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Advice, both welcome & unwelcome
Daddydavek commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Advice, both welcome & unwelcome
So McNab knew about the piece, but nothing indicated he knew where it was or how it was disposed of or hidden. Poor Louis looks like he is in for a return visit. -
Travis is in a bind with no instant relief until Will arrives in mid June. Kendo is a flirty temptation but a line Travis feels he must avoid, but time will tell. Will is on another conquest and I suspect he may succeed. More please!
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Tom Williams described again with rings under his eyes and looking a bit rough makes me wonder about an underlying health issue. The edgier print sounds interesting. Joss is a character and PJ is lucky.
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Greg realizes the seriousness of his dilemma and will do the right thing and share the concern with Claire when the time is right. He won't shy away from it if brought up by Josh (or Caleb) but will ask and get discretion. He won't mention it to the boys as it is up to Josh to tell them. (Just my humble opinion!)
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I've read a lot of great stories on GA and this ranks right up in the top one percent! The characters are more than complex, they are human, believable and more importantly they grab you emotionally as you feel their pain, their hopes and travails. The writing is excellent with great pacing and style as well. I recommend this story to anyone who likes a compelling story.
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The chapter was indeed icing on the cake. Just WOW! I will be looking forward to the next book!
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You've certainly done a bang-up job on these last two chapters! The whole book was a smashing success, but these two chapters are gems. If there is an epilogue and another book down the road, that will just be icing on the cake. Congrats!
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Claire got outvoted. I don't think that has happened very often. I wonder if the Suburban chase vehicle took some real damage as Josh seems to be an expert shooter. Ending with a cliff-hangar seems logical, but damn I can't wait for 17.
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Louis does seem to have a generous streak. His friends are interesting but have back stories that are a bit depressing. Wondering when we hear more about the supposed stolen objet d'art...
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I didn't party like it's 1999:
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Well that went like nothing I expected, so about like usual... More please!
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Happy New Year Mark! Thanks for another rollicking chapter! More please!
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It's a bit overwhelming to see everything sliced and diced so finely.... Bottom line, there are tons of great stories hosted on site!
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Happy New Year! Cold here, but people are out shooting off fireworks in the neighborhood.
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Tim knew Mark would post tonight. Will underestimated Finn's hurt and immaturity. Carlo is used to getting his way and his attempt at getting back at Will through Finn was not very smart. Travis is a hot mess.
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While it hasn't happened yet in the US, more than half the world has already welcomed the new year! So Happy New Year to all the GA family around the world.
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I'm really glad that the boys are adjusting so well and got a good report from their therapists.
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murmur - Word of the Day - Mon Dec 29, 2025
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
Daddydavek commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
"I shook my head gently, at Charlie, got up, excused myself and thanked them for their company." Louis was the gentleman, Charlie, his aunt, uncle, the waiters and others were inexcusably rude. Charlie apologized and explained his own predicament, and Louis was generous and offered him a place to stay the night. That it turned out a bit intimate was a bonus. -
The 1965 Buick Riviera was memorable. It was a really cool car. One of the guys I hung out with got to drive his dad's to prom. I was so jealous. I drove the family Ford. Will and Travis are able to talk through their problems when in bed together.... not sure how well that works long distance. And yes, in the St. Louis area, people still often ask where you went to high school?! More please.
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Merry Christmas Everyone Here On GA!
Daddydavek replied to Sherye Story Reader's topic in The Lounge
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A wonderful weekend and a very nice gift of another chapter! Thanks and Merry Christmas to all, and to all good night!
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Either, as long as it's crispy. Fruitcake soaked in rum or brandy?
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The esoteric title grabbed them!
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I also don't see Claire letting Josh go through a reenactment of the crash....
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