I'm curious what Biosense is working on and why it's located next to a town with werewolves....and if the medicine for Milan is somehow part of the research?
I admit this genre is not my usual pick and I generally don't get beyond one or two chapters....however the writing and the characters have me intrigued and I'm going onward to see if it continues to catch my interest.
@Wayne GrayThe scene at the police station worked well and I think it added to the flow and logic of the story. I didn't really want to call too much attention to any changes as I was enjoying the story like it was completely new again.
Love the story and the tweaks you gave it before publishing it here on GA. It flowed better and was just so readable that we got so involved with the story that we didn't even really have a problem with the Italian dialogue as it was all just seamlessly done. Great job on a suspense filled story with several plot twists that worked out well.
I look forward to what else you bring to GA...perhaps more about Harlan?