Gasping for air, different visions came into his head. Cocks, balls, boys, girls, tits, pussies, butts. Always without faces. A minute later, he was there. " Thayer is definitely in thrall to his hormones.
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A better outcome to be sure. I'm not sure why there was any question of Jonah going to live with his uncle's family since it was in his parent's will?
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Jonah is on his way to live with his "father's brother". The word choice seems to indicate there was some distance and Jonah did not know his uncle. The crash following the fight in the car where Jonah took off his shoe and threw it at his dad contributes to a guilt laden young teen.
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What more is there to explain
Daddydavek commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in What more is there to explain
Kyle didn't transgress with Jessica, but with perhaps her knowledge... -
X's past and low expectations consume his possible attraction to the new kid who gets to experience the hormonal drama. Hopefully, the clouds part and some sunshine lightens the mood.
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Engineer Benson - July 29, 1993
Daddydavek commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - July 29, 1993
Fascinating, but sad and terrifying to think of a rampant zombie apocalypse affecting billions... -
prescient - Word of the Day - Mon Jan 6, 2025
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Pointedly, it had to be Travis that explained things to JJ. That he started by explaining his own relationship to his brother and sister and how he has demanded that Will abide with his walls was key to getting JJ to understanding how Will felt betrayed. Marie's timing in getting together and discussing things with Will was superb and she struck just the right note with him. Travis practicing his lines with JJ was the point that put the kettle on the boil. An altogether well constructed chapter leaving me wanting more!
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Thanks for sharing!
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A fitting end to a snarky character with an inferiority complex albeit in an alternative universe. Well done.
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Chapter 1: Vaya con Dios, Carlos
Daddydavek commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Vaya con Dios, Carlos
Thank you Bill. It remains a deep gulf of mournful regret that we didn't get to see his take on events in his planned stories. Hopefully from his higher plane he can see a society that manages to muddle through. -
Engineer Benson - July 28, 1993
Daddydavek commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - July 28, 1993
I'd almost forgotten this story and so glad to see it resumed! Your writing is a pleasant distraction from real world acts of violence and terror along with the fury of mother nature. Dealing with zombies is violent, but the point of the story seems to be people taking care of each other. -
anachronism - Word of the Day - Thu Jan 2, 2025
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
We older gents sometime feel like an anachronism... -
Thanks for another Granger fix and a very Happy New Year to you and your fans, some of us who date back to your Yahoo group. The lovely Ernst sounds delicious and George is re-evaluating things which means he will allow himself to be seduced. (An art the master seducer has perfected.) Talleyrand is complicated and smart and provides good advice to George. Caroline is beginning to suspect there is more than friendship between George and Daventry. As usual, MORE PLEASE!
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Jake's second pick seems a much better choice for Travis. Travis asking JJ to run lines makes sense, but Will wouldn't think so. Happy New Year to all!
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festival - Word of the Day - Christmas 2024
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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The surf was up. Chris called and got Will to read the email from JJ. The odds that the stalker is a paid professional have become probable. Travis' security concerns make the move to live with JJ and Kris now seem inevitable. Thanks for another well paced chapter. Merry, merry!
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Thank heaven for nosey neighbors! Jessie sent him to where he needed to go to meet Alfies great, great nephew. ( Maybe an extra one or two greats!) Thanks for sharing!
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